The Sword's Soul-Seeking Chant
剑曰搜魂
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 146k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Eastern Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
71Chapters
876Reads · all time
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Reader comments 7
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From the description of the disaster in the village at the beginning of the article and the description of the actions of the characters in the tavern, it can be seen that the author put a certain amount of thought into this article. But there are also shortcomings. First of all, the theme is relatively vague. It is also the plot in the tavern. The over-emphasis on the portrayal of other characters made the image of the protagonist diluted, so that I couldn't tell who the protagonist was for a while. A certain portrayal of the surrounding things can indeed subtly affect the work and improve the reader's reading experience, but excessive portrayal will have the opposite effect, so please pay attention. Secondly, there is the problem of character creation. The protagonist's character is slightly single, and his simple and crude way of doing things makes him not so vivid. It's like a simple summary of the story of "The Brave Man Slays the Dragon", but what really excites people is not the act of "The Brave Man Slaying the Dragon", but the touching stories experienced by the "brave man" who is flesh and blood. But it is still joyful to see fantasy novels that are different from Long Aotian's cool novels. Come on, I hope that a "brave" with his own characteristics will appear in your writing.
From being alone, the male protagonist gradually gathers a bunch of strange friends around him. It will be interesting to see how they become the mainstay of the fairy world together! Book lovers are welcome to taste it!
The descriptions are quite vivid and vivid, and I have some skills. However, some paragraphs are too long. It would be better if they could be divided into several paragraphs appropriately [top post]
Reading this novel reminded me of the movie "Ji Gong". The author's writing style is good and he wants to express a lot. The most important thing is that through the male protagonist, he accumulates good deeds and punishes evil, so that justice can be promoted and people can see that good people are rewarded.
It's a very novel story. The author has a lot to express, and the author's writing style is also good! Keep up the good work!
Is it really over? A little bit sad! Nice
It's very well written. I'm looking forward to seeing if there will be a sequel.