The Game Arrives: Starting with the Law of the Dead, I Rule the Ages

Not bad, not bad. Not a saint at all. The damage is quite big. As far as the performance is concerned, it is invincible at the same level [laughter] Let's just write the protagonist to death. Aliens are arrogant in the secret realm of the school competition. There are life-saving equipment, which is the third level. The protagonist fights life and death with the students, always betting on luck, and there are no life-saving measures. The most is the second level.

After reading it for a while, there are no bad points. It has surpassed 80% of Tomato books. I feel that it is a very classic fantasy novel style. The writing style will be better if it is improved, but overall it is good. Five stars encourage it. I feel that the writing style is indeed too immature, and some of the plot descriptions are rather exaggerated, which is a bit different from my initial expectations. I am a bit disappointed. Of course, if you can ignore these, you can still watch it.

For works that score 8~9 points (I rarely get above 9 points), the first is the necromancer. Finally, he is not a mage who can only summon skeletons. What kind of necromancer is that kind of mage? Then there is a sense of satisfaction, the logic is very smooth, and there are no inexplicable emotional scenes. The psychic hopes not to become the heroine. The protagonist's crushing force is enough, not the kind where he fights for his life after being cheated and there are a group of people who can fight him 50-50. Anyway, it's on my recommended book list (I have a recommended book list on my homepage, although no one reads it, but all the gold I've mined in my history is in it) It is said that there will be a heroine. I didn't pay attention when I watched it. I thought there was no heroine. It will depend on the situation when the time comes. If it is a mess, I will withdraw.

There is a story and growth. I like this kind of novel the most. In the next copy, I change some equipment to get a skill and a few attributes. The author surfs the Internet intensively, and there will be some moderate jokes from time to time, which is perfect.

It's pretty good, but it's a bit deliberate. Every dungeon is an extreme comeback (one dungeon doesn't seem to be). It's quite refreshing, and it's also exciting to fight. If the heroine is that fourth-level psychic, she can fight against Lu and his wife. But all dungeons cannot be that difficult, and the final bosses of each dungeon are outrageous. There is no obvious poisonous point. It took three days to catch up, update on August 2nd. But I feel that if the dungeon is a little more difficult, normal characters can pass the level. Rule-based monster novels are just that kind of monster. No matter how difficult it is, it is rare for everyone except the protagonist to die (I mean it is a small part compared to all the rule-based monster stories. I have read two rule-based monster stories before that were very difficult. The pass rate was very low. Only the protagonists passed the level two or three times, and then new people from other countries were replaced)

I feel that the writing is okay. As a novice writer, this one is really well written. What stands out is the knowledge-oriented feeling of the mage flow, and then adds some infinity and the like. The writing of dungeons and the like is relatively average. It is not considered to be very good, nor is it too bad. The writing of Vientiane Paradise is a bit thin, the struggle is not reflected, and the excitement is not outstanding. The plot inside feels quite average, but I feel that overall it is better. And the author, for your extraordinary system, you can take a look at Qi Peijia's Super Mechanic. How similar are your two systems? Well, refer to that system and then improve your own settings. I feel it will be more complete and better. His one also follows the five systems of mind, machine, mage, superpower, and martial arts. He also has a system game. My feeling is that it is similar to leveling up and adding points, but there is no copy. You can refer to his system. The second one is about the growth and setting of the protagonist, as well as his necromancer system. I suggest you take a look at Samsara Paradise. In the early and middle stages of Samsara Paradise, there is a supporting character named Solomon. He is in the undead, technique, and mage system. If you refer to his character to improve your own settings, I feel that the undead system is more difficult to write now, and Solomon's character-like necromancer is a relatively novel point. You can look at his way of diverging ideas and improving inspiration. If you still have that copy, you can read more novels such as Horror Paradise, Reincarnation Paradise, My Healing Game, Infinite Horror, and learn more. The copy of Thriller Paradise mainly comes from the author. He reads those literary works and the like, which is not easy to write. The copy of Samsara Paradise in the early stage basically comes from that fan, so I won't refer to that one. The copy in the middle and later stages still comes from Hunyou. So I feel that you can read more about the plots of various games. You can refer to the games that are much older now. Combining fighting and exploration, or DNF, Dungeons and Dragons, they are all very good.

This novel is actually quite good. The world view, characters, and career settings are very interesting, and the plot also shows that a lot of thought was put into it. Overall, I think it's very good. Whether it is the setting of the character, the setting of the realm, the various career types, the complex skills specialization, and even some foreshadowings and protagonists, the various soldiers under the Necromancer's banner, the main characters, are flesh and blood. In an environment like tomatoes, this is a rare masterpiece. Unfortunately, affected by age and experience, the writing style is a bit rough, and some plots are handled awkwardly. But sincerity is there, I think it is a good work with great potential. I saw a small problem later. The heroine's blacksmith's ability suddenly appeared without any foreshadowing.

It looks okay from the front. . . I didn't notice that it had a single female protagonist at first, but after reading the introduction, I found that it had a single female protagonist. After searching, the setting of the female protagonist happened to hit my mark. . . See you again in the future. . 😂

I've only read 5 chapters, and the progress is relatively slow, which is normal. If you mind, I suggest you just quit. Let me talk about my thoughts about the heroine. I think we can write emotional scenes in the way of "company is the longest confession of love". When forming a team, add a little foreshadowing or details, and then slowly reveal them later. People say that love grows with time. Of course, it's just a suggestion. After all, I'm just a reader, not a professional writer 🤦

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