The End Is Coming? I'll Come First!

I think this book may be the pinnacle of Ban Mian, and may be the most powerful work in the apocalyptic genre. I wrote two books on Ban Mian. I think the apocalyptic theme can bring the advantages of Ban Mian to the extreme.

The pace is slow, but very interesting. I don't think it's boring or boring, and it has a lot of laughs. I look forward to the follow-up. Five stars here (PS: Wasn't the company boss a bit anti-social in the past? Each of the three novels required a wave of diss)

Well written. I won't talk about other good things, but the plot, logic, plot, and my favorite funny jokes are all going to be spoiled by everyone. I'm just talking about the heroine. It's hard to see heroines like this here elsewhere, they are all weak, beautiful and passive. The so-called love is like a collection game. I endured all the hardships and fought bravely for an epic card and finally won it. Then I put it away in my most gorgeous card box. When I think about it later, I run my fingers across its surface, and that's it. The heroine here is real, she is not a vague one among them, she is unique. This allows me to read... Romance, which is very difficult. The author evokes the pathos in my heart, and it is the kind of orthodox romance that makes people heartbroken. Thank you, come on. I probably won't be able to write this kind of book review again... RT-Mart Fish Killer's Taoist heart will never be shaken again!

Five stars for you! I have read both of them before. Quality guaranteed, really good. I like Fang Zheng's desire to change the course of the world from scratch, and I also like Mr. Xu's willingness to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. Looking forward to the follow-up content In fact, I really like the author's book. It's very humorous and imaginative. It makes you relax when you look at people. It has a unique way of getting down. Brother Hao is also a decent person [I learned] It's really interesting hahahaha I hope everyone will support Banmei more hahaha

The subject matter is more novel than those stereotyped novels, the writing style is very good, and the details are also very good. I have followed the two completed novels in front of me and loved them very much.

I can only say that Tomato is the number one fun novel. This one is at least one of the best on the Internet. The plot basically has no big problems, the rhythm is very smooth, and the character creation is very good. It can be said that everyone is vivid, the layers of each copy are very clear, and the author's creation The power is so damn rich. I can only think of three lines that are on the same level as the author in terms of imagination and fun. As long as the author can strengthen the depth and writing style, and strengthen the emotional mobilization, I think there is no problem in taking the position of the Tomato Book. Come on [Like]

I spent four days intensively chasing the book, and now I have reached 300 chapters, which is where the author has updated it. Let me talk about my personal evaluation: As an infinite flow online novel, it has the core theme of the protagonist traveling through various worlds to save and build a shelter for the children of the world before the end of the world. It has created multiple worlds with different styles. The current three worlds are zombie novels, road movies, and campus gangster themes. The theme selection is quite novel, at least I have never seen similar themes. Moreover, the author's vocabulary is quite gorgeous, many ingenious scenes are refreshing, and the funny passages make people laugh. He is definitely the most imaginative author I have ever seen. Moreover, the novel itself is also very interesting. The author is very good at writing foreshadowing, and there is no foreshadowing that has not been recycled. It can be said to be a model of refreshing writing in terms of refreshing. The author knows very well what readers want to see. Although this is the first book written by this author that I have come into contact with, he has aroused my strong interest and I will read his other works if I have the opportunity. In short, I highly recommend all the book friends who click here to try it. If you are a book friend who likes to read refreshing articles, you will not be disappointed. Now that I've finished boasting, let's talk about some areas that I think need improvement. Perhaps it is because the theme is designed in this way. The protagonist does not stay in each world for a long time, has not deep contact with the world, and is only responsible for leading the children of the world through the early stage (the second world does not even have a scene after the disaster begins). I feel that the author always feels that when designing the background of each world, there is not enough thought. Especially one place that I feel particularly uncomfortable is the birth of the disaster. I always feel that there is no foreshadowing and it is completely deus ex machina. The background of the first world is ordinary society + zombies with supernatural powers. There is nothing remarkable about it. It is easy to understand zombie viruses as alien technology. The second world is ancient martial arts, but in a world as big as yours, there are only two cultivation systems, one for physical cultivation, one for legal cultivation, and even physical cultivation. There are not many skills in the system, which is too monotonous. Let's not care about where the disaster magic spring came from in the first place. Before the disaster broke out, there was a dormant period of several decades, and there was an earthquake before the disaster broke out. These can be regarded as paving the way for the disaster to break out; in the third world, it feels "empty" The problem is even more serious. The author keeps saying that the combat system in this world is quite rich and the strength is much stronger than the previous world. However, the few battles the protagonist has experienced in this world are basically direct kills without any combat performance. Judging from the enemy's performance, the summoning system is the best. There has been a Ten-Handed Guanyin, and I have never seen him let go of his skills. The long-range type only has a sniper energy cannon, and a sky-breaking shuttle that is used as a flying knife. The strengthening type is even more simple and crude, which is to strengthen the body. This is also the only time the protagonist has a head-on confrontation with people in this world, and it is just a hand-to-hand fight? There is also the black card Death 07, which is said to have quite comprehensive functions, but I still don't know what the specific functions of that black card are? The most terrible thing is that there is no preparation for the disaster in this world. You said that all the plants in the world mutated in just a few minutes, and once they mutated, they became perfect. There are all kinds of species. Can you give an explanation for the source of the disaster? I can't think of any logically consistent reason at all. If you insist on saying that the disaster is caused by chaos, and you can't give a reason, then you can just use natural disasters such as meteorites to wipe out every world. Anyway, meteorites are not a particularly high-end disaster type, and I can't think of how the company should deal with it. I'm not picky about what I read, as long as it's logically consistent and enjoyable enough, even if there are some loopholes, I can automatically fill them in with my brain. But there are some parts of this book that are not logically consistent. I felt really uncomfortable reading it, just like ordering a bowl of braised beef noodles and finding out that there was no beef in it.

