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751 沙 Anecdotes About Shahe Zeng BeiUrban948k WordsOngoing 6Reads—Score—Shelves

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Super awesome book! The title of the book and the main character are both outrageous! I was hooked after reading one chapter. I recommend everyone to read it!

752 我 The Puppy I Raised Turned into a Sick, Paranoid and Vicious Dog Zi Yufei49k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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Supernatural and suspenseful story with two strong male protagonists, it's really cool to cry

753 我 I'm so Approachable! Wanzu, Don't Run! Goodbye JasmineUrban352k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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This book was written by a friend of mine. It was his first time writing. Although his writing style was average and his grasp of the rhythm of the plot was not good, the plot was still interesting. It has been almost a month. I advised him not to write it because only his account and I were reading it. But he said he wanted to stick to it and hoped that everyone could help read it.

754 暗 Flowers Bloom on the Other Side of the Dark River Nova Like Yu DeshuiMartial Arts437k WordsOngoing 7.1kReads5.8Score451Shelves

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[Attention][OK][Bird food masterpiece]

755 穿 After Traveling Through Time, I Thought I Could Pretend to Be Big Huihui Is the Greatest84k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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After I finished writing it, I didn't even dare to read it myself, and I was too embarrassed to recommend it to my friends.

756 你 You Kidnapped a Little Wife with a Bottle of Soda? Put on the ShenggeUrban453k WordsOngoing 1.2kReads5.8Score178Shelves

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Is anyone coming? [Blow a kiss]

757 诡 Infinitely Weird: the Part-Time Worker Who Restarted His Abandoned Account Mo Xianren 0GMystery438k WordsCompleted 63Reads8.5Score—Shelves

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A newcomer's first book, Shuang Nan Zhu, slightly funny, a good story in one chapter

758 蜘 Spider-Man: the Sinister Man Apricot Nacho Tomato184k WordsOngoing 5Reads—Score—Shelves

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The original Spider-Man, the heroine is a black cat, pure love, I plan to write it for many years, interspersed with many major events, I will restore the comic setting😭

759 我 I Am the Sixth Anchor! the Whole Network Is Not Calm Anymore Time Goes with the WindUrban254k WordsCompleted 122Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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I sincerely recommend Lao Liu's funny novel. You guys, after reading the first few chapters, you don't think it's interesting and you're leaving.

761 泣 The Record of Crying to Immortality with Crying Blood God of Wealth Without LeakageEastern Fantasy118k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Do you want to cut it? Cut it, it's all burnt

762 穿 It Must Be Really Cool to Travel Back in Time to Your Own Cool Novels, Right? Only Yu GeEastern Fantasy105k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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763 污 People of Filth Xie XiangSci-Fi & Apocalypse347k WordsCompleted 81Reads8.0Score—Shelves

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Newcomer, new book, data is bleak [cry][cry][cry]

764 神 Chinese Superpowers A Big Round Winter MelonEastern Fantasy143k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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I'm here to sign up too. It's almost 80,000. Let's wait and see how it goes.

765 三 Delta Invasion: Rescue Mai Xiaowen at the Beginning Bachelor159k WordsOngoing 60Reads—Score—Shelves

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Shnvkik

766 唯 Only Light Wen LiModern Romance120k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Look at the first novel I wrote. I wrote it slowly and little by little, and it took a lot of time.

767 霜 Frost Falls Enlightenment and PracticeAncient Romance1.3M WordsCompleted 21Reads—Score—Shelves

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One million words [cover face][cover face]

768 穿 After Time Travel, Start a Family First, Then Save the World Xu LanjingAncient Romance108k WordsCompleted —Reads8.2Score—Shelves

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This is very new, beautiful, and the book is complete. The author is very friendly and responded to my random comments.

