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A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.

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224 On the Second Wedding Day, My Ex-Husband Knelt at the Wedding Venue South Star Writes StoriesModern Romance355k WordsCompleted 18Reads—Score—Shelves
224 Between Tenderness and Violence Rice Cake with Cheese Filling148k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newcomers and new books, let's review each other
224 Traveling to an Ancient Food Desert: the Sisters Went Crazy Killing Each Other Yantang RiverAncient Romance107k WordsCompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one was written by me. It is a food group portrait. There is no vicious female supporting role, only the beautiful mutual help of the girls and their kindness to the disadvantaged.
225 Ten Thousand Taels of Gold Deep in the MazeHistorical136k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first volume is already a complete story, and I am currently writing the second volume
225 Doomsday Puzzle: Six Pieces South Star Writes StoriesFantastical Romance270k WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves
226 I Open a Small Restaurant in Shengjing Four BayberryAncient Romance381k WordsCompleted 32.3kReads9.4Score4.8kShelves
226 Guixu Zhuan Happy Original IntentionEastern Fantasy3.9M WordsCompleted 1.6kReads5.8Score152Shelves
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Nearly four million words, a huge world view, and everyone has their brains
226 Voices from the Twins: Mommy Is so Excited South Star Writes StoriesModern Romance219k WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves
226 Thangka Ghost Record FlowingMystery315k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Digging up treasures and folklore suspense! Using Thangka as a guide, he writes about the thousands of years of Sino-Tibetan entanglements. When Tashi kept secrets of the Tang Dynasty, he never fought against ghosts, but the greed that everyone has. The plot is compact and has no irritation, the Tibetan style is full of charm, and the twist in the ending directly touches people's hearts. The book is full of novels with your eyes closed!
226 Divine Realm RuilunEastern Fantasy153k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Good health, good health can be a meow
227 Celestial Phase Can I Give You My Life?Eastern Fantasy2.0M WordsCompleted 22.3kReads9.0Score2.3kShelves
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I work very hard to recommend good books to everyone, and I also work very hard on writing books. If you are still struggling, you might as well take a minute to read my humble work [making a face]
227 When the Moon Returns YiyueyunFantastical Romance100k WordsCompleted 3Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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~(￣▽￣~)~
227 The Abandoned Woman's Mental Diagnosis Revealed That All Members of Her Husband's Family Were Seriously Ill. South Star Writes StoriesAncient Romance172k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
228 The Grand Performance of Saint Julianne If There Is a Dragon, It Is NamedEastern Fantasy199k WordsCompleted 10Reads—Score—Shelves
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10,000 Words updated every day, nearly 15,000 words
228 One Thousand Years of Mistakes, and All the Buddhas and Demons Will Be Hers! He Quanguo24k WordsCompleted 3Reads8.4Score—Shelves
229 Mortal Cultivation of Immortality Wutong YouyouEastern Fantasy5.0M WordsOngoing 138.5kReads8.9Score9.8kShelves
229 I'll Kill You in My Memories Junyi AcridineModern Romance77k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please read what the child wrote.
229 Xuanmu Immortal Clan Fellow Taoist Lu YaEastern Fantasy78k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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After reading a lot of novels, I want to write a novel according to my own ideas. I hope you can taste it. The first chapter is a bit long-winded.
229 Snow Valley Frost Margin: Medical Mind Reflects History Love 525Ancient Romance85k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I like the books written by the author of my friend. The writing is very green hahahaha. The first one is pure sweetness without any ruthlessness and has many details. The second one is a little more mature and the plot is quite interesting hahahahaha. I hope everyone can read it. The young writer is very sincere hahahahaha.
230 Warhammer: Edgewalker Agares' Spider Web1.1M WordsOngoing 2.1kReads6.0Score205Shelves
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The newcomer's new book will be over 900,000 words long. If you are a fan of "Warhammer: Rogue Trader", please give it a try. The third volume has been completed and the fourth volume has started. Congratulations to the Bridegroom·Volume 3 The heroes bid farewell. Several more difficult problems appeared and were listed one after another. The eternal battle has been urgently blocked. How to defeat it is nothing more than a few cold and heat attacks. The grand expedition was like clouds and smoke, and we gathered firewood to spend the long night in order to stay warm. But remember, don't be timid. The journey was rugged and covered with frost and snow, but the strong wind remained the same and refused to rest. The divine miracles of the God-Emperor's power are fulfilled time and time again. How to distinguish between loyal and traitorous people? After the Lion King Khan disappears, who can move mountains? One foot trembles, and everyone stumbles.
230 Teacher Gu, Your Teacher's Ethics Are Worrisome. Little Hedgehog's Bread Crab256k WordsCompleted 1kReads8.1Score140Shelves
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Asking for review [blowing kiss]
230 Sharing Mountains and Rivers at Dusk Love 525Ancient Romance155k WordsCompleted —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
230 Water Moon Dream Fairy Holy Emperor Snow LotusMystery167k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I am a new writer, but I am a bookworm for many years. I have read countless novels, so as a Pisces, I plan to write a novel about cultivating immortals in my mind. If any kind-hearted people can read it and comment on it, you can also leave comments if you recommend the novel. I have not read a novel that is not a classic [laughter]
231 In the End of the World, She Was Robbed by All the Major Lords Mu MuqiSci-Fi & Apocalypse261k WordsOngoing 1.7kReads5.8Score300Shelves
231 Freshman: I Can't Hide My Vampire Identity Anymore Starry Sky Source SnowUrban599k WordsOngoing 3Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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These two books are very good and have very different styles.
