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51 家 Family Cultivation of Immortals: Li Clan of Immortals A Pile of Glutinous RiceEastern Fantasy3.6M WordsCompleted 31.3kReads8.1Score2.2kShelves

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[Immortal bones fall into the world, fireworks enter the eyebrows | "The Legend of Nine Provinces Immortals"] Lu Heng stepped on the mountain fog and descended to the earth, and the mountain wind swept his immortal spirit. He saw an old man fishing by the stream, a farmer whipping an ox and trampling on the mud, and a washerwoman laughing and splashing silver beads - these fireworks under the mountain were a hundred times more vivid than the "Human Chronicles" he had read a thousand times. The aimless steps stopped at the entrance of Qingfeng Town, where the bluestone road glowed with the warm light of the world. Who would have thought that this leisurely journey would turn out to be the first chapter of destiny? The jade plaque left behind by the Immortal Gate, the rumors of the "Princess of the Fairy" accidentally heard in the tea shed, the peach blossom with dew on the flower basket on the street corner... When the young man picked up his clothes and stepped across the threshold, he didn't know that this small town was hiding the entire Jiuzhou for him.

53 财 The Wealth Immortal Has Arrived You Zi YinEastern Fantasy1.8M WordsCompleted 25.3kReads8.9Score2.1kShelves

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[Immortal bones fall into the world, fireworks enter the eyebrows | "The Legend of Nine Provinces Immortals"] Lu Heng stepped on the mountain mist and descended to earth, and the mountain wind swept his immortal spirit. He saw an old man fishing by the stream, a farmer whipping an ox and trampling on the mud, and a washerwoman laughing and splashing silver beads - these fireworks under the mountain were a hundred times more vivid than the "Human Chronicles" he had read a thousand times. The aimless steps stopped at the entrance of Qingfeng Town, where the bluestone road glowed with the warm light of the world. Who would have thought that this leisurely journey would turn out to be the first chapter of destiny? The jade plaque left behind by the Immortal Gate, the rumors of the "Princess of the Fairy" accidentally heard in the tea shed, the peach blossom with dew on the flower basket on the street corner... When the young man picked up his clothes and stepped across the threshold, he didn't know that this small town was hiding the entire Jiuzhou for him.

55 团 The Jiang Family's Beloved Little Daughter Can Work Immortal Magic March in Fragrant BloomAncient Romance1.0M WordsCompleted 53.4kReads9.5Score7.2kShelves

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The first one is being pursued! Super fast paced, no drag at all! If you like a fast pace, you can watch it! And neither the male or female protagonist is mute! ! Say something! ! The second one is super sweet! ! ! When I saw it, I thought, the male protagonist is super handsome! Highly recommended! The third book is also super good! ! The author has filled in all the pitfalls very well! Like it very much! The heroine is very inspiring! I really like the heroine!

57 摆 After Escaping Her Maidservant Status, She Became Obsessed with Making Money Behave YourselfAncient Romance695k WordsCompleted 84.6kReads9.2Score8.9kShelves