769 锦 Koi Three Kingdoms Sheng Yue HengHistorical94k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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A salty fish, since the book was published at the end of October, the update has been relatively slow. In the fourth year of Song and Shaoxing, the protagonist accidentally entered the tomb of Zhuge Wuhou and was pulled by heaven. He traveled through time and space and was reborn in the Three Kingdoms. The memories of his past life are still there. At the beginning of the Wei army's three-pronged expedition to Shu, the protagonist has more than 800 years of knowledge reserves. He joins Wu to fight Wei (Jin) and continues to stand on three pillars to wait for the world to change. Expedition to the Central Plains to the north, revitalizes the Han Dynasty, and returns to the old capital!

770 嘉 Jiajing Dynasty? Isn't It a Good Time for the Industrial Revolution? The Invincible Terrifying Tyrannosaurus Warrior in the UniverseHistorical357k WordsOngoing 12Reads7.7Score—Shelves

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There is no system, no golden fingers, it all depends on the brain. The author has a Ph. D., Can look up information and read papers. The technologies in this article can all be developed based on the existing foundation, and the beginning of the industrial revolution is also different from our world line. Historical textual research refers to official histories such as "History of Ming Dynasty" and "Records of Emperor Shizong of Ming Dynasty", local chronicles, and biographies of important figures. If you have any comments or suggestions, you can submit them directly. If you are a newbie working as a part-time author, you will reply as soon as you see them. Seeking attention. [Send heart][Send heart]

771 穿 Journey to the West: Flying Kick to Tang Sanzang at the Beginning Little Sun HaoqiEastern Fantasy129k WordsOngoing 5Reads—Score—Shelves

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Friends who like the theme of Journey to the West can check it out

772 慢 Days of Growing Slowly 1 Qinghong InkstoneModern Romance382k WordsOngoing 6Reads—Score—Shelves

