The Worlds Unite, and Luckily, I Became an Immortal Long Ago

This is probably the pig's trotter who is the best at leapfrogging in the novels I have read. Damn, I have learned a lot. I can see a bad old man running away without any cost when pig's trotter leapfrogs. He even fought with pig's trotter for a long time before pig's trotter got the upper hand. Okay, okay, this system is following the right person [smile] In the end, Pigfoot would rather call him a low-level senior than have a good conversation with Earth college students. He thought, "I am not the Holy Mother, and everyone has their own destiny." [Smile]

There are two lines of development. There is nothing to say about the two-line development. A line of the protagonist who cultivates immortality and a line of spiritual energy reviving the earth. Judging from the description, there is a chance to merge and then show off. In fact, it is three lines. The third line is the six people who crossed Mount Tai. I have reason to suspect that these six people will show off in the later stage and save the world. Then the book is poisonous. It is very likely that they are those six people, and two of them even entered the sect. Then I directly said that the male protagonist brought out the snail noodles in the front. Is it possible to be recognized later? It is not terrible to leak the waistcoat. I am afraid of this kind of brown sugar entanglement. Come up, carry it with you for everything, and then laugh and say nothing. Secondly, the second poisonous point is, is the male protagonist's original earth on the other side of the earth? If so, will the male protagonist go to find his relatives again? Don't say so decisively, but in the end he still has to see his relatives. Third, drop the waistcoat, because the book is divided into three major stages: humans, immortals, and gods, and the male protagonist is in the middle of the fairyland, basically at the apex. If the waistcoat is leaked, other people's things are leaked, but not all are leaked. Although there are disciples of the sect on the scene, what is spread is the junior brother's, and there is even the possibility that the junior brother will use it to smear the blame later. Fourth, why did you forget about Lin Fan and go back to the sect directly? Then there should be no intersection between Lin Fan and the elegant sister and brother in the later stage. You don't want to go out and meet a bunch of weaklings, and then bring them back when you think they are talented. It will make your sect very cheap. Advantage! ! ! Novels about cultivating immortals are very common, and there are also stories about the combination of spiritual energy reviving the earth and the world of cultivating immortals. However, the male protagonist is considered a genius and his strength is revealed quickly. There is nothing to say about this. And except for Lin Fan's handling, there is no big problem with letting the siblings fend for themselves. It is even handled well. Finally, there are the six people. There are good and bad problems in dealing with them. It depends on how the author writes. If they are written badly, they will be poisonous. There will definitely be drama in the later stage. Another point is the character of the protagonist. He kills decisively and does not pretend to be a pig. The only enemy he spares is the old man whose sect is stronger than his but weaker. It depends on whether he will take revenge in the later stage. The last thing is not to be so inconsistent in character. I told you to ignore those six people, but in the end, I had to write to the Foundation Establishment Law, and then left four people in the outer city who had no talent for cultivating immortals. You guys don't know, right? Is this really the original earth? I feel like it's talking about cultivating one's nature. If you want the male protagonist to be perfect, he probably has to find his family. The probability is very high. In short, the writing is average, no AI, the author's writing ability is still a little bit better, please polish the character dialogue more, don't joke casually, just talk lightly, don't describe facial expressions in detail except when mocking the opponent and scolding.

The whole work can be called a rare masterpiece. The author's writing style is gentle and sophisticated, the narrative rhythm is just right, the speed is appropriate, and the reading is smooth and comfortable, without any redundant and boring passages. All the characters created in the book are free from stereotypes. Their personalities are rich in layers, their behavioral logic fits the characters' true feelings, and their emotions and sorrows are real and palpable, making them easy for people to empathize with. The plot is cleverly laid out, with countless small foreshadowings laid out in the early stages, which are all wrapped up in the later chapters. The twists and turns are well designed and will not forcefully create conflicts. The story not only contains ups and downs of the plot, but also contains delicate and moving emotions and deep thoughts that are worthy of careful consideration. Whether it is joy, regret or choice, they are all vividly depicted and have a strong sense of empathy. The complete and grand story frame is matched with delicate and detailed descriptions, and the atmosphere is full of atmosphere. You will still be immersed in the story after closing the book. It is worth reading and pondering over and over again.

Even if it's hard to explain, it's not like it's only around 5:00. I think it's quite interesting. The plot that starts from another world and then merges with the earth is also relatively novel. The protagonist is invincible and the old six sects. The plot is also very funny.

I looked through the comments and saw a lot of people talking about Junior Sister. There is no need to worry at all. A character was created just for the sake of the system and only exists for two or three chapters. Secondly, there are some hidden points about the people from the Earth. I personally think it makes sense. Reviving the aura of the Earth and bringing it to the spiritual world. It's a good idea to connect the resurgence of heaven and earth, but the protagonist is a person who has traveled through time. Facing fellow villagers, the situation is actually quite embarrassing. If one is not good, it will become a poisonous point. However, the protagonist is not a mother-in-law, not a holy mother, and is more decisive in doing things, at least that is said. Then there is the label of this book, which is invincible, but I saw that in more than 50 chapters, no one stronger than the protagonist has appeared. Even if the realm is higher than him, the protagonist, as a genius, quickly breaks through the realm, so it is equivalent to being invincible all the time. There is currently no one who can suppress the protagonist, but as a semi-invincible person, it is possible that a person will appear in the earth later, which will become a poisonous point, so I still ran away.

The plot feels good, nothing particularly unbearable, and it occasionally makes people laugh. Maybe it's because I haven't watched enough. It's just that this "fairy" is different from what I thought When you see someone flying over, you know that this person is in a realm before becoming an immortal [what] I saw that the protagonist is in the realm of an immortal, but his property does not include a high-grade spiritual stone [what] I saw a small flying boat entering the city, and they had to pay to park the boat [what] No? How underdeveloped is the weapon refining industry in your world? There is no small flying magic weapon, and there is no shrinking magic weapon? [Smile]

I don't know why your rating is so low. After reading the whole story, I think it's okay. The realm is adapted from the realm of Luo Xiaohei Zhanji and adapted. According to the Tomato website, it is still good. There are no serious shortcomings. It is worthy of encouragement.

Not to say too much, the male protagonist is invincible but funny, more casual, low-key and unassuming, hahahahahahahaha I laughed to death

The first twenty-eight chapters are okay, let's keep an eye on it (I want to see the protagonist steal the Junior Sister's Foundation Establishment Pill) 666666[awkward laughter]

I have read Chapter 63 so far. As an old bookworm, I can recommend here. There is no big problem. It is definitely better than those with a score of 7.0 Or so. Overall, the cultivation level is relatively reasonable. I don't know how old the first genius in the Eastern Region is. Anyway, he is from the younger generation. He has a fairyland cultivation level, and he still has no memory of the past life. The third junior brother is less than 20 years old and has a fairyland cultivation level, but he has the memory of the previous life. It is more reasonable to become an immortal so early. The protagonist is a real immortal in his 20s. After all, he is the protagonist. The main thing about reading the novel is to enjoy it. There is no problem in giving some plug-ins to the protagonist. The cultivation of other people is still very reasonable. There is no mention of other people who are in their 20s and have cultivation in the fairyland. Those who have cultivated in the fairyland are relatively older. Strangers generally have a no-nonsense attitude, but they are really kind to their own people. I exposed my cultivation for my senior brother and master. If I write steadily at this pace, I can get at least 8 points. I hope I won't collapse later. It's a very good book, which is not common in Tomato.