Mortal Cultivation of Immortality

I read it every few days when I had free time, and finally saw the latest chapter. Let me share my feelings about this book. First of all, A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality pays more attention to logic than many other immortality novels, and the contents are interlocking. Although there are some minor plot errors, they can all be corrected or explained. Secondly, the novel conforms to the set world background, including culture, ethics, etiquette, customs, social concepts, etc. For example, the protagonist has to kowtow constantly, and the etiquette mentality of higher-level cultivators, etc. However, in order to highlight the protagonist's arrogance, many other online novels will use various reasons to avoid the protagonist from kneeling and kowtow when meeting the boss or elders, even if he is an undercover agent. Thirdly, the characters echo back and forth, and the overall plot is tactfully convoluted and fascinating. Of course, there are also shortcomings, such as too many retrospective and repetitive descriptions, and some illustrative descriptions that are sometimes repetitive and procrastinating, but these do not have an essential impact on the book, and the flaws cannot be concealed. Overall, this book can be regarded as a masterpiece so far. If it had been published 10 years earlier, the author would have become a master of online literature with this book.

Having read so many novels, as far as I am concerned, this one is pretty good. Cultivation of immortality is cruel, killing all living beings at every turn, but there is also iron-blooded tenderness, instead of cultivating immortality and becoming a murderous demon without blinking an eye. There are also highlights in the plot, and many characters can be remembered after reading them. This is really rare. Many novels can be read from beginning to end, except for the male protagonist or the female protagonist, and they don't understand anything else! Just like a woman's foot-binding, one copy has more than a hundred chapters and it's not over yet. The plot is very dragging and difficult to follow.

This is the most comfortable book I have read this year. Some of the fireworks in the world are real and the plot is quite good in some places. I hope it will keep up.

Very interesting, good luck to the author! Optimistic about you

The routines of Mortal Style have been written for a long time. The author's success lies in the slow pace, delicate writing style and online IQ. It has the shadow of Jin Yong Gulong. I think this book is definitely the number one Tomato Mortal Style novel about cultivating immortals. As for the next-door "Mortal Flying Immortal", although the plot is grand and somewhat in-depth, the writing is poor, the protagonist upgrades too quickly, and there are many female characters, so it is still slightly inferior. Writing and wit are the two most important and most difficult elements to achieve in online articles today. Come on, author, give me five stars for your support.

As a long-time reader, I think this book gives me the feeling of novelty: it is not as boring as a system novel that is invincible at the beginning, it is not as insulting to IQ as a harem novel, and it is not as brainless as a novice novel. Although the writing is mediocre at the beginning, the subsequent story is really exciting. I hope the author can give us more and more surprises and let us see a very exciting novel.

The logic is rigorous and the protagonist is well portrayed. Only those who are wise, courageous and virtuous can be favored by God and achieve greatness!

"A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" is well written. Compared with "A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", it has a delicate plot, grand scenes, many characters, richer character descriptions, relatively independent language expressions, more plot logic design and foreshadowing, and the author has a deeper literary foundation. It's just that there are many chapters. Because most readers only read for the sake of reading, many readers feel unhappy because they can't get a glimpse of the subsequent ending. Therefore, I hope the author can make the overall chapter planning of the entire book more concise to facilitate dissemination. As for the far-reaching portrayal of characters and scenes, there are "Dream of Red Mansions", while those with closer portrayal of characters include "White Deer Plain" and "Yongzheng Dynasty". It may be wrong, just for reference.

The storyline is okay, a bit nostalgic, and the character of the protagonist is also good. The best thing is that there is no ridicule, but the plot progress is too slow, and the number of words is relatively small. It is okay to keep the book, but it is definitely boring to chase the book! Overall, it is not bad!

What I appreciate the most is that there is a plot in which war turns into friendship. This is the fairy tale in my mind. It is straightforward enough to enjoy grudges and grudges, rather than the farce of some villains who kill their colleagues for petty profits. The strong are not arrogant, they know not to leave trouble behind, they are ruthless but also tender.