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See the most authentic appearance of life at the place where the fireworks first light up - a review of the first part of "The Days of Slow Growth" The first part of "The Days of Slow Growth" is like a pot of freshly brewed brown rice tea. It has no strong aroma, but slowly leaches out the mellow flavor of life in the warm mouth. It does not pursue the dramatic tension of "climax at the beginning", but unfolds the days of Xu Jingwei and her son with almost line drawings - the hemp ropes of 28 moves, Xiaoyu's crooked homework books, the fragrance of pickles wafting from the alley, these daily routines that are so small that they are almost "inconspicuous" precisely spell out the most realistic picture of ordinary people's survival, so that everyone who opens the book can see their own shadow between the lines. 1. Narrative: Incorporate "slowness" into daily life and give life a sense of breathing. The best thing about the narrative of the first part is "not rushing" - it is not in a hurry to finish telling a story, but more like "living life" with Xu Jingwei. There are no ups and downs, only the sound of tearing tape when unpacking cartons, only the cough caused by the smoke when making a fire, and only the sound of "Mom" when Xiaoyu came home from school. The author breaks the time into "small fragments": Xu Jingwei squatted on the roadside to repair Xiaoyu's schoolbag, and the stitches were crooked and then removed; Uncle Wang passed by pushing a tricycle and threw a handful of freshly picked vegetables; Zhang Guifen was knitting a sweater on the balcony, and the ball of wool rolled downstairs. When Xiaoyu helped pick it up, she gave the child a piece of fruit candy. These clips do not have the pressure of "must advance the plot", but like a puzzle, they slowly outline the appearance of this small world: Xu Jingwei's "difficulty" is not caused by shouting out, but by her frowning when calculating the rent, and by looking at Xiaoyu's old age. The silence when wearing shoes; the "warmth" of the neighborhood is not deliberately staged. It is the awkwardness of Uncle Wang saying "I can't finish the pork belly" but turning around to eat pickles. It is Zhang Guifen's hard mouth and soft heart when he scolds "Why are you so stubborn?" But helps mend old clothes. This kind of "slow narrative" gives life a sense of breathing - just like our own lives, which never follow a "script" but are strung together by countless "nothing special" moments. 2. Characters: There is no "perfect protagonist", only "real people". The people in the first part all have "imperfect" fireworks, but they are more attractive than the "heroic protagonist". Xu Jingwei is not a "supermom" - she would squat in the corridor in the morning when the landlord kicked her out and secretly wipe her tears; when she couldn't raise the tuition for Xiaoyu, she would borrow money from her neighbors with a voice as thin as a mosquito; she would even raise her voice when Xiaoyu cried, and hold her child in her arms to apologize afterwards. But it is this "imperfection" that makes her "tenacity" even more powerful: she will change old clothes for Xiaoyu to wear, but always buys fresh homework books for her children; she will cook a bowl of hot porridge for Xiaoyu even if she comes back from work late; even though she moved 28 times, she never told Xiaoyu that "life can't go on anymore." Her "strongness" is achieved through gritted teeth, and her softness "has to be tough" for the sake of her children. She is very much like the mothers around us who silently shoulder the burden. Xiaoyu is not the template of "too sensible to be like a child" - he will get angry because his classmates laugh at his old clothes, secretly throw vegetables he doesn't like into the trash can, and learn to make instant noodles by himself when his mother falls asleep after moving and is exhausted. But his "growth" is hidden in those "little actions": he would save the plastic bottles he picked up and "sell them to buy hand cream for his mother"; he would tiptoe to pour hot water for his mother when Xu Jingwei coughed; he would squat next to Uncle Wang when he was repairing the car and pass the wrench, and he would not be discouraged even if he handed the wrong hand. The world of a child is very simple, but it can best reflect the difficulties of adults - his sensibility is not "taught", but is "feeling distressed" that he naturally learns when his mother is too tired. Even the neighbors are not "perfect good people": Uncle Wang will nag "today's young people can't live a good life", Zhang Guifen will complain to the neighbors about "Xu Jingwei Taisha", and when Lao Zhou repairs things, he will complain that "this crap is a waste of time." But it is these "little shortcomings" that make their goodwill even more valuable - Uncle Wang would park the tricycle at Xu Jingwei's door in winter and say, "You send the child off in the morning, it won't be cold when riding the bike." These "hard-spoken but soft-hearted" kindnesses are like street lamps at the entrance of the alley, not bright but warm, lighting up the days with warmth. 3. Theme: "Growth" is not a counterattack, it is "moving forward with scars." The most touching thing about the first part is that it writes "growth" in a very "real" way - there is no sense of "turning over overnight", only the resilience of "step by step". Xu Jingwei's "growth" is from "fear" to "dare": when she first moved, she was always afraid of trouble others, and would refuse when neighbors handed her things; later she would take the initiative to ask Uncle Wang for advice on "how to pickle radishes so they don't rot", and would say to Zhang Guifen, "I'll take care of the kids for you while you go shopping for groceries." She didn't become "powerful", she just learned to "not hide" - if she couldn't avoid the rent, she would work an extra job; if she couldn't avoid her child's grievance, she would hold her child and say, "Let's get better slowly." Xiaoyu's "growth" is from "ignorant" to "sensible": at first he didn't understand "why we keep moving" and would cry and ask "Mom, when will we have our own home"; later he would tell Xu Jingwei, "Mom, I don't need to buy a new schoolbag, I can still carry it after refilling it." He didn't become a "little adult", he just learned to "feel distressed" - the hands of his distressed mother were calluses, and his eyes were always red when he felt distressed for his mother. Even the "growth" of this "small community" was slow: at first, the neighbors were just "familiar", but later they would enjoy the cool weather together at the entrance of the alley, share the secret recipe of pickles, and help someone's family when something happened. There is no "vigorous mutual assistance", only the tacit understanding of "you help me, I will remember you a point" - just like neighbors in reality, not "relatives", but in the daily necessities of life, they gradually develop a "family-like" concern. This book never says slogans such as "come on" or "hold on", but tells us in the simplest way: "Growth" is never about "getting better all of a sudden". It is about carrying a little more today than yesterday. It is about understanding a little more today than yesterday. Even if you fall, you can get up, dust yourself off, and take another step forward. 4. Language: Use "broken details" to touch people's hearts and give the text warmth. The language in the first part does not have gorgeous rhetoric, but it is as friendly and heart-wrenching as the neighbor's aunt speaks. The author is good at grasping "small details": when writing about Xu Jingwei's hands, "there are calluses on the knuckles, and there is always a little dirt between the nails"; when writing about Xiaoyu's homework book, "the cover is wrinkled, and the words inside slowly changed from the crooked "sun"" to the neat "persistence""; when writing about the autumn in the alley, "the lid of the pickle jar was hot in the sun, and the bell of Uncle Wang's tricycle rang slower than in summer." These details are not "deliberately sensational", but have their own warmth - you will think of your mother's hands when cooking, you will think of your crooked homework as a child, and you will think of the fragrance of osmanthus wafting downstairs in autumn. Just like what is written in the book, "The porridge in the pot is simmering, and the rice is slowly blooming inside." The words are also slowly "flowering". It is not surprising, but it can warm my heart. Conclusion: This is a book that "can make you calm down". The first part of "The Days of Slow Growth" is not a book that "makes your blood boil", but it is a book that "can make you calm down". It is like a mirror, reflecting our own difficulties - the pressure of rent, children's tuition fees, and occasional confusion; it is more like a pair of hands, gently patting your back and saying, "Don't worry, life will gradually get better." After reading the whole book, you will not remember any "big plot", but you will remember the porridge Xu Jingwei cooked for Xiaoyu, the vegetables that Uncle Wang handed over, and the candy that Xiaoyu secretly placed on his mother's pillow. These tiny bits of warmth are like new buds in spring, slowly emerging from the soil - it turns out that the days of ordinary people are never "worthy of living only with great vigor". It is about carrying scars, saving warmth, and moving forward step by step, which is already good. And this is the most precious thing about the first part: it laid the "fireworks" root for the entire series, making us fall in love with Xu Jingwei and her son, the neighbors in the alley, and even more, this kind of "slowly growing" life.

