Arknights: I Became the Patron Saint of Sakaz

Give me a summary of the new book🤓👆 The overall story rhythm is very good, and it is old-school and stable. It can be said that except for some elements of porridge, everything else is good. The emotional description is a bit stiff but it's in place. It belongs to the big cup ( But what's a bit bad is that the camp leader is described as capable of resisting and fighting, but it looks like an NPC that sends out tasks, and the protagonist's emotional line is relatively... Monotonous? In other words, the arrangement seems a bit deliberate. Some of the enemies are shaped more like those who seek immortality in the wild, and their physical appearance deviates from the large environmental background of the wilderness. Another point is that (maybe I'm chomping at the bit) the description of this part seems a bit thin. Blindly describing and highlighting one aspect will indeed make people feel monotonous and boring, similar to a running account. Can we get some other perspectives to substitute or describe from the side? All in all it's pretty good, you can see it first hand (

The writing is quite good. I would like to give you a suggestion. The essence of cultivating immortality is for immortality. Others are add-ons to assist immortality. You can write about the combat effectiveness of cultivating immortality, but the high productivity brought by cultivating immortality cannot be omitted. For example, the earth-type monk's earth and wood holy body can build city defenses in a few days, and the wood-type spiritual root's farming holy body cultivates high-yielding crops and high-strength biological materials, as well as talismans, magic weapons, formations and various techniques for cultivating immortality. In addition, Sakaz's longevity and some spiritual roots can be polished to build a foundation. The miscellaneous spiritual roots in the world of immortality cannot be cultivated or they are cultivated too slowly, and their vitality and blood decline before the foundation is established. Sakaz can live for two hundred years as long as he does not die of old age. The writing of the battle is a bit bland. The intensity of the battle can be expressed through the environment. For example, the battle stirs up large amounts of dust and sand, crushes the ground and breaks the sound barrier. The armor of the soldiers lined up in a radius of one hundred feet melts. Their bodies melt and spontaneously ignite without fire and turn into torches. When writing about the individual battles, data is written, such as a dragon body that is a hundred feet long and thick in a water tank, and blood that gathers into a blood spear that is ten feet long. Zhu Yu gathered mana and pushed out with his blue palm. The dragon's scales stood upright and circled to avoid it. The upper half of the thousand-foot-high mountain behind him suddenly turned into rubble. Combat can also be played from a spectator's perspective. Isn't this picture stronger?

I hope you can write more book reviews for me. I will write down any shortcomings and try to correct them. After all, I have just written a book and I have little experience in the emotional line. Although I have read most of the plots of Ark, I spent two years in the middle to fulfill my obligation. I have been out of trouble for a while. Some of the history may have fallacies. I hope everyone can tolerate it.

I didn't understand what I was listening to. I just fell asleep while listening to a book. From the previous listening, I felt that it had nothing to do with Zhou. In addition to the races that appeared, there were also several characters that appeared in the past (forget about the Zongmen part, it felt very dramatic, so I won't talk about it). As for Pallas (I thought it was Mavericks at first, but the timeline was wrong when I remembered) and Lelia (who is this [laughs] Cry], is it original?), In short, I couldn't listen to it and it felt very boring (mainly because I didn't know what I was listening to, whether it was an original fantasy about cultivating immortals wearing a boat skin or a fan fiction about cultivating immortals in a boat). As for the question I asked the author about the heroine before (after all, I didn't hear the middle part, it was too hypnotic), it's impossible for the three heroines to be original characters [laughing and crying].

The Terra version of cultivating immortals, I hope it's not just a cultivator's skin [face covering]

𣎴Wrong, it's more interesting and the writing style is also good

A very good book, good news [smile]

Well written, the background is very detailed

The writing style in Tomato is pretty good, I hope I can keep writing.

Looks good, my big Kazdair has the best teeth in the world!

Must give five-star praise

Looks good, I don't understand why I didn't rate it