Arknights: the Cute Little Angel Lady Is a Sinister Person

The concept is quite good, but I don't know why it seems a bit inexplicable. The protagonist's early character development has been quite successful so far. In addition, the number of words is relatively small and it's a bit rushed. I suggest you focus on it first. Anyway, keep up the good work.

I'm amazed at the author's control of time. Although less than a day and a half has passed so far, he has already written nearly 70,000 to 80,000 words. I feel that the author is suitable for writing a time-limited copy game, so that he can give full play to his work.

To be honest, I was a little confused when I read it earlier. I don't know if anyone is like me. The more I read, the more curious I am about the protagonist's life experience. If you say that he is just an ordinary employee, I still don't believe it. Although there is an explanation for the reason, the author did not explain it. I was curious and it took me two times to sort out one thing. I probably won't go into details here and let's see how the author fills in the holes later. In addition, this is a very nice book. The protagonist is very interesting and the setting is good. I would also like to ask, when is the timeline? Will the daily life in the introduction be affected by the main line or abandon the main line and make up a route of my own? Ah, I said too much

Ahem, no one is, right? I am a dog from Texas [Adoration] [Sending Hearts]

Ten out of ten or even nine out of ten is better

This book is for daily Arknights fans, thank you all for your support.

In one day, I finished reading the current updates. The timeline is before saving the doctor, changing gender, and posting like crazy (I like it). The character creation is very good, the protagonist is very strong, both civil and military, and currently the protagonist has just become an employee of Rhode Island

Why is it only 7.2? Do you know how to score it on Tomato? It should obviously be 10 or even 9.9. One of the most comfortable Ark fanfics I have ever read. The Dragon Gate chapter has a good grasp of the rhythm of the daily life and the main plot. It is not as good as Super Long Aotian (probably?), And the original work is praised. It can be seen that it is very serious when divided into volumes. It is just that the (real) heroine has been living in the dialogue for so long () It's a bit too miserable (). Also, when will Xiao Mo appear? Chef Mo was so angry that he backed out of the plot because my director took the lead. Some suggestions are that the dialogue between the characters looks a bit messy. It took a few people at Penguin Logistics a while to recognize who is who. I feel that it would be better to put two paragraphs said by one person in a pair of double quotation marks.

Very good, good luck to the author

I never thought that you actually wrote the diary of working in Teyvat.

The plot is good, but I want to watch the main character pout [laughs evilly]

The writing is pretty good, but sometimes the details are a bit lacking [laughs crookedly]. Then I looked a little confused (maybe because of my personal reasons), I highly recommend it, I like it very much, please post more of it, the author [laughing]

Overall, it's pretty good, but it's a bit uncomfortable to keep emphasizing "cute" [thoughts]

You wrote well. You wrote well.

The writing is excellent and the plot is delicate. It is also top-notch in fan fiction. The world is too noisy. Don't listen, don't watch, don't care. Then, move forward and write what you want and express. May the anchor reach the top. The last and most important point is that whenever the anchor takes us, we have to eat.

Very good, keep up the good work￣￣)σ

What is the name of the other work?

The character descriptions are still very detailed and the stickers are very good.

The writing is very good, the setting of the protagonist is innovative, but the update is really good ~ slow ~ ah ~

Because the writing sounds like cultivating immortals~ I deducted one point

It's a good book, but the author is a bit slow in updating it, so it's not enough to read! What? The rating for such a beautiful book is only 6 points. What the hell is Tomato doing?

It's good to watch [Adoration], so what's the name of the other work? [What] I want to watch [Blow Kiss]

The writing is indeed good, and the character creation and the plot between characters are also well grasped. I am personally looking forward to the subsequent plot. As for the score of the book, I can only say that a low score is better than a low score, and there will be less weird and inappropriate things. Ahem, I'm going too far. I hope the author can continue at the current pace. I'm looking forward to the plot between Miss Angel and more forces.

It's a very good book. It would be better if the character of the protagonist is better controlled. The plot is good and the pace is good. I hope the writing style can be improved and there should be less dialogue.

Very pretty (appreciation)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very nice. But can you give me a few more chapters, or I'll elbow you right away?

I want to make the author a code word girl

Look at meow, come on boss, meow, keep writing meow

The characters are well developed, but sometimes it's hard to tell the inner thoughts and perspectives of the protagonist and other people.