The Southern Archives: A Different Kind of Zhang Family

It is recommended not to have a cp, Dumei is the most enjoyable [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Very, very, very good-looking. So far, this is the best-looking Nanfang Files fanfic I have ever seen. The protagonist's medical and poison skills are fully equipped. Although he is very good at it, it is only compared to the Zhang family. Hina is still very strong. ᕙ( •̀ ᗜ •́ )ᕗ It can be seen that the author loves the characters in the book very much. The original characters are all very full and three-dimensional. Although they are only supporting roles, they are all given their own independent personalities, just like living people. This is rare in fan fiction. I haven't seen the love line yet, but the plot with the master is the most delicious I have eaten so far. It doesn't have to be love. Both the master and Hina are full of love for each other. The relationship between them is like a tiny spark in the dark, holding up the hands when falling (ps. I am not actually eating pure family love, but it is good even if they are not a couple in the end. Watching each other is also delicious (ᗒᗣᗕ)՞) But I still support that this is a couple (ok, I know this is impossible, because the author has already said it, but let me whisper it, please) ⌒꩜ᯅ꩜⌒

It's very good-looking, but the latest plot has begun to be written in a CP direction. I hope the main text will be CP-free. No one except the master will put her first. She deserves the best and the purest. If you really want to write it, just write it as a side story. I'm afraid the main text will collapse. Maybe it's because she's following the plot line, but her highlight moments seem to be a bit missing~

For now, it looks good! 1. The introduction should only be about the subsequent plot and some ideas of the author. Currently, the heroine does not have a cp. 2. The heroine advocates Haina. She is an unlucky person who has lived for three lives. The fourth life in the next era, that is, this book, finds her family again, and the details of getting along with her family, that is, the master, are so interesting, haha. 3. At present, Sea Shrimp and Sea Salt have just appeared. The plot lines are basically outside the story and have little connection with the original work. 4. The heroine is not a force person, but an agility person. She mainly uses medicine, poisons and hidden weapons. Her abilities are being developed. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, I like the current plot and narrative logic (﹡ˆoˆ﹡)

The overall plot and direction are still very good, and the plot development is also very interesting. Hina's character is not a popular character in the fandom. It is very special and only focuses on medical skills. But there are some things that I personally find awkward, such as punctuation and quotation marks. In the book, quotation marks "..." And "..." Are a bit mixed in later chapters (only to find out that the ellipses are dots "..." One by one), and the sentence patterns are also somewhat repetitive. It may just be the teacher's hand quirks and habits. There are also a lot of dashes. Apart from these things that I personally don't like, the plot development is still very good, the plot development is also very smooth, and the daily interaction with the master is also very interesting.

I can only say that he must be supported by five stars. That is to say, although he does not mainly follow the main line of going to the southern archives, he has his own life and the people he currently knows. It is simply written very well. Good, very good, super awesome, invincible, it can generate many different plots. This is the kind of fanfic I really want to see. Of course, I don't want to compare it with other people, but it is very comfortable and typical. Well, creating your own OC and then going in to save everyone is different. They are the ones that slowly and slowly infiltrate bit by bit in different routes. I love it so much. I just want to know if the heroine will have CP. It seems that the author has not replied.

Don't want to score points. The setting of the heroine is super good. I hope the author will keep it up. Don't have CP, don't have CP, don't have CP. The heroine's baby is uniquely beautiful, and family and friendship can be there.

Yes, it is recommended to enter the main line as soon as possible. Write about other Zhang family members and the little brother. I like it. The heroine has never read Tomb Raiders Notes, so she has no impression. Or maybe because there are no protagonists such as Zhang Qiling, the heroine didn't think about it.

I like the character of Haina very much. She is both a doctor and a poisoner. Moreover, her personality is very lovable. I wonder if there will be a relationship with the protagonist in the future. Is it all sea salt and sea shrimp, or is it no cp? I am looking forward to the subsequent plot, and the author will give it my best.

It's good-looking, and the characters grow up slowly. It's not a brainless novel. Even if there is a plot, the protagonist also has his own growth points, and it's also good-looking in daily life. I hope the writing gets better and better. I support you [like][like][ask for more updates][please ask for more updates] and it's really not enough. I finished it in one night [crying]