Cursed by an Original Sin Relic? But I'm the Park's Favorite

It's very beautiful. Some of the settings remind me of Samsara Paradise, but the styles are different. They all have their own characteristics. I really like the paradise flow. The author's writing is very good. The protagonist is smart and rational. The lone wolf without CP is the best [blowing kiss]

It's an okay paradise flow. The plot and writing are not stretchy, and sometimes there are highlights. There are no serious logical problems with the protagonist's character. I feel it should be 8+ points. To be honest, I have very low requirements for foreign novels. As long as the main character doesn't have a tiger-like body, the boss will kneel down in awe. When I open the box, all of them are divine outfits. Inexplicably, I have a holy father's heart. I have no cp and am ambiguous with a bunch of opposite sex. I am very satisfied... The more interesting the copy is, the better it is. The main reason is that it is still too thin now and the world view has not been fully developed. Come on, the author, don't suddenly pull your hips later, TAT.

The pace of the dungeon is comfortable. A dungeon is neither too long to be read nor too short to explain things clearly. The protagonist is cool and powerful, and does not deliberately overwhelm the combat power. The smart character has been successfully established. The background is also slowly being foreshadowed. I can watch it endlessly. I have read a lot. This book will definitely become popular if it can maintain its level. There are no inexplicable and abrupt body descriptions in the article, and there are no yy female characters. I really recommend it. The only drawback is that the number of words is too few and the chapters are not enough to read. Now that I have read it, I don't know how many chapters the author will update every day.

I think the author of the introduction borrowed the world view of Samsara Paradise. This book review is for readers of Samsara Paradise. 1: The Samsara World World Park has no emotions and can only execute programs, but the protagonist bargaining with the park at the beginning is a bit awkward. 2. The Beginner's Trial in this book is directly from the native world. Just think of it as the author's unique world view setting. 3. The second novice trial is called "Abyss Train". Although it has nothing to do with the abyss, "Mithril" appears in it. At the end, the protagonist explodes an "Elemental Whetstone". Apart from the novice trial, he is not an official contractor yet. If you tell me that I have come into contact with "Mithril" and "Element", I will treat it as not being in the same rank. 4. The novice trial, the native world, the new contractor, and the original sin object. How are these four related? I really can't explain this point. I know that the points I mentioned above are just making trouble, but the author's introduction borrowed the setting of Samsara Paradise. I clicked in after seeing these. I must have incorporated the world view of Samsara Paradise into it. I stopped reading it later and only read so much to write a review. Five stars encourage me.

It's like a reincarnation paradise with unlimited streaming, and there are currently no derivative worlds written about it, which is a good point. What I worry about when writing unlimited streaming on Tomato is to maintain the book. It will not be very good to follow the updated data one copy at a time. It depends on whether it can provide traffic. I have seen the fourth dungeon so far. There is nothing about the stupid plot in the first three dungeons. Some people in the reviews said it is relatively dull. Maybe it is because the protagonist does not have any cheats? I find it quite comfortable. I hope the update speed will be increased after the tomatoes are given.

It's a great book. After reading the replacement of Samsara Paradise, there are really few unlimited streams + extra points + copies. At first, Tomato had a few books, but now either they have stopped updating, or the protagonist is too frustrated. This book is quite enjoyable. Come on, brother who writes books!

So far, I think it's OK. The protagonist is not a strong player, nor is he too smart. The author writes well, and the direction of the plot is something I never expected. This is very nice for a bookworm.

The book is okay, Paradise is very well written. The problem is that this kind of infinite flow seems to require one copy after another. When there is less writing, it is easier to maintain the book and not easy to dig out. I hope I can stick to it.

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Hahaha, the first 20 chapters are quite interesting! Although it's a bit hasty to comment now, I do see what a paradise book should look like. The essence of the book "Paradise" is to have fragile trust that is not solid, intrigues during deception, temporary cooperation in the face of danger, and unexpected reversals in desperate situations! These are the secrets that every author who writes about Rakuen-ryu should be proficient in. Unfortunately, by the time he reached Chapter 3000, he had forgotten how to continue writing a good story. I hope you can continue to work hard and let the park have a place in online articles!