It's very interesting. Cultivation of immortality is not all about skills and magical powers. There are other interesting things. Although it seems tedious, it is actually very interesting. Listening to the story is interesting, the fighting is also exciting, each battle scene is lifelike, and foundation building and elixir formation are not fixed items like the mortals' legends of cultivating immortality! This is very good. There are so many spiritual materials in the world, so why do we have to have those few, so I said it is very good. I counted the categories of weapons and magic weapons in detail. It is really wonderful. In addition, the plot is really like a Sherlock Holmes story. It is very interesting. I am willing to say that he is the best after the legend of cultivating immortals for mortals! It's okay in the early stage, but later I feel like I've become a martial artist. There are so many awesome things that it's hard to defeat monks of the same level [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face] You will know when you see it later... A group of golden elixirs take advantage of the night to sneak attack, and they need light at night, so they can sneak attack in places where they can't see it, golden elixir! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very well written. Qin Bing and Shi Feng need to arrange for them to have more adventures together so that their relationship can be cultivated. Overall, the plot and emotions tend to be bland, and the main conflict is not prominent enough. The protagonist's character should grow or change over time.

This novel is the best novel about cultivating immortals that I have read in recent years. The author is very good, the plots are fascinating, and the details are perfect. The only drawback is that one chapter is updated every day, which is really not enough to read!

The text in this book is witty and interesting, and the plot is compact and reasonable. It does not forcefully advance the plot for the sake of refreshment, nor does it have abstract and grand expressions. The protagonist's golden fingers are dual-purpose skills and good starting skills. They are not cheating, and are not even as good as many core disciples of large sects. It can be seen that the author is trying his best to describe to us what a real world of cultivating immortals is like. In some cases, the dialogue is a bit cumbersome, and there is a suspicion of fraud, but the flaws are not concealed. Out of five stars, I would personally give it 4.65 Stars. It is a highly recommended book for mortals to cultivate immortality.

The writing is really good and the writing is delicate. I usually don't like to see modern Internet terms when reading novels, such as holy shit, shit, etc. I will stop reading as soon as I see these words. This is not the case in this book, and the description of the characters and the description of the plot are very stylish!

Compared with most of the stereotyped fantasy fantasy novels on the streets, the author of this book put a lot of thought into it, and the characterization and plot design are quite exciting. It is worth spending time to follow up. It's rare to find a good book on Tomato recently, and I highly recommend it.

I really like the character of Shi Feng, and the story is also very exciting. A person with no spiritual roots has become an inner disciple of the sect. Chuchu also embarked on the road of physical cultivation in order to strengthen his body. It is a very good novel about cultivating immortals. There is no system, no rebirth, no time travel, and I heard there is no harem. It is about a single female protagonist and a cultivator to kill time, but it is unexpectedly exciting. I hope the author can keep writing it and don't end it.

The writing is really good, both the writing style and the conception are excellent. It is the only book that can be read after the legend of immortality for mortals. Come on, come on, come on.

Personally, I think it is a rare and good book for fairy tales! The IQ is online and the plot is delicate! Of course not everyone likes it, some people like the stallion type, some like the harem type, some like the invincible type, and some like the conspiracy type! I still prefer it to be normal! It's difficult for you to become an immortal, but it's difficult in your heart! Have a correct outlook on life, not afraid of difficulties, not confused, passionate but with a correct understanding of your own strength! Come on, author!

Some of the ideas in this book are novel and logical. The protagonist has a calm personality, strives for perfection in his cultivation, and becomes powerful step by step. It is no exaggeration. It is one of the few good articles that suits my taste. I will follow this book. Come on, author!

The book is very good, a favorite among old bookworms! The only novel on any major platform that has the potential to surpass the legend of a mortal cultivating immortality, with impeccable content and plot. Please ask the author to change the title to an attractive one. This book is really a god! ! ! ! ! ! !