232 Astral Witness MagagaEastern Fantasy105k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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I also want to promote it [crying]
232 Emperor Ji Jingshi Lu Starry Sky Source SnowEastern Fantasy428k WordsOngoing 12Reads5.8Score—Shelves
232 Twelve Cave Ridge Night CharmMystery81k WordsOngoing 2Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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The first one is mine, and the rest are basically pretty good too. I also have a supernatural novel. If you are interested, can you read it? Thank you! New author. We are all ordinary people. Please support me! Thanks!
233 Taboo for Living People Theft of a House with Nine HeadsMystery1.9M WordsCompleted 15.9kReads9.2Score1.9kShelves
233 Green Heart Sword Jue Clam 123Eastern Fantasy93k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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A 16-year-old high school student who suffers from a mental disorder writes a novel at home. It is the first time he has written 80,000 words. The logic may not be smooth in the early stage, but it will get better later. Please support me... No cp, no cp, Green Heart Sword Jue, ruthless swordsmanship, ups and downs, my life is not worried, I hope someone can read it, comment and like it, thank you all.
233 The World Is in Chaos with Amnesia at the Beginning Chic Handsome Guy TUrban546k WordsOngoing 42Reads—Score—Shelves
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Come, come, help each other
234 Patroller BanditMystery1.7M WordsCompleted 55.8kReads9.1Score7.5kShelves
234 Boss White Lotus Insists on Being My Follower Rat 1 Rat190k WordsOngoing 170Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Two men and two strong men + rivals descended from heaven + pure ancient group portraits + Jianghu immortals ~
234 With Ten Years Left to Live, I Still Draw My Sword for Shushan Arable Fields in Peach Blossom SpringEastern Fantasy512k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Digged up an underrated Xian Xia. [Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts] Advantages: The protagonist is calm and strategic, the supporting characters are flesh and blood, and the battle scenes are very strong. Disadvantages: The plot is a bit slow at the beginning, but becomes more exciting as it goes on, and the plot is compact and exciting. Suitable for: Readers who prefer hard-core fairy tales, like delicate depictions, and can accept slow-burning foreshadowing. Not suitable for: Readers who only read fast-paced and refreshing articles and pursue mindless crushing.
235 Soul Ferry: the Last Corpse Collector in the World Silent NightMystery4.5M WordsOngoing 265.1kReads9.4Score25.6kShelves
235 Reshaping the World Starts with Picking up a White Cat Girl Maple Leaf WeiliangUrban259k WordsOngoing 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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The writing may not be very good at the beginning, but I don't know how to change it. It will become more and more exciting later on. I still want everyone to read it.
235 New Hope Unnamed Wooden ManEastern Fantasy209k WordsOngoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is my first time writing a novel, and I don't know if I can make it to the end.
236 Taboo 2 Theft of a House with Nine HeadsUrban1.7M WordsCompleted 5.1kReads9.1Score564Shelves
236 Succubus Lord: Unlock the Defeated Queen CG at the Beginning The Shortage of Books Is WaterEastern Fantasy176k WordsOngoing 19Reads5.8Score—Shelves
236 The First Canon of Hehuan Sect Thief 66Eastern Fantasy91k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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After reading all the books written on the board, I also wrote one on a whim. The more I wrote, the more I felt inferior to myself.
237 The End Is Coming? I'll Come First! Ban Mian Wang ZaiSci-Fi & Apocalypse2.7M WordsCompleted 546.1kReads9.2Score55.7kShelves
237 Treacherous House The Sound of Wind and Rain at NightMystery2.1M WordsCompleted 946.4kReads9.6Score115.7kShelves
237 Laughing Through the Dangerous Fairy Road Smoking and Sleepless NightsEastern Fantasy385k WordsOngoing 220Reads—Score—Shelves
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The new book is hand-written and the coding is not easy. Thank you for your support! ... Thank you for your support
238 The Lost City of Alien Beasts PengpaiUrban3.0M WordsCompleted 547.2kReads9.7Score93.1kShelves
238 The Greatest Chaos in the World of Immortality Ban Mian Wang ZaiEastern Fantasy2.7M WordsCompleted 170kReads9.5Score20kShelves
238 Yunchuan Knife Shop I Am Alone and Poor NowEastern Fantasy142k WordsOngoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
239 There Was No Scandal About the School Beauty Until I Went to College Whining Across the ArmUrban3.0M WordsCompleted 467.9kReads9.8Score56.4kShelves
239 Royal Gold Magistrate Ban Mian Wang ZaiHistorical2.7M WordsCompleted 412.6kReads9.5Score64.6kShelves
239 The Tomb Belongs to the Owner Cats Are Not Afraid of SufferingAncient Romance325k WordsCompleted 95Reads8.2Score—Shelves
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I want it too [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]
239 Secret War of Dust Believe That the Afterglow Is the DawnUrban77k WordsCompleted 18Reads5.8Score—Shelves