All I can say is that it's really fucking beautiful, but can the author have more emotional scenes? [Crying][Crying][Crying] I like the author's portrayal of the heroine, but there are too few emotional scenes. You just run away after flirting and just set fire regardless of the consequences. Can you have more emotional scenes? [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face]

Kids, we are saved. There is a new book out of Panmen! The theme of doomsday continues the exploration style of the previous novels about cultivating immortals. It is very detailed, very rigorous, and terrible. I was attracted by the board again. High moral character as always and super good looking!

The battle between the three phantom gods on the rooftop is very in-depth and the heroine's magical attack is even more amazing. I feel that the author has become addicted to his art and cannot extricate himself. It is recommended to read it while eating.

The board is indeed well-written. There are too many things to consider for a qualified novel. It is very easy for a novel that is set in the apocalypse to have an infinite flow. It is very easy to focus on one thing and miss the other, leading to matryoshka dolls. However, the author has grasped the key points of this type of novel. The description of the sense of crisis and the grand shock that an apocalyptic novel should have are written. The detailed description is also very accurate, and the logic is also very rigorous. It can be seen that he has put in a lot of effort.

Produced by Ban Mian, it must be a high-quality product! This book can clearly feel Ban Mian's innovation in story conception. Compared with the past two books, which directly traveled through time and then skipped the process of integrating into society, the beginning of this book very realistically depicts the image of a male protagonist who is suddenly transported to an alien planet and is about to face the end of the world. And the male protagonist will definitely have to travel through more worlds. This is really an innovation and breakthrough in self-writing, and I hope it can bring us more fun. The world view of the Banpan universe has also begun to take shape, and I am very much looking forward to it. The male protagonist's careful thinking, superb communication skills, and the heart of an ordinary person under the strong appearance all reflect that Banmian has reached a very high level in character creation and portrayal. Moreover, Banmian's life experience and knowledge are really extremely rich. The level of detail in the plot is unimaginable, really unimaginable. The portrayal of the supporting characters is also very realistic, and a few detailed descriptions can easily bring a person to life. The most fearful thing about the theme of the post-apocalyptic text system and monster evolution is that the follow-up development is not done well. There is no upper limit for both sides to evolve and then the values ​​​​explode. However, according to the urine of the previous book, there is no need to worry here. I completely trust the board to control the combat power value. I have to commend Ban Mian for his careful description of biological experiments. I am a biology major. In his description of experiments on apocalyptic creatures in the article, it can be seen that Ban Mian has really checked the information, including relevant animal experiments, anatomical experiments, and controlled variable methods. I feel that Ban Mian's description of the logic of experimental design is really good and awesome. This book has just started, so I will continue to follow up on it, and I look forward to it very much. The most important thing is that this book still retains Ban Mian's personal characteristics, so good [laughing evilly] Excellent support as always