The author's views are normal. The characters in the book are mentally normal and their actions are logical. It is a good book. Come on, author.

The story has twists and turns, is moving and eloquent. It is a masterpiece worth reading.

There is no golden finger, the growth of the protagonist is very reasonable, the supporting characters are full of images, it is a rare fairy tale, and it is worth following up.

This is the best novel about cultivating immortals that I have read in 2022. It can be compared with the Great Sage Litian. Both have their own styles. This novel has a more exciting plot and its own characteristics. The supporting characters are well described and all have their own characteristics. The writing is compact and the logic is relatively good. Overall a good book. It's worth a look, and I hope it will maintain its original style and not be affected by other things. It has been 4 years since I read this book. I initially fell in love with it because the name was one word different from "A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". . The writing and plot are very good, and I am still reading it. Initially, it was updated twice a day, but now it is updated once a day. . Now my impression of this book has changed. . What impressed me most about this book in the past two years is that the protagonist has been framed and on the run. Those who are stronger than him bully him, and those who are weaker than him dare to bully him. . Opportunities come with escaping. Although the protagonist himself has many advantages. Basically, except for the shortcoming of not holding grudges, there is nothing wrong with him. He is kind-hearted, strong-willed, flexible, and has first-rate understanding and patience. He also often thinks of others. Because of this strange mistake, he will be rewarded by many people with conscience in the future. But what I want to say is that if you often walk by the river and have non-wet shoes, you will always be chased and framed. Under normal circumstances, someone will definitely succeed once. How can you save the day from danger every time? He had almost killed everyone around him several times. Qin Bing, his apprentice, senior brother, etc. Had gone deep into danger several times. At the beginning of this book, the protagonist took the initiative to take revenge. The plot was well written. Now that you have taken revenge, you will not fight back when others harm you? Which one can better protect yourself and the people who care about you, waiting for your enemies to discover your conscience, or taking the initiative to avoid future troubles? . So I hope that the author's subsequent plot will allow the protagonist to take more initiative. . 1. How should Xuan Yi and the old woman deal with the problem of Tai Chi Sect? 2. Five Thunder Sect and Lingxiao Sword Sect 3. Ye Wuji 4. The Fourth Master of the Ning Family and the Second Miss Ning 5. Birch and other hostile monsters 6. Fengjia 7. Dong Damu (it's just a golden elixir, if you can use it easily, you can use it with a sword)

This book is one of the few very good novels about cultivating immortality that I have read. The plot is delicate and slowly progresses. The author has clear thinking and a certain understanding of cultivation. The plot is gripping. I give the author a big thumbs up!

It's really good, plot, character setting, etc. This is the most comfortable book I have read recently.

This book is rigorous in conception and brilliant in writing. It is a rare good novel that combines training, solving crimes, and martial arts. Wutong Shang has a profound background in copywriting after graduating from the Department of Literature of Peking University. I just know that I can't enter the world of immortality to practice Qi, and I can't see Shi Feng giving birth to a baby.

This book is full of details and details, whether it is about the relationships between people or the fights! When I first started reading it, I didn't feel it was very interesting (maybe because I read too many fun articles). It felt very dragging, but the more I read, the more interesting it became!

As an ordinary reader who has read a lot of online articles, this novel cannot be said to be a masterpiece, but it can be seen that the author has a writing outline, including foreshadowing and subsequent plots that have been thought out in advance. Only in this way can we readers feel that the narrative is interlocking. However, this has surpassed many authors. The disadvantage of this book is that The author is sometimes too wordy, but I can understand that it is to make the narrative more detailed and eloquent. However, after reading it for a long time, I inevitably feel a bit tired. All in all, it is a good novel that I am willing to recommend to others. I also hope that the author can keep writing and not be affected by many unnecessary comments [Salute]