Eighteen Years in Hiding, One Day to Outshine All the Geniuses

The writing is very good, and the character of the protagonist is very comfortable to watch. Don't imitate those novels that portray the male protagonist as a pervert and a pig. However, if you want to retain readers, you can consider letting the female protagonist appear earlier. The female protagonist should also be shaped according to the level of the male protagonist. Don't make the female protagonist an ordinary genius or a vassal of the male protagonist.

The author has a lot of ink and has a lot to say. He handles the characters well, and the multiple geniuses are well contrasted. The words are also very flavorful. It can be seen that he has literary skills. It's a pity that there are too many things to say, which makes it cumbersome. Many descriptions are different, but the meaning is the same. The performance of Tianjiao appears one after another, and there are many reactions but there are repetitions. Some can be deleted. Show more of their personality, such as unwillingness to admit defeat or personal experiences. Nowadays, there are many geniuses, but they only know that they are geniuses. In the end, they are just foils, lacking the rich side of the side characters, as if the world is for Gu Changyuan's script. However, according to Gu Changyuan's way, he must read countless people and write a few unforgettable characters. It may be as important as always paving the way for Gu Changyuan's performance. For example, if a very familiar character dies in battle, such as Qin Lie, the character's personality and emotions will be strong and alive. I don't dare to comment too much, it's really well written.

I dug it by accident and tied it in one go! Let me talk about my feelings first. The male protagonist is different from the fantasy immortal cultivators I have seen in the past. He looks bland, but it does not make people feel boring. I just feel quiet. You can breathe with him and look at the mountains together, and your heart will calm down. The author does not write about how evil he is in cultivation and how gorgeous he is. Peers, only about his soul, the growth of his consciousness and his physique are gradually at the same frequency. It may be a bit boring for those book friends who like to watch slaps in the face or forceful characters, but the new genre is also worth reading. It is still young in the early stage and there is no clear emotional line, but the feeling will be very good. I hope you continue to work hard! ! The content itself is written very rigorously and meticulously, and the world view is expanded bit by bit, and I am growing up with Chang Yuan, like I am exploring a map, which is very interesting! There are no big cliche disputes, everyone is a genius, competing with each other and pushing each other to make progress! Chang Yuan is not a standout, nor does he stand out from the crowd, but this era and the world chose him. He is neither arrogant nor impetuous, nor resentful nor suspicious. Chang Yuan has always walked steadily. The Gu family is also very good. They did not raise him to waste or pamper him. They watched him and protected him. They watched him take steps and which direction he went, and then moved his steps. He did not pretend to be smart. The really good atmosphere was Zhang Yuan's greatest confidence and support. Also, I really like Zhiwei's mother and Xiao Qingge! Cute! Several brothers and sisters of Zhang Yuan's generation and several geniuses of the same generation from other families are also very cute and interesting! Everyone has interesting souls! I want to continue to watch them grow! Come on, boss! ! ! !

The protagonist is of high character, but the writing is not overly exaggerated. There is no vilification or stupidity of the supporting characters. The people currently appearing are all very intelligent. The flow of writing is very comfortable. It's just that the first point of conflict fell a little flat. But it doesn't matter. It's looking good so far. I don't know if it's a harem story. At present, it seems that both my cousin and Luo Jinghuang have a crush on the protagonist.

It's not the kind where our imperial clan has a peerless emperor who is so talented and arrogant, but the kind of bland one where he is indeed very powerful, but so plain that you don't think he is very powerful, but you know that he is the one who is destined to die. The writing is really novel and better than those mindless cool articles.

Overall, I feel like this book is quite good now. The text has a strong sense of pictures, and many scenes can easily form pictures in my mind (I am a book listener, and I read less and listen more), especially some big scenes, character appearances and atmosphere foreshadowing, and there is a sense of immersion. When listening to the book, it doesn't feel dry, but you can follow the plot, which I think is a plus. However, some passages in the book are not completely without problems. There are some repetitive descriptions in some places, or the details can be polished. But overall, the flaws outweigh the advantages. The rhythm of the plot, the momentum of the characters, and the development of the world view are all strong. It is a type of book that gets better and better the more you listen to it. According to Tomato, it is still a good book. I hope that the author can continue to optimize the details, reduce some repetitive expressions, and continue to write the characters and plot solidly. I think this book is still worth pursuing. [Sending Hearts]

It's really super pretty! ! ! It's really different from any book I've read before! ! The characters are created very well, and although the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not many yet, they are really well written! It just felt very comfortable and after the male lead came out, he kept thinking about the female lead! ! I would like to see the mountains and rivers of Wuzhou with her! ! I really can't do it anymore! So pretty! ! I have read so many books and am writing a book review for the first time.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. The battle lasted for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

Light, everything is light. This kind of writing style is generally difficult and tends to be slow and steady. It is suitable for describing characters and plots in detail to win. There is still too much content missing, and the description is too bland and not profound. It may be necessary to strengthen the description of group portraits and details, but it needs to be avoided from being written into a running account. In addition, I have a small suggestion. The audience for this article so far should not be suitable for having an affair or having a harem. Is it possible to refine the protagonist's personality, enhance his personal charm, and attract die-hard fans?

Very good. I also hope that the heroine will be a new and attractive character that people like. At the same time, I also hope that it will continue to be good-looking. Big boost for the author.