A good book. For the first time in a doomsday novel, I saw a relatively rigorous logic, a well-controlled narrative, humorous language, and other character creations that are rare in online books. A relatively novel doomsday theme, please go to the author

What I feel most about this novel is that it is real. It is so real. The protagonist's reaction to the apocalypse and his powerlessness and despair in the face of the destruction of the state machine are so well written that it is not enough for anyone to read. Such braille is enough for anyone to read [smile]

The most detailed and interesting post-apocalyptic novel you can see. What I can give you is that every chapter is meaningful. There are no brainless and vicious neighbors, and there is no pretentious male protagonist. The stern prince plays a stable role. One apocalypse and one world view, not falling into the trap of the past, and at the same time not delaying the progress of the story, leaving plenty of room for web writers [heartfelt]

It's a schematic book, and the details never speak for themselves. It's not brainless or holy, and the rhetorical metaphors are in place. It's just a question of whether you can do it faster! ! I've been saving it for so long, and it only takes one day to decide. It's too short [angry][angry]

The best post-apocalyptic novel I have read so far. The protagonist in the early stage is not Superman. What is outstanding about him is his quick adjustment ability and extreme self-discipline. He writes the protagonist's entanglements and reasons for struggle very well. This is the protagonist. What I want to see is not Superman's indiscriminate crushing, but a flesh-and-blood character. I said in the review that it is impossible for the protagonist not to obtain superpowers, but it is difficult to grasp how the combat power will not collapse under the accumulation of a long plot, too Being too strong is not the end of the world, being too weak is not the protagonist, and being too weak will limit the types of the end of the world. You can't keep fighting zombies. A good solution is to increase the world level. I didn't comment before, just to see how the author planned to write the follow-up. But the latest plot has introduced a new combat power system, so that the protagonist has the ability to steam, but not to gank the entire end of the world by himself. I am very satisfied. I immediately recommend it with five stars. It is a must-see.

I started reading the book from Emperor's Master with 20,000 to 300,000 words. I didn't spend a penny. The book reviews are absolutely true. I can see Ban Mian's determination to step out of the comfort zone and write new themes. The overall plot of the first world is actually average so far. It is better than Ban Mian's writing style. I look forward to the next plot direction. The follow-up plot is good, and the plot has successfully broken half of the comfort zone. The only drawback for me is that the protagonist has parents (purely personal opinion, other than that it is very interesting)

It's okay. I can read it. The book is really good. The only fly in the ointment is that they seem to like to speak pornographically and the like [face covering] What's very nb is that the board seems to be the only one I've seen so far that doesn't smear or insult txl. The first copy depicts a Nantong character teammate, but there is no discrimination, insult, or all kinds of inexplicable tastes or stereotypes in words and deeds. On the contrary, it is the same as the normal character creation, and it also expresses that txl is also a normal person, not a disease, and his three views are super positive [laughing and crying] The pace is too slow. The essence of the game is to travel quickly and travel through different worlds to save the apocalypse. But the game is too slow. At the 80th chapter of the third dungeon world, it is still arranging various operations and has not entered the main storyline.

After reading Chapter 14, my ability to control the rhythm of the board is getting stronger and stronger, and it is fascinating at the beginning👏Keep up the good work and give me more! !

This book is very good, the plot is interesting, not monotonous, and not repetitive. It is a rare good book. But I feel that the description of the end of the world in the novel is a bit weak, and it fails to express the despair of the end of the world very well. I can only know that it seems to be quite miserable, but how miserable it is specifically, I can't sympathize with it. Therefore, I think that the description of the end of the world can give some ink to people who are experiencing the end of the world and facing despair, so that they can have a better sense of survival in the end of the world and make it easier for readers to resonate. . . I really think this is a good book and could be written better [Like][Like][Like]

I entered the trap from Lijiacun, and later I read the first Emperor's Master, and I can see that the author's writing has improved a lot. In the first Imperial Master, Fang Zhengyi, he was still very weak in characterization. But in Xushan, it seems that he can portray a vivid but real protagonist. Here, Su Jin also inherited the fine tradition and has new ingenuity. The author probably also realized that he was not yet proficient in controlling the new map. This book uses this kind of replica-based world structure, and the plot can be controlled well. It really makes use of strengths and avoids weaknesses, and it is still enjoyable. This book really has a promising future, Hao Kan!