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Okay, so this passage paints an opening scene full of tension and country feel. It successfully sets up suspense and introduces two key characters. We can understand and continue it like this: **Scene Analysis:** 1. **Atmosphere Creation:** "March Day" and "Barren and Green Field Ridges" point out the early spring and the rural environment, a unique atmosphere intertwined with vitality and desolation. "Running like crazy", "messy steps", "falling a few times", "moving forward in confusion" strongly convey the girl's extreme panic, fear or urgency. 2. **Character introduction:** * **Running girl:** Wearing a "grey jacket", indicating the season and possible family background. Her actions are the central driving force, and her shouts are the tipping point of suspense. She ran to Chen Shiyi desperately, showing that Chen Shiyi was the only person she relied on or could solve the problem at the moment. Her discomfiture (falling, confusion) heightens the urgency of the situation. * **Chen Shiyi:** He is chopping firewood on the hillside behind him, which outlines the image of a hard-working and simple rural youth. "Immediately stopping his hands that were working quickly" indicates that he responded quickly and his attention was attracted, suggesting that he may be an alert or caring person. His name "Eleven" has the characteristics of the era or region. 3. **Core of suspense:** "Eleven, Eleven, something big happened!"——This sentence is the core. Readers, like Eleven, are eager to know: **What big deal? **Who did it happen to? Why is the girl so frightened? The suspense immediately grabs the reader's attention. 4. **Detailed depiction:** "Fast working hands", "Looking towards the source of the sound" These details make Chen Shiyi's image more concrete and vivid. **Possible continuation direction (for your reference):** 1. **Chen Shiyi's reaction:** * He may have recognized the girl's voice immediately and called out her name: "Xiao Cui? What's wrong?!" There was surprise and a hint of uneasiness in his voice. * His heart may have tightened, and he subconsciously clenched the hatchet in his hand, scanning the direction in which the girl was running sharply to see if there was any danger following. * He quickly put down the hatchet or stuck it on the bundle of firewood, and walked quickly or trotted towards the field ridge, trying to shorten the distance and get the news faster. * His expression will change instantly, from focused on labor to solemn and worried. 2. **Girl's condition:** * When she finally ran down the slope, or when Eleven met her, she was probably out of breath, her face was pale (or flushed), her hair was messy and stained with mud (due to wrestling). * She may have directly grabbed Eleven's arm, as if grasping a life-saving straw, her body still shaking from running and fear. * Her words will be intermittent and full of panic: "Ten... Brother Eleven... No... Something's wrong... Something happened at home... At home!... Father/mother/brother/sister... He/she...!" (You need to fill in the specific characters and events here) 3. **Revelation of "big things" (core):** This is a key turning point in the development of the story. Possible "big events" include: * **Family accidents:** A relative becomes seriously ill suddenly, accidentally injured (such as falling, being injured by farm tools), or dying suddenly. * **Natural and man-made disasters:** The house accidentally caught fire, and important livestock (cows and pigs that depended on survival) died or were stolen. * **External threats:** There are vicious outsiders breaking into the home, extremely serious conflicts with neighbors (which may involve violence), extremely bad official news (such as military conscription, bad news). * **Social events:** In the context of that specific era, they may involve sudden impacts brought about by some movements or policies (such as sudden house raids, criticism, forced conscription, etc.). * **Personal Crisis:** Involving the girl's own unspoken emergency (but based on her direct call to Eleven, saying "something big happened", it feels more like a shared family crisis). 4. **Chen Shiyi's follow-up actions:** * After hearing the news, he will react immediately. If it was a family accident or natural disaster, he would throw down the firewood, grab the girl and run home. * If it is an external threat, he may first assess the situation, pick up a hatchet as self-defense, and then decide whether to go back or seek other help. * His actions will reveal his character: Are he decisive and brave, or cautious? Do you have your own opinion when things happen, or do you get panicked? **Example of how to continue:** > On a March day, on the barren green field ridge, a girl wearing a gray jacket ran wildly, her footsteps messy. Although she fell a few times along the way, she couldn't stop her chaotic progress. > "Eleven, Eleven, something big happened!" > > Chen Shiyi, who was chopping firewood halfway up the mountain behind, immediately stopped working quickly, with the hatchet still hanging in the air. He followed the crying cry, his sharp eyes penetrated the sparse branches, and locked onto the gray figure stumbling on the field ridge - it was the grass next door! > >My heart sank suddenly. Xiaocao has always been timid and quiet. How had he ever seen her so lost? Chen Shiyi wedged the hatchet into the tree trunk at his feet. He didn't care about the bundled firewood and rushed down the slope with three steps at a time. The gravel and dead branches under his feet crackled under his feet. > > "Xiaocao! Run slowly! Be careful of falling again! What's going on?!" He shouted as he ran, with uncontrollable anxiety in his voice. > > Xiaocao finally rolled and threw herself at the bottom of the slope. She looked up and saw Eleven rushing down. As if she had exhausted her last bit of strength, her legs went limp and she collapsed on the ground. Her chest heaved violently and she could hardly speak a complete sentence. Her face was covered with mud, tears mixed with sweat dripping down her face, her fingers dug into the soil, and her whole body shook like a dead leaf in the wind. > > "Ten... Brother Eleven... Wu..." She finally took a breath, and her voice was broken, "... My father... My father..." > > Chen Eleven had rushed forward, squatted down and held her thin shoulders, his tentacles were cold: "What's wrong?! Tell me!" > > "... Fell... From... The beam..." Xiaocao cried out loudly, and the huge fear finally broke through her throat, "Bleeding... A lot of blood... Can't move... Shouting... My mother is going crazy... Brother Eleven... Help!" >> Chen Shixi felt a cold air rushing from the soles of his feet to the top of his head. Uncle Wang! There was a buzz in his mind, and before he could think about it, he stood up suddenly and pulled Xiaocao up from the ground: "Let's go! Go home!" He almost dragged Xiaocao towards the village and ran with all his strength. In the early spring afternoon that was quiet just a moment ago, the only thing left now was the heavy breathing of the two people and the muffled sound of their messy running footsteps on the resurrected land. The echo of "something big happened" seemed to be weighing heavily on his heart, urging every step to be faster, and faster. **Summary:** The beginning you provided is very successful, with a strong visual sense, well-set suspense, and distinct character actions. The next key is: 1. **Clear what the "big thing" is:** This is the core that drives the plot. 2. **Describe the character's immediate reaction under a huge impact:** Language, actions, and demeanor should be consistent with their character and situation. 3. **Maintain tension and rhythm:** Continuing the sense of urgency at the beginning, the readers' hearts are hanging with Eleven and Xiaocao. 4. **Showing character relationships:** Further reveal the depth of the relationship between Shiyi and Xiaocao (or other family members) through their reactions in moments of crisis. Keep writing, this beginning has great potential!