773 惊 Shock! the Beautiful Girl Wakes up with a Three-Year-Old Child! Yu Yi'erModern Romance268k WordsCompleted 31.1kReads9.2Score3.3kShelves

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💥💥You are not her! When I woke up, I found that I was married to Crush, but Crush is annoyed when he sees her now. She also has a lovely daughter, but everyone doesn't like her. It turns out that she has been time-traveled in the past few years, and the time-travelers have made her life a mess...

774 穿 After Traveling to the Beast World, He Was Bound to the Survival Game Potato or PotatoModern Romance153k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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I have opened a new article. Can you please help me read another book "Starting the Survival in the Beast World from the Year of the Great Famine"

775 诗 Preface to the Poem Brown GrayMystery110k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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Belongs to a style of writing

776 圣 Holy Wish Eagle Claw Iron ShirtEastern Fantasy281k WordsCompleted 20Reads—Score—Shelves

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New book work! I'm confused! Is there an author with a new book at home? ? ? Can I ask? How many times have your works of about 200,000 words been read... [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I even doubt my life! ! !

777 系 System Reaper, I Rely on Emotion to Control Myself and Become a God Baozi Wants to Lose Weight and Become Lightning9k WordsCompleted —Reads8.5Score—Shelves

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One long story and one short story, no one reads it, the child feels uncomfortable [crying][crying]