Good review! Brainless and cool article. The first two books scored very well and this one must be very good too!

Haha, the third book I am following is still in the style of Ban Mian. I wonder if I can make some suggestions here, that is, every world feels like there must be a girl who likes the male protagonist. Although this is also a major attraction and can promote the development of the story, it always feels a bit weird. ! Hope the board can see it! ! ! When I was reading the novel, I read many chapter reviews and found that many book friends also had reactions including but not limited to "I feel a little tired of seeing relationships between men and women in every world", "I found that every world has to flirt with women", "Is it impossible to write about women without women", "Does every world have to have a female protagonist", "Will there be uncomfortable plots like Shura Fields in the end". I don't dislike the plot of the story, but I like it very much. Anyway, it's still the original style of the story, hilarious haha. But there is also a need for a female protagonist to mix it up in every world. I am really tired of it. I don't dare to think about whether there will be a scene where a group of female protagonists are fighting after the world is connected. On the contrary, I feel that the relationship between the second and third male characters in each world is not so strong. They all have a particularly good relationship with the female protagonist. There could be more plots about the good relationship between the second and third male characters.

What a masterpiece! The content of the story is not procrastinating, the plot is compact and there is no word "water", it is funny and tender, and the protagonist's IQ is adequate, neither a virgin nor a stallion. I never thought Rotten Tomatoes would have such a masterpiece [please update][please update]

This novel is indeed interesting, especially when it is written that Zhang Fei fought against Voldemort for 300 rounds in Changban Slope to protect Lin Daiyu, but Thanos' snap of his fingers was too bad. If Conan hadn't kicked the football to create a buff that said "there is only one truth", this wave of Avada Kedavra would have wiped out the whole group. But what I appreciate the most is what Tang Seng said to the seven fairies of Water Curtain Cave: "Fairies have a bit of a temper, don't play tricks in front of the poor monk." It vividly depicts Tang Seng's grievance when the fairy smashed out his bag with a peach core. In a word, this book is very imaginative, the level is stable enough, and there are enough hidden clues. The fight scene is comparable to the IMAX giant screen, and the characters are unforgettable!

1. It is originally a male video (so the male perspective is very strong); 2. The setting of the male protagonist is very realistic and charming (the character has many shining points, but also many shortcomings); 3. Although it can be regarded as a refreshing article, it is not entirely enjoyable, and not all plots are in line with imagination (there are still many incomprehensible and slightly speechless plots, but the whole text is still mostly exciting and funny); 4. The logic is handled in great detail (some logical issues that are rarely noticed in other articles will be noticed by the author, but I am not sure whether some theoretical logic is nonsense or real, but it looks very logical and detailed anyway); PS: This is just an evaluation based on my own reading experience and is not meant to be a guide. Personally, I believe that authors should have complete control over their own writing. Character settings, writing style, plot, etc. Do not need to be affected by readers.

Plot rating summary The World of Soldiers S+ The protagonist's growth, transformation and survival Tianwu World C Collection of Harem Copy Elemental Card World A+ Hilarious Advertisement Asylum World SS+ I took on the role of Tianhao, and there is no doubt that the plot is perfect. Special Mission B: Brother Hao pretends to be the best in the world and gets superpowers Emperor's Master Future World D- Foreshadowing that the Fang family is the rear area, the plot is so-so Yuanmai World S The son-in-law turns over, Brother Hao is the man you can't have

A very wonderful novel, one should be read ten times. There are different worlds that continue to bring freshness to readers, and there is also a main line and growth as the core that runs through the whole story. It can be read as a complete story while constantly feeling new excitement. To write a story like this well is not just to come up with a few ideas and make up a beginning, but to connect these worlds together, and constantly change and deepen with the protagonist's ability and cognitive growth. The author has a clear outline to control the direction of the story. The overall rhythm is very smooth, and I personally think it is very excellent.

The familiar taste is still very friendly! The laughter in the book is as dense as stars, the plots are interlocking and logical, and the characters' dialogues fit their personalities and flow naturally. Each character is vivid and full of life on the page, and the story is so exciting that people will be deeply involved in it and find it difficult to extricate themselves. [Understood] Tomato's first doomsday is scheduled.