Something's Not Right About This Mage
这个魔法师不对劲啊
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- Completed
- Length
- 2.6M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- European Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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There are definitely not many people who like this novel on Tomato. It is slow-burning, western fantasy, and has a grand world view, but some of the content is too long and difficult to read. But the overall novel is pretty good. If you are tired of reading cool novels, you can give it a try.
It's okay, after all, you don't need to use your brain to read this kind of article. At least it's more interesting than the Toilet Paper Series from Another World. I stopped reading after chapter 87. There are still too many mistakes. However, I still hope that the author will continue to work hard and improve his writing skills.
It is good-looking, with a clear structure, clear explanations, and the actions of the supporting characters are also logical. It is my favorite slow-burn farming novel. The only bad thing is that there are too many threats to the protagonist planted in the early stage, which makes it a bit stressful.
The writing was average at the beginning, but the further you read, the better it looks. It is not bloody, and there is no cliché. There are no breaks in reading before and after. It is just that there are only one knight, and not many people can use it. Overall, it should not be only 8 points.
The later part is great, especially the combination of modern electricity and magic is very interesting, especially the use of magic to liberate productivity, which is rare in other novels, but the early stage is too torturous. Even I, a fan of Western fantasy, can't read the first thirty chapters. It's too messy. If the author doesn't want to give up this book, I suggest you go to the front to optimize it, and there are some minor hairs. Sick, sometimes the chapters start to repeat the words of the previous chapter, and sometimes they continue to be written. There are also some plot contradictions, such as the part where the magician's identity is difficult to inherit as an earl. I wrote it once after killing him, and again when I visited later. The emotional scene with Melissa is also difficult to describe. It is obviously a good framework to write out the feeling of cheating. To sum it up, this book is highly recommended for bookworms who like Western fantasy, except for the strong dissuasion at the beginning and the slightly toxic emotional drama.
It's a very nice slow-burn Lord novel. It's hard to imagine that this is the author's first time writing a book. Speaking of the Middle Ages, Kingdom Come 2 has just been released recently, and I just used it in my head [laughing and crying]
The pace is too slow, but the content is good. If you like a slow pace, you can follow it (I read the first hundred chapters and it was extremely slow)
I have read less than 200 chapters so far. The literary talent is very good, the plot is compact, and the writing progress is very slow. However, many plots are boring, and I feel like I am away from the refreshing writing. I can listen to the book, and the writing is not frivolous. I like it.
The 3000-hour bookworm said that it is good-looking. The plot of the farming novel is slow and normal. However, when the update speed is slow, there is not much content in one or two chapters of the farming novel every day. It is suitable for reading if you want to read more.
It is a slow-paced and clear novel, with a complete story structure. It is a refreshing addition to time travel novels. The characters have distinctive characteristics and the worldview structure should change as the protagonist grows. It is still very good and worth watching.