Warhammer: A Blood Angel with an Unshakable Mindset

The author's big words are very delicious! 🥰🥰🥰The protagonist is like a succubus! This is the charm of the straight ball system! So delicious patriarchal battle bro that my brain is spinning! 😋Author, we love you so much!

After watching it for a while, I think it's okay. The writing is average to a standard newcomer's level, making it difficult to immerse yourself in it. It has a strong sense of fragmentation, as if you are watching it through a layer of frosted glass. There aren't any other bad points. The protagonist's personality is good, but the author's writing power easily smoothes out this advantage. I hope the author will continue to work hard,,,,

It feels pretty good, but it's a little lacking. Ruth has just returned in the plot, and I don't know when Angel will be available. But the protagonist is really pretty good. Sure enough, because he traveled through 2K, he has a higher sense of morality? Moreover, the people under his hands don't have a strong sense of being naughty. The protagonist is also the type who speaks out when he has something to say. His direct attack is so fierce that it already feels like he is going to attack everyone. Beautiful and powerful, they may even have wings at the back. Wow, Bai Yueguang and her mother are the chosen ones of the Ninth Legion. If they save the angels during the Horus Heresy, they will really be enshrined.

It's very interesting to watch, the overall rhythm is very comfortable, and the plot development feels gradual, reasonable and smooth, and it does not suppress the protagonist's combat power. The difficulties that can be encountered are due to situational constraints or the enemy itself is stronger, rather than causing the protagonist to lose or forget his own abilities. The only disadvantage is that sometimes the sentences are too long and cumbersome, and it is easy to pile up too many descriptive words, which makes it look bloated. An example is: "The core goal of their legion is to reach the core area as soon as possible to conduct defensive operations after destroying various devices on this satellite closest to the core area that are needed to sustain the lives of the locals." If this sentence could be simplified and divided into paragraphs, it would probably look smoother: "The core goal of their army is to destroy the life-support device near the core area on this satellite and reach the core area as soon as possible for defensive operations." However, the above shortcomings do not appear frequently, so overall it is still well written.

It's broken. I've eaten too much shit and it really made me read a good book. It's well written and it downplays the cruelty of Warhammer a lot. It still has a slight sense of warmth. It's super delicious. Teacher, come on! I will always follow you.

There are only a few words in the whole article, and what I want to read is this mouth! ! ! ! Warhammer's specialty gravity system is really delicious. I love this. Please order more. I like the straight-ball good guy the most, and Ye's character description is particularly good. The author's writing power in shaping the characters is the best. In other aspects, it is a little immature but quite satisfactory, with a dull and dull flavor. The description of a few scenes may be a little vague and unclear, but overall it's harmless! Author, we love you! You must work hard!

The author's setting really stood out to me. I liked it very much, so much that I ignored the shortcomings of the writing style. But the writing style can be improved, but the author's inspiration cannot be replaced. Please be sure to update it (*≧▽≦)

Generally speaking, it seems okay. The setting is relatively new, but it can be seen that the author's writing style is not good. I hope he can improve his writing style in the future. It can be seen that it is not written by someone who hates intelligence. Come on, author.

At present, it can be determined that it is purely hand-written. This kind of immature writing is precisely what AI is least likely to write. Judging from the changes in my tomato novels in the past few months, the author with good writing style will be closer to AI in terms of writing style and vocabulary description. A novel like this that can clearly see the shortcomings but is understandable is definitely not written by artificial intelligence [OK] [Read carefully]

A very good book of Blood Angel, it made my body spin wildly and spiral up to the sky😋 Non-toxic and edible, a very good one with the little angel Ye Feng who has great love!