Sequence Game: Starting as a Charmander, I Burn Through the Heavens

It's very thoughtful and doesn't have any logical flaws, but the AI ​​smell is too strong, and there are almost no traces of human hand-painting. There is no human detail and humor, so it is above average.

I like this kind of interweaving of various systems and some ideas, just like the enhancement of the world of immortality. Personally, I think that the system is not necessary. It is better to turn it into a talent. The main reason is that conspiracy theories will appear in the system, and talent will not

It's very good. I've been looking for this type of unlimited flow novels. Although the writing style is a bit immature compared to others, the plot and world view are very good. I must keep writing. The author [crying] It's so difficult to find this type of novel.

Let me go, author, this is really good-looking, would it be better if it exploded [licking the screen] To be specific, the copy of the Wind Creek Inn is indeed a bit delayed. If you are not reviewed initially, it will only be more delayed. After all, it is only an early copy, so it should be more compact. It is appropriate to wait until the middle of the plot to complete a long copy. In the early stage of the novel, it is best to write a large number of short, fast and fast copies, which are story-telling, profile settings, and transitions. Then there's the question of whether the blue storage space is too supermodel. I don't know what the characteristics of other blue equipment are, but this big space and bringing real items into the dungeon feels really supermodel.

The idea setting is quite novel. But that Pokémon sequence is only a little passive? Can't some active Pokémon skills be learned from sequences? It has evolved once, and there will be many useful skills in the skill pool. Since we are going to follow the path of fire, things like the residual fire sword, the dragon-slaying magic of fire, Xiao Yan, and Orn can be regarded as the upper limit of growth for playing with fire and the sequences with good growth potential, so put them up when they should be.

Some of the settings in the article are very interesting. They basically set the tone for internal peace within the same camp. The plot is also okay. The protagonist can be said to be invincible (at least the plot is not frustrating). There are not many female characters (two were banned by the author after just two appearances). It is determined that there is no female protagonist. Come on, author, please update. When school starts, I won't be able to catch up on updates every day (it will become half a month to catch up on updates (sad))

Yes, except for the writing style which is a bit jerky, the rest is very good. As long as the eunuch is not a prisoner, it will definitely be rated seven to eight points. It can be regarded as a fine product.

It's okay, but I turned into a small fire dragon instead of a beast, please pay attention to distinguish

It's a funny novel, quite interesting.

It's pretty good. The updates are too slow. Please update more and the rating should go up.