Is this book I wrote okay? The new author has a different way of writing. Before Chapter 73, it was not very low-key. After Chapter 73, it still has a certain depth. Although there are also big problems, can you provide some support? Let me post a paragraph. [Volume 9·Hemo·Quenching Feathers—Wings that grow out of the deepest despair] Doctor. You asked me to write about Hemer. Said she should be "more tragic but with a touch of sunshine". ——I have been writing for a long time. It's not that I don't know how to write. I don't know how to look into her eyes. Not as hollow as rosemary. Not like Ifrit. Not as ignorant as Popka. In Hemo's eyes, there was that kind of light... Even though he had experienced everything and understood everything, he still wanted to believe that "tomorrow will be better." The cruelest light. [Deep Water Mark·Technology Exhibition·The Origin of Idealism] 1074. Homer was seventeen. Somewhere in Colombia, Rheinland Life Touring Technology Exhibition. She stood in front of the booth, looking up at the huge holographic projection. ——Simulation animation of the fusion of human cells and Source Stone energy. Healthy cells are surrounded by Originium particles. Energy jumps between cell membranes. Lesions—no, that's not a lesion, that's "the possibility of breaking through the boundaries of life." The narrator's voice was gentle: "Rheinland Life is committed to exploring the infinite applications of Originium technology in the field of life sciences. We believe that ore disease is not the end, but a new starting point for human evolution." Helmer stood there. Stood for a long time. She later told me: "Mr. Tin Man, you know what. At that moment, I felt that I had found the direction of my life." "I want ore disease to disappear from this world." "Not to make infected people disappear." "To make the disease disappear." When she said this, her eyes were bright. Just like that afternoon when she was seventeen, the light of the holographic projection reflected on her face. ——She doesn't know. The white-haired old man standing on the stage smiling and greeting. Arentz Parvis. Her future mentor. He is using his theory of "the possibility of breaking through the boundaries of life" to draft a project application called "The Balrog Project". On the application form, the first line of the experimental subject number was written with his granddaughter's name. Ifrit. [Deep Water Mark·Laboratory·The Fall of Idealism] 1078. Homer was twenty-four years old. She entered Rheinland Life with excellent results and became a student of Parvis. She thought she was finally getting close to that goal. ——Let ore disease disappear from this world. Parvis said to her: "Hemer, you are very talented. You will be the person who changes the medical history of Terra." She said: "Teacher, what should I do?" Parvis said: "Do it first. Make it first. Ask why later." She believed it. She did it for five years. In the past five years, she has participated in more than a dozen Originium clinical trial projects. In five years, she never asked "why". ——1083 Years. A chance. She walked into a laboratory she didn't have permission to enter. She saw a seven-year-old girl. Lie on the operating table. The whole body is covered with tubes. Burned to forty degrees. In the coma, he was still shouting: "Grandpa... Grandpa... I hurt..." - That was Ifrit. Granddaughter of Parvis. Homer stood at the operating table. Stood for a long time. She didn't cry. She just - something was broken from her body. Not a sound. It's light. The light from the holographic projection shone on her face that afternoon when she was seventeen. Broken. [Deep Water Mark·Betrayal·Another Infection] Helmer did not question Parvis on the spot. She did not resign. She didn't even show anything strange. - She just started doing something else. Steal Ifrit out. Back up experiment records. Contact a place that can take them. She did it for two years. For two years, she worked on her own projects in the laboratory during the day and secretly modified Ifrit's sedative formula at night - adjusting the dosage to the lowest level that could just maintain vital signs. For two years, she never told anyone about it. ——Except Ceria. 