Wizard: I Told You to Develop the Wilderness, Not Suppress the Demon God

Young people, don't jump in immediately after seeing some covers. There is still a long way to go. You must learn to exercise restraint, be pure of heart, and don't degenerate at an age when you should be struggling. Don't ask me why I came in. I am here to advise everyone here. I have always been upright, upright, celibate, and have never been close to women. Even during the holidays, I am still living a simple life. I am very puzzled why I always see videos like this? What a crime. Last time I went through the security check on a plane, the machine kept beeping. The security inspector came and searched for a long time but couldn't find any metal. Only in the end did he realize that it was my iron will.

The writing is really good, but there is one thing. Could the pace be slowed down a bit? It's too compact, and I feel a little out of breath when I read it. It's not very good to keep working hard without slowing down my breath. I think it would be better to relax and relax appropriately!

So pretty. Also, there are only two women now. It's level 2. Some more women. Get more experience, don't suppress it

There are all kinds of dangers after being hooked. Before being hooked, I don't know how to survive. I have been playing with dolls in front of me.

Serious wizard writing. A bit interesting.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel that it has both advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the golden finger will not appear too hard, which will lead to the collapse of the entire world's combat effectiveness, and it will still be mainly auxiliary. Another advantage is that the protagonist has a wide variety of skills. During the battle, various methods emerge in an endless stream, making the battle seem very intense and exciting. In terms of shortcomings, I feel that it is too easy for the male protagonist to leapfrog and kill enemies, and the combat system feels a bit broken; another thing is that the plot development is a bit too compact, making the plot without a sense of ups and downs; in addition, there are relatively few details of the story, and the language is a bit bland; there is another The point is that there are some plots that seem a bit confusing. What seems more obvious is that the male protagonist's second wife has fallen in love with the male protagonist. Apart from the system identification, there is no confirmation of the relationship between the two parties. There is also no explanation of why the Heart of the World appears in the male protagonist's hand. Although the above-mentioned disadvantages outweigh the advantages, they will not become a lightning point. Generally speaking, they are okay.

It is different from the traditional wizard genre, and is more like a supernatural world. What I want to complain about is that Golden Finger is actually a couple. . After all, wizards basically represent mystery, loneliness, and the mind. . Lovers can exist, but it shouldn't be linked to strength (perhaps this is the author's bad taste). Anyway, it's a bit weird. Overall, the concept is pretty good. It can be seen that the author has great enthusiasm for writing books. However, I personally feel that writing a book is more about being more refined than being more prolific. Rather than being productive, it is better to be focused and consistent (don't become the kind of novice who writes on the assembly line). Many details need to be carefully laid out. Writing too generally will have some impact on the perception. It is recommended that the system, realm, world view, etc. Be described in more detail to give people a sense of immersion in reading. Then the work will definitely be more exciting [laughing] Anyway, keep going!

The book is still very good, but the thank you list at the end of each chapter really affects the feeling of listening to the book [angry]

Not bad, not bad. Pig's Knuckle has a decisive personality. He is not a holy mother, nor a murderer. He occasionally makes fun of himself. Although some of the training details are not very good, the overall framework is very satisfactory, but the ending is too sudden.

If you can see it, it must be the wizard skin version of Xiuxianwen.