Looking for Clan-Building Stories with Slow Growth, Not Limited to Traditional Cultivation

258 砚 After the Misty Rain on Yanshan Mountain West WumingEastern Fantasy826k WordsOngoing 2Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Cultivation of Immortality-Group Portraits-Large World View-Heat Death of the Universe-

259 穿 I Transmigrated to the Cultivation World and Can Copy Everything Mr. WuhenEastern Fantasy329k WordsOngoing 91Reads5.8Score100Shelves

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Traditional immortal cultivation flow: Qi refining, foundation building, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, deity transformation... ① In the first book, the protagonist was born in a small immortal cultivation family, and got the treasure of space + time in an accident. With the help of this treasure, he led the family step by step to the top of immortal cultivation. — ② In the second book, a modern boy accidentally traveled to the world of immortality. After discovering that he was carrying a cornucopia with him, he used the cornucopia's ability to copy and set foot on the top of the world.

260 有 I Have a Yuanying Patriarch Who Dotes on Me Crying from Both Sides of the Taiwan StraitEastern Fantasy108k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Family ancestor Yuanying monk, angel investor [Admiration]

261 回 After Returning Home, I Built a Sword Immortal Clan Three Three, Then RiverEastern Fantasy1.2M WordsCompleted 747Reads6.7Score101Shelves

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🔥🔥Book introduction: An old soldier from a mountain village cut off his cultivation skills and mastered the technique. A mortal family turned into an immortal family, the Li family of Yunzhou. A hundred generations struggle to cross the road to ascension, a magnificent epic. Families are prosperous in farming, and ordinary people are cultivating immortals🔥🔥

264 领 Lord: Two Teenage Geniuses Join Me from the Start As Long as I'm Happy, Nothing Else MattersEastern Fantasy4.7M WordsOngoing 80.1kReads9.1Score6.1kShelves

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8 Points, Western Fantasy highly recommends the first book.

279 要 If I Want to Live Forever and Cultivate Immortality, Everything That Blocks My Path to Immortality Will Be Overturned. Strong Foundation BuilderEastern Fantasy261k WordsCompleted 11Reads8.2Score—Shelves

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The new book is like an 18-year-old girl, full of fresh experiences. I invite all fellow Taoists to explore with me and recommend a new book to you. I hope you like [Shy][Admiration][Blowing Kisses]

280 家 Clan Cultivation: An Immortal Sect Lies Deep in the Icy Mountains Gui GuiEastern Fantasy696k WordsCompleted 372Reads7.1Score—Shelves

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🔥🔥Book introduction: Tens of thousands of years ago, the heaven and earth changed, and the Age of End of Dharma came. The iceberg of the Zhou family welcomes visitors from outside the world, whose name is Zhou Fang. With the land in his body, he leads his people, the ice and soil are opened, and the ice fields are expanded. Plant spiritual plants, obtain fairy fruits, act in a low-key manner, and increase family power. Zhou Fangyuan, the Zhou family is the strongest, developing silently amid the sound of farming. 🔥🔥

284 玄 The Mystic Immortal's Book of Fate: Clan Cultivation Beacon Mist, Closed CircuitEastern Fantasy1.5M WordsOngoing 208Reads—Score—Shelves

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Slowly developing...

286 长 The Immortal's Longevity Estate: I Can Earn Rewards by Farming True Lord LingxiEastern Fantasy447k WordsCompleted 450Reads6.3Score—Shelves

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🔥🔥Book introduction: Zhou Lewen, Tianlinggen, sword art cultivation, elixir refining, family prosperity. The Zhou clan, three hundred years ago, built in the clouds, served as a foreign tribe, and established the immortal tribe🔥🔥

288 云 The Chronicle of the Cloudsea Cultivation Clan Gou Xu, Who Loves Orange Steamed EggsEastern Fantasy437k WordsOngoing 426Reads7.1Score—Shelves

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Story introduction: Traditional cultivation of immortality is not brainless

289 敢 Dare I Ask the Fairy, Would You Like to Share the Table with Me Tonight? Young Master Yu of Yan and ZhaoEastern Fantasy240k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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A different kind of cultivating immortality, a family story!