1085 Years. She finds Ceria. She said: "I want to take Ifrit away. Can you help me?" Ceria was silent for a long time. She said: "Help." - That day. Helmer hugged Ifrit and walked out of the gate of Rhine Life. She didn't know where to go. All she knew was that she couldn't stay here any longer. She has come a long way. I reached the point where I could go no further. Squat down. Then - she cried. That was the first time she cried in front of Ifrit. Ifrit opened his eyes drowsily and looked at her. Ifrit said: "Auntie, why are you crying?" Hemer said: "Because Auntie is very happy." "Why are you happy?" "I'm glad you woke up." Ifrit nodded. She closed her eyes and fell asleep again. Holding a piece of candy in her hand. Ceria gave it to her. She couldn't bear to eat it. ——This is Helmer's first betrayal. Betraying her mentor. Betrayal of her lab. Betraying her career. ——It was also the first time she really became a doctor. Not the kind that wears white coats and publishes papers. It's the kind of thing where you're holding a child and don't know where you're going, but you still have to go. [Deep Water Mark·Ore Disease·Second Infection] 1085. In the process of taking Ifrit to escape from Rhine, Helmer came into contact with a source of high-concentration Originium pollution. ——The official record says "accidental". Not actually an accident. In order to cut off the tracking system, she removed the positioning device implanted in Ifrit's body with her bare hands. The device is wrapped with a layer of Originium crystals. The crystals punctured her gloves. Stab into her palm. ——That night, Hemer got a wound on the palm of his left hand. She didn't handle it. Because there is no time. She wants to take Ifrit to Rhode Island. ——Three months later. Rhode Island's medical test report showed: Hermer, oriosis infection. Lesion location: ankle joint of left leg. Source of infection: Suspected exposure to high concentrations of active Source Stone. Time of infection: about three months ago. ——Hermer looked at the report. There was silence for a long time. Then she said, "So that's it." "I've always wondered what those infected people felt like when they were lying in the hospital bed." "Now I know." She told no one. She goes to work as usual. Do the experiment as usual. Take care of Ifrit as usual. ——Only Kelsey knows. Kelsey asked her: "Does it hurt?" She said: "No." "It's just that sometimes when I walk, I feel... A little cold on my ankle." "It's like stepping on the snow in winter." "The snow is very cold." "But after you step on it for a long time, you get used to it." - This was Hemer's second infection. Not by the Source Stone. It was by her own choice. [Deep Water Mark·Quenching Feather·The Third Birth] 1094. Lone Star Incident. Helmer returned to Columbia. She faces Parvez's dead body. Facing Kristen's Rockets. Facing the place she had vowed to leave. ——Also facing his past. The seventeen-year-old girl standing in front of the technology booth, her eyes illuminated by holographic projections. That person is no longer here. But that person's ideals are still there. "I used to think that ori disease must disappear from this world," Hemmer said. "Now I think that making ori disease disappear and letting infected people live should not be contradictory." "We don't need to use other people's corpses to pave the road to the truth." "We can take a slower road." "It's harder." "But it won't step on anyone." - 1097. Helmer's Origin Stone skills evolved. It's not because she's gifted. It's because oriopathy has been dormant in her body for twelve years. For twelve years, her body has been "coexisting" with the Source Stone. Not fusion. It's coexistence. Like two people crowded into a small room. Watch out for each other. Test each other. Compromise with each other. ——Finally, they learned to talk. Her Originium skills are no longer just about "healing". You can give your life force to those who need it. Not a blood transfusion. It's something more essential. It's "I'm willing to give you part of my energy to survive." ——Quen Yu Hemo. This is what the Rhode Island operator file says. [Feather of Hope: When present, the attack power of all friendly operators increases by 5%. ——This is the strength she can share with her companions. [Wings of Redemption: When a friendly operator is in a dying state, there is a 30% chance to immediately restore 30% of his health. ——This is the fate she is willing to share with her companions. PhD. You know what. Every time Hermer triggers this talent, she will be weak for three days. Because what is given away is not skills. It's her life force. It was the mineral disease that was slowly eating away at her body, but it still wanted to share the lives of others. - She didn't tell anyone. Just every time I come back from a mission, I lock myself in my room and sleep for a long, long time. Ifrit asked her: "Aunt Hemo, why are you always so sleepy?" She said: "Because Li Boli has to sleep for a long time." Ifrit said: "Then you can sleep a little longer. I will take care of myself." Hemo touched her head. "Okay," she said—and went back to work the next day. [Deep Water Mark·Sunshine·The Cruelest and Gentlest] Doctor. Homer is the most conflicted person I have ever met. She was clearly betrayed by her mentor. She was obviously infected with oriosis because of saving people. She was obviously bargaining with the God of Death every day - using her remaining lifespan to exchange Ifrit for one more day of peace. ——But she smiles every day. Not forcing a smile. It's a real, "it's a nice day" smile coming from the eyes. She combed Ifrit's hair. She tied Popka's hair into pigtails. She