778 码 The Coder Traveled Through Time and Picked up Bai Fumei Shenyin VillagerEastern Fantasy238k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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[The coder's counterattack, a wonderful journey of intertwined love and dreams - "The coder traveled through time and picked up Bai Fumei"] Dear readers, today I bring you a novel and unique novel with ups and downs of the plot - "The coder traveled through time and picked up Bai Fumei". This work not only integrates technology and otherworldly style, but also opens up an unprecedented reading experience for you with deeply rooted emotional depictions and highly creative settings. The protagonist is a diligent and dedicated coder. With his solid professional skills and perseverance, he travels through time and space in an accident and lands in another world. A technological storm set off in that magical world. The biggest highlight of the novel is that the protagonist encounters a bunch of beautiful and intelligent Bai Fumei after traveling through time. Their encounter is not accidental, but a clever arrangement of fate. As the two experienced challenges and resolved crises together, their emotions gradually heated up and they composed a love movement that spanned time and space. "The Coders Traveled Through Time and Picked up Bai Fumei" uses its unique perspective to perfectly integrate technological elements with classical charm. It has both the inspirational legend of the coders' counterattack and a sweet and touching love story. It allows readers to not only appreciate the protagonist's wit and courage in using modern wisdom to solve ancient problems, but also to be deeply immersed in romantic and beautiful love.

780 氪 The Krypton Gold Card Draw Is so Unbelievable, Immortal Lord, She Went Crazy Then Go to DaliFantastical Romance676k WordsOngoing 1.1kReads5.8Score210Shelves

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I am a new author, please support me, I have been updating, the heroine is very interesting, the character is very fresh, she has a sense of life, she has her own thoughts, she is a sober heroine! There seems to be some foreshadowing in the plot setting, and there should be a better story later. I hope the author will write more and more quickly [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

781 穿 Dressed as an Abandoned Girl, I Make Money in a Wise Way Nanqiang FeiqiangAncient Romance339k WordsOngoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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I recommend this writing style [bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one] Just when the darkness was about to fall, a breathtaking pink and white suddenly came into view! It's Sakura. On the hillside beside the road, cherry blossoms bloom like clouds in full bloom. Like powdery mist surging, like cloud brocade pouring down, burning in the darkening night. The evening wind carries the cool breeze after the rain, blowing through the branches, and fallen flowers rustle down like rain. So beautiful. It was so beautiful that it was so illusory, so heart-wrenching. The car window was lowered, and the clear moisture wrapped in the sad sweet fragrance of cherry blossoms came to her face. She took a deep breath, right now!

783 寻 Missing Person Endless FunAncient Romance217k WordsCompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves

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New cool article, come and take a look.

785 童 Fairy Train Call Me Beautiful GirlMystery1.0M WordsCompleted 2.4kReads8.8Score375Shelves

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It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone watch it? Fairy tale rules and weird stories yyds

786 赶 Hurry up and Clear the Supermarket Before the Nuclear Sewage Is Released! Prairie RabbitModern Romance202k WordsCompleted 21Reads—Score—Shelves

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Are there any looking at each other? [Cover face][Cover face][Cover face]

787 绫 Ayadong Yuxi, Yuxi, What a DuckEastern Fantasy449k WordsOngoing 3Reads—Score—Shelves

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Need advice [face covering]

788 巢 Chaohu Dragon King Cheng YuzhixingUrban250k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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It will not be interrupted, it will not be unfinished, there are ancient gods in ancient times, false gods in modern times, funny magic flow, no immortality, many fights, semi-brainless, and witty battles. Just imagine, if the Dragon King from all corners of the world really exists, what might happen in this world, novice writers, please take care of me.

789 天 Directory of Heavenly Souls Han YueqiEastern Fantasy964k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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I feel like my traffic has been restricted. Please tell me in my comment area that I follow you.

790 高 Gaowu: New Talents Can Be Extracted in Every Simulation Life Is Like a Dream 4751Urban1.1M WordsOngoing 162.6kReads8.1Score25.3kShelves

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High martial arts, simulator [High martial arts + simulator + decisive killing + invincible horizontal push + omniscience and omnipotence] Traveling through the world of high martial arts, Li Ang starts with a million-dollar loan shark. If it doesn't last three days, the body will be dismantled by the Black Gold Chamber of Commerce, and the cornea, heart, and bone marrow will all be used to pay off the debt! In times of despair, the life simulator is activated!

