Desert Survival: I Cloned a Tree and Raised a Beast Legion

It's pretty good, but there are some places where the writing isn't very good. I'll give you a suggestion. If you see it, you can change it. Everything else is good. At the beginning, he threw sand at the scorpion, saying that after it hit his face, the attack deflected, and now when his clone scorpion hit the level 5 centipede, he said that the scorpion's compound eyes are naturally resistant to sand [laughter] Saw the latest one. Make a follow-up review It's okay, if there's anything interesting, look behind the author!

Real review⭐⭐⭐ I have read 66 chapters so far, and I have read about 200 chapters. ① Plot · On the surface, it is desert survival, but in essence it is a "pet upgrade flow" framework. · The main plot trend can basically be summarized as follows: explore the map → trigger battle → pets assist → cycle advancement. · The protagonist's own combat power is limited and he relies heavily on pets in battle. Overall, he is not a refreshing hero, with a weak sense of excitement and a slow pace. ② Setting (1) The oasis protective shield is equal to the protagonist's health. If the shield breaks, the protagonist dies. (2) Upgrading the character level does not increase the attribute value, but only expands the backpack capacity; in the later stage, the level system is further diluted and the sense of presence is reduced. (3) A large amount of setting information is vague and general, relying mostly on the protagonist's unilateral speculation; key life and death crises rely on the author's ability to arrange. ③ Protagonist creation and writing style · The protagonist's name is "Chen Mo", and the writing often matches his name - the protagonist often falls into silence or has an inner monologue, which is boring and slow-moving. · The plot advancement relies too much on the protagonist's inner speculation and psychological activities, and the overall writing style is slightly closed, as if the protagonist always lives in his own speculative world. ④ Overall atmosphere and worldview foreshadowing ·The writing is not light-hearted, with a sense of mist and conspiracy. Such as: · All survivors are male, and there are no female characters in the channel; · The essence of survival is the "Trial of the Immortal Kingdom", which is a trial for cultivating immortals; · Set up reversal suspense such as "Fourteen days later, all the living will die and the dead will be resurrected".

I have read 49 chapters so far, which is tied, AI polished, can read, food and grass, author, come on!

It took a few hours to tie it up, it looks great! ! ! It's a refreshing novel, and I don't abuse the protagonist. The male protagonist is affectionate and righteous, not a virgin, and his three views are correct. I also like the pets, but I like the wolf the most. It's so kissable, just like a puppy. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Come on, author!

I tied it in one night. I have nothing to say. It is very interesting. The plot rhythm is compact and smooth. The character settings are reasonable. Overall, it looks good. It is just too little. Haha. I hope the author will update it more. The world view is quite large. It depends on how the author writes later. I have never seen this kind of world view. It is very attractive to me.

It looks good so far. There is no big problem with the overall logic of the idea, but there are some details that the author could pay more attention to. 1. The dates planted by the protagonist are physical props that can optimize the attack posture of creatures. After giving them to the first three pets, the protagonist ate them all by himself. The snakes, rats and earthworms he conquered later were not eaten (at least I didn't see it written, the protagonist ate them all by himself). This can be mentioned to make up for the setting. 2. This amount is enough for anyone to see, please add more [laughs] 3. It's best if you can keep writing, but the most important thing about Tomato is that you can't keep writing. I've seen too many writings that were okay but failed in the early stages, so I hope the author can work hard.

Surprisingly not bad [full] Good things are in a hurry. I don't know if I can copy them without trying. I have already used several cherished items and props directly.

I think it's very good-looking, a very standard survival story about collecting pets and upgrading them. The protagonist deserves to be called Chen Mo, he is really silent, Golden Finger is very good, refreshing enough without being too exaggerated...~It is just that the text is too thin.

It's okay, there are some small poison spots, but overall it's not bad, food and grass.

It's a pretty good book, no poisonous points have been found yet, and the language style is concise and efficient. Originally I only gave ratings without writing reviews, but I suddenly thought of this book when I was reading another group lord survival novel, and then the more I thought about it, the more wrong I felt. In my opinion, the underlying design of this book is problematic. Even if the world is set in a desert, the upgradable "facilities" such as fruit trees, defense covers, and grasslands in the book also show that this book is a survival lord book. So the question is, where are the soldiers? In this book, the units appear in the form of pets. In this way, the focus of explosive troops, unit selection and routes is gone. The author's choice is to use the space to describe the evolution of pets and daily plots, which is a bit like a road novel. But the data aspect in this book is not obvious. Take the protagonist as an example. The protagonist takes a strengthening potion and claims to be strengthened, but where is the strengthening? Have no idea. Perhaps it can only be seen from the fact that the protagonist in the book can defeat stronger wild animals. The same goes for those pets, but with an additional appearance change. What's this? Isn't this the cartoon we watched when we were kids? If a pet changes its appearance, it means it is stronger. Since it is a cartoon, is the focus on the plot? Yes, the focus of this book seems to be on exploration and plot (I feel this way after reading about 30 chapters). The author guides readers through the unknown mysteries and truths waiting to be discovered in the desert. But I really want to know, if the author wants to focus on writing these, why did he write a survival lord article...