was in the cafeteria of Rhodes Island, eating together with the troubled children from A6. Tsukimi Ye was once again bragging about her love affairs in her youth. Airblast lay on the table and said, "Ah, it's so troublesome and I don't want to move." Spot was concentrating on reading comics, but his chopsticks were empty and he was still turning the pages. Zilan sighed while wiping the sauce from the corners of Popka's mouth. —Hermer sat among them. Have soup. The lenses of my glasses were covered with heat. She took off her glasses and wiped them. Then keep drinking. --PhD. This is the most fucking cruel image. A man betrayed by his ideals. A man afflicted by oriosis. A person who is overdrafting his life every day. — Sitting among a bunch of noisy children. Drink soup in peace. Not because of happiness. It's because she chose to make herself happy. This is not a matter of course. This was something she snatched from fate. Parvis said, "Do it first. We'll tell you why later." Hemer did. Then she discovered that the "why" her mentor gave her was a lie. Kristen said: "Truth requires a price." Helmer saw those prices - Ifrit, Rosemary, Popka, and thirty-six unnamed children. Then she said, "I won't pay the price." It wasn't that she couldn't afford it. It was she who refused to admit that human life can have a price tag. --PhD. This is Hemer's third birth. For the first time, she was born as a student of Parvis. The second time, she was born as Ifrit's savior. The third time, she was born as herself. No one's accessory. It's not anyone's tool. Not a cost on the books. —It's Olivia Hummer. A person infected with oriosis. A Li Boli who is very sleepy every day. A doctor who uses his little life to make drones. An ordinary person who drinks soup in the cafeteria, laughs at the children's commotion, and whose spectacle lenses are always fogged up. She said: "It is my wish to eliminate all ore diseases in the world." "Even if my life is in danger for this, I will not change." - She did it. Not because she invented a miracle cure. Not because she overturned Rhine Life. Not because she changed Colombia. ——Because she is still alive today. Still smiling. Still combing Ifrit's hair. Still braiding Popka's hair. We are still working on those medical drones that can be shot down by the enemy at any time. Still giving his life to others. --PhD. This is not a victory. This is harder than winning. Is alive. It is to live well. It's about living well every day. Even if I die tomorrow. Deep Water Mark·Snowy Night·EP1099. Hemmer's EP released. It's called "Snowy Night". Snowy night. The lyrics read: "When you are lost in the wind and snow "When you are lost in the middle of the night "When you are alone "When you are afraid "My voice will guide you "Back to the way I came" - Doctor. Do you know which way "the way I came" is. It was the science and technology exhibition when I was seventeen. It was the long night of escaping with Ifrit in my arms in 1085. It was the afternoon when I stood alone in front of the window of the Rhode Island medical room after being infected with ore disease. It was the evening in 1094 when she stood under the Christen launch tower. No one accompanied her. She fell down countless times. She didn't stop. She made songs about the pits she hit and the wrong paths she took. She said: "If you are lost, don't be afraid. "My voice will guide you." "Go back the way I came." "——Doctor. This is Helmer. It's not that he never despaired. After despair, he still decided to get up. It wasn't because he saw the light. It was because he became the light. ---
If you recommend it, it can be regarded as a new book, because not many people have read it so far, and it is no different from a new book [face covering] It has already exceeded one million words, and it is definitely a large volume. Everyone is welcome to read it [Sending Hearts]
I wrote it myself. The protagonist is the Great Yan Emperor. In the early stage, he eliminated the forces of Trasis, annexed Victoria and the Eastern Kingdom, unified the Terra continent in the later stage, and marched into Tower Guard during the end period. There are many female protagonists, and almost all the operators survived until the end stage. They beat Adashir and Nephis.
This book has a humorous and interesting plot, interesting protagonist setting, scientific calligraphy, and a tentacle monster. The most important thing is that the author is full of interactions and is updated steadily.
I recommend it to myself. During this period, the traffic of both books has dropped a bit. It has been serialized for more than a month. I have been busy recently and am working hard to update. In fact, the writing is becoming more and more smooth, and the plot has a stronger grasp than before. This is my first time writing and I have published two books with the same theme. I hope more readers will like it.
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