791 诡 Ten Things to Know About Weird Towns Solitary Seed in the NightMystery135k WordsCompleted 723Reads—Score135Shelves

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New man hu ping[cry]

792 我 The Person I Liked When I Was Young Ignored My Confession, but When I Saw Him After Returning to China, I Cried. Capturing Light and Shadow6k WordsCompleted 216Reads8.5Score—Shelves

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Okay [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

793 我 I, the Descendant of the Heavenly Master, Specialize in Treating All Kinds of Dissatisfaction Burning Sky MokUrban542k WordsOngoing 9Reads—Score—Shelves

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Take a look at this new book, it is absolutely beautiful, the writing style is hilarious and incomparably refreshing, it has the potential to become a god! There is a feeling of looking down on one person, but the protagonist is an authentic descendant of the heavenly master, the Taoism is natural, and he is invincible! The plot is based on the suspense of solving the case, link by link, urban martial arts + suspense, funny and passionate flow! Lu Zhiwei, the protagonist, is a junior uncle. He is young, has great abilities, talks a lot, and is invincible! Qin Lan, the eldest sister, the captain of the Zhenling Division, has both strength and aura, and is invincible in appearance! Wang Xiaopang, a technical nerd, is responsible for comedy! Zhao Heshan, the human shield output, is responsible for the team's defense! Heavenly Master, awesome Claes! Looking forward to it

794 开 The Start Was Strong! Become a God from a Slave! I AmEastern Fantasy110k WordsCompleted 16Reads—Score—Shelves

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In the beginning, he was raped. He was neither lewd nor pornographic. The world laughed at him for being too crazy. He made chicken soup for the world!

795 重 Rebirth, Tearing Apart Scumbag Men and Scumbag Women, Turning Life Around Southwestern Chili Dragon11k WordsCompleted —Reads8.6Score—Shelves

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Rebirth of tearing apart a scumbag man and a scumbag girl [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Please read the new article

796 大 Ruyi Lord of the Great Sui Dynasty Lived up to General Tianbao Lord of Mingyue Palace175k WordsOngoing 1.5kReads—Score229Shelves

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New Novels of the Sui Dynasty

797 天 The Emperor Is Here Charles for a Moment831k WordsOngoing 507Reads8.3Score101Shelves

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Come and review books with me, start with 10 hours

798 末 The Era of Superpowers at the End of the World Lonely Prairie WolfSci-Fi & Apocalypse724k WordsOngoing 120Reads8.8Score—Shelves

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In a post-apocalyptic novel, the protagonist awakens a superpower clone. How does he pursue the truth in the apocalypse? How to survive in the apocalypse?

799 爽 A Guide to the Growth of a Shuangwen Heroine Pumpkin Beans Flying into the SkyAncient Romance136k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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Mutual Help is also known as "After Divorce, I Was Followed by Non-Humans" [Rebirth + Immortal Cultivation + Growth-type Cool Heroine + Not the Holy Mother + Abuse] That day, the woman was wearing silver light armor, holding a silver spear, and fighting an ancient dragon to fight the way of heaven, just asking for a chance of survival for the monk. In the end, he died as a martyr and his soul wandered in another world. However, the shackles of fate cannot be shaken off. People who are separated will eventually meet again. [Unorthodox Text] In her previous life, Ye Jin was killed by the scumbag swordsman Gu Changge, who killed his wife to prove his sermon, and she died with hatred. In this life, she was reborn and decided not to follow the old path of her previous life. She disguised herself as a man and embarked on a completely different path from her previous life. Ye Jin finally knows the truth of the world, "Love the Immortal Lord of Destruction of Love"!

800 破 After Dawn Happy Land Earth Earth EarthEastern Fantasy381k WordsOngoing 605Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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I wrote it myself, I hope you can give me some suggestions, thank you