58 问 Asked About He Changsheng Mo BujianEastern Fantasy67k WordsOngoing 2Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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You might as well give this book a try. The writing is very good and the plot is compact. I highly recommend it.

59 裂 Sunlight Through the Cracks Reclining in the NorthUrban169k WordsCompleted 127kReads9.8Score14.2kShelves

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They are all top-notch Tomatoes. If you don't accept it, why don't you come and argue? ? ? (The first one is a short article that I like very much. Although the logic of the writing is a little immature, the true feelings are revealed, and the key points are very sweet!!!)

60 环 Pacific Rim - Great Wall Watch The Sky Is so HighSci-Fi & Apocalypse637k WordsCompleted 3.8kReads5.8Score379Shelves

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They are all top-notch Tomatoes. If you are not convinced, come and argue? ? ? (The first one is a short article that I like very much. Although the logic of the writing is a little immature, the true feelings are revealed, and the key points are very sweet!!!)

79 宠 A Favored Concubine? The Cousin Miss Is the Living Ancestor of the Duke’s Household The Vinegar Jar Who Loves RiceAncient Romance630k WordsCompleted 2.3kReads7.7Score255Shelves

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Just borrow this topic, tweet it and read it as you like.

84 小 My Little Martial Uncle Really Doesn't Push Herself. She Just Wants to Kill the Female Lead Mo CaiweiAncient Romance1.0M WordsCompleted 85.6kReads9.5Score11kShelves

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The first one I recommend is super good-looking. The heroine kills the original heroine at the beginning. The second heroine is such a cute little dumpling.

86 好 Is That Supposed to Be Funny? All I See Is a Desperate Copycat Jiang YuqiaoModern Romance326k WordsCompleted 28.6kReads9.4Score4.2kShelves

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Every book is super beautiful

90 开 At the Beginning, Use the Rubik's Cube World to Imprison All Mankind. Brother Le Reads NovelsUrban150k WordsOngoing 4Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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[Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Laugh]

91 分 I Copied so Hard on the Placement Test That I Got Admitted to the Ao Class. Mix SaltModern Romance188k WordsOngoing 70Reads7.3Score—Shelves

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If you are not interested in reading this book, then you are a ruthless person. I trust you🤓🤓This is a plot played by a certain blogger. Many people like to read it and then it was written into a novel. It is very sweet. There are many parts of the plot that are very refreshing and worth pondering. Facing the teacher who is deliberately criticizing, the top student comes to the rescue. It is really relaxing to watch😆😆😆The new look is tied to death. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh can everyone go and watch it.