The Profound Heaven Cultivation Chronicle

The author begins by telling how times make heroes. A major event occurs. The protagonist, who has been living in confusion, experiences a series of events, including dangers and gains. The most important thing is the change in personality and psychological growth. The writing is very compact, the story progresses very quickly, and there are also branch lines and foreshadowings, but everything revolves around the main line. The overall feeling is very good and very readable. Come on! The plot design is reasonable and the language is fluent and natural. The key is that the author updates steadily and in large quantities, with seven or eight thousand words written every day. It is very good and worth following. In the author's writing, the protagonist has a strong human touch. He has obsessions that ordinary people often encounter, and he will actively and non-utilitarianally do things. This means more changes and conflicts, and the character's image is also fuller. He has the commonality of immortal cultivators and has his own unique character traits. Come on!

Come on author, it's great, it's great, it will become popular sooner or later, but it's just that newbies are not popular right now. I read the novel Above the Gray Fog, and no one read it at first, but now I see quite a lot of people reading it [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss], God is worthy of your hard work

The writing is really good. Different from the traditional Long Aotian-style male protagonist, the male protagonist in this article is more real. Although there is a golden finger, it is not big, and it is discovered by the male protagonist himself, not from the sky. The writing has the charm of a classical fairy tale, especially the theory about spiritual roots, which is refreshing. I especially like Brother Wu. I don't know if he will appear in the future. The only shortcoming may be that the early stage is not exciting enough, and the focus is on the foreshadowing. In fact, I may prefer to read the content about the sect, so I can only wait for the update.

At present, the writing seems to be more natural and a bit smoky, and both the protagonists and villains have high IQs. Unlike some writings about Goldfinger that are too strong and sweep across a large area, it is just a cool novel without too many plots.

🈚The system has no heaven-defying qualifications, no extraordinary IQ, and a more realistic world of cultivating immortals (reasonable sect mechanism, for the sake of opportunity, it is not a mindless move, but a must go), a masterpiece! Suggestion: The protagonist already has a relatively good background. Don't give too many opportunities. You can give the opportunity to other characters. Try to put aside the description of the realm of repair and maintenance, and focus on describing the process of hard work, the process of realization, and the humanities and worldliness of sect battles.

The writing style is very delicate. I hope the author will assign a female protagonist to the protagonist [laughing] and keep up the good work!

The characters are described in detail, and the rhythm of the story is not too slow ~ Every volume and every piece of talent is online. The more I watch it, the better it gets. I'm still catching up on it. It's a lot of fun [face covering] because there are so many Taoist friends who interact with me every day [laughs]

The writing is really good, the writing is smooth, and the plot is exciting. It is rare to see brothers from the same hometown in the world of cultivation who are sincere but not brainless. There are a few chapters, not enough to read. A little jerky, but overall pretty good.

A twenty-year-old bookworm would rate it as a novel that is comparable to ordinary people and even surpasses in writing style. It's a pity that the online literary world is so busy now, and it's not easy to get good articles. Those who were ten or eight years ago would have been able to become gods.

It's very interesting, very real, and very thoughtful. I've been reading fantasy cultivation for more than ten years. It's a really good book. It describes the rise of a middle-aged man who can be regarded as a cultivator. It describes the psychological journey of a middle-aged man and also well describes the relationship between him and his senior brother and their belonging to the sect. This alone makes the characters flesh and blood and three-dimensional. The text is already beyond a lot.