290 家 The Cultivating Clan Chronicles Yu Mo ChenEastern Fantasy497k WordsOngoing 47Reads—Score—Shelves

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First of all, from the perspective of story creativity, it is very wise for you to choose a classic and attractive theme such as "Trash Counterattack" and develop it in the fantasy background of cultivating immortals. This theme can easily resonate with readers, and many readers like to see the protagonist's journey from trough to peak. This setting lays a very good foundation for the story. Moreover, you have integrated the complex interpersonal relationships, power struggles, resource allocation and other elements within the family into the setting of the family cultivating immortality, making the background of the story rich and three-dimensional, making readers feel like they are in a family cultivating immortality full of rules and disputes. You also did a great job in character creation. The protagonist starts from an image that is regarded as a waste by his family. His inferiority, unwillingness and persistence in cultivating immortality are all vividly portrayed by you. As the story progresses, the protagonist gradually grows up, and the tenacity, wisdom, kindness and other qualities of his character are gradually revealed. The character's growth trajectory is clearly visible, which makes the protagonist's image very full. The supporting characters also have their own characteristics. Whether they are elders, peers or villains in the family, they all have their own personality traits and motivations. The interaction between them and the protagonist enriches the plot of the story. However, your work also has some shortcomings. In terms of plot advancement, the pace is a bit slow at times. For example, when the protagonist breaks through a certain realm, the description is too long and describes every subtle realization in detail. Although this helps readers understand the process of cultivating immortality, too much space will make readers feel tired during the reading process. In addition, the description of some battle scenes lacks enough visual sense and is more of a list of skills instead of allowing readers to feel the tension and excitement of the battle. In response to these shortcomings, I have the following suggestions. In terms of plot rhythm, some unnecessary descriptions can be appropriately streamlined, and key plot nodes can be captured and described in detail. This can not only ensure the integrity of the story, but also make the rhythm more compact. For the description of battle scenes, you can learn from some excellent martial arts or fantasy novels, and describe the battle scenes from the perspective of a bystander, such as the moves of both sides, changes in the surrounding environment, psychological games during the battle, etc., And enhance the sense of the picture through the combination of these elements. Overall, your "The Novel of the Wasted Counterattack Family Cultivation to Immortality" is a work with great potential. You have rich imagination and solid character creation ability. If you can improve the plot rhythm and description of battle scenes, I believe your works will attract more readers and achieve better results in the field of online novels. I hope you can continue to maintain your passion for creation, continue to improve your writing skills, and bring more exciting stories to readers

291 开 From the Start, I’m a Golden Core Ancestor: Building the Greatest Immortal Clan of All Time Goofy Little TaoistEastern Fantasy1.0M WordsCompleted 4.4kReads6.5Score178Shelves

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🔥🔥Book introduction: Ma Chaofeng, Sword of Red Dust, Fighting the Prodigy, and Refining the Divine Pill. Henglangma, Jiuzhou, protecting the common people and honoring the family🔥🔥

299 我 I Established a Heavenly Court Organization in a High-Martial World Born of the Dao's RhymeEastern Fantasy306k WordsCompleted 1.4kReads8.2Score—Shelves

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🔥🔥Book introduction: Li Xuanzhen travels through time, and the Yunwu Li family. Miniature cultivation of immortals, the addition of the three ancestors. The head of the family is very talented, while the second sister is busy. 🌿🌿Mediocre qualifications, but very tired. Gold finger appears, jade bowl treasure. Refining spiritual objects, spiritual liquid is magical. 🐅🐅 Cultivation speeds up and you are not afraid of erysipelas. The spirit bowl helps to search for spiritual objects. Earning spiritual stones will lead to the path to immortality. 🔥🔥