A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?
I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.
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I have to say that this book is very in line with my taste. Both the setting and the characters are described to my aesthetic point. It is very cute and sweet. The description of the love between the male and female protagonists is my favorite part. The main plot of the story is also quite exciting, with ups and downs and exciting moments! Good book highly recommended.
This novel tells the story of the creation goddess Ling tide who endured a calamity with a demonic injury, was secretly protected by Xuan Chen, met the fox fairy and tamed Baize, and inherited her parents' will to protect the six realms during the trial. The protection of family is wrapped up in the entanglement of fate, and redemption is seen in the bones and blood of the immortal. This story has poignant characters and a touching plot. It is sure to be a hit!
"The Lingxi Tribulation" is so satisfying! The battle between immortals and demons lays out a grand background, and the main line of Lingxi connects delicate family and love, especially the love between the male and female protagonists is heart-breakingly sweet~ The opening is novel and full of foreshadowing, the characters are vivid, and the rhythm is tight. It is easy to read, the structure is complete and magnificent, you can't stop watching it, and I highly recommend it with five stars!
This is a masterpiece of fairy tales with a heroine as the core! A mortal girl with a demonic wound rebels against her fate with a sword. Against the grand background of the battle between immortals and demons, family redemption and fateful sadomasochism are intertwined in a heart-stirring way. The author's writing style is elegant and delicate, and the atmosphere of the six realms and the emotions of the characters are very contagious. The fighting scenes are stunning, and the companionship of the spiritual beasts is heartwarming. Readers who like fairy tales with a heroine growing up, deep emotions, and a broad perspective should not miss this sincere book!
"Lingxi Tribulation" is so easy to follow! The battle between immortals and demons lays out a grand background, and the main line of Lingxi connects delicate family, love and friendship, creating a full sense of immersion. The novel opening is full of foreshadowing, the structure, characters, and plot are all online, the rhythm is compact and magnificent, you can't help but be immersed in it while reading, five-star Amway, stay tuned!
The description of the heroine Lingxi is interesting and vivid! The author writes very well. I have been listening to it for two days and gave it a five-star rating! Encourage the owners to continue writing, it's worth updating, and I look forward to better writing!
The article is based on the war between immortals and demons, starting with Ling tide as the main line. The author's description of family, love, and friendship in the article is very delicate and in place, making it easy for people to get involved. The structure is complete, the plot is compact, the logic is rigorous and clear, and the protagonist's personality is very distinct and tense. It is one of the few fairy and demon novels that I have read with the heroine as the main line. It is very good-looking and highly recommended! ! !
The fate of the three realms is intertwined, the love of the immortal and the heroic! A mortal girl with a demonic wound wields a sword to fight off evil. The redemption of family and the sadomasochism of fairies and demons both poke at the heart. The famous scenes of companionship with spirit beasts + fighting skills are super touching. The antique brushwork fills the atmosphere of the Six Realms. You can't stop after staying up all night~
A very novel opening setting, the battle between gods and demons sets the tone of the story, and also lays the foundation for the protagonist Lingxi, kicking off a grand drama with ups and downs.
This is my first time writing and I have no experience. Please give me some guidance and criticism [Blow kiss]
Very good. From the overall structure, character setting, background, plot development, story progress and other aspects, it is very attractive. I look forward to more exciting things!
It is thrilling but also filled with sweetness and warmth. The author's writing is superb and the story is very interesting.
This is the first time I have read a fantasy novel in which a woman is the main protagonist. It is very novel, the writing is delicate, and the emotions are deep. Great support for the author!
The author's writing is lively and interesting, and the heroes and heroines are vividly portrayed. It's a good novel.