After Being Born into This World, My Rival and I Raised a Child Together

Baby Ling Yingtong is so cute! ! Mo Chenyuan is also so cute with a cold face! Every time I watch it, I imagine two little cakes in my mind! Of course, I also wish Xiao Yuan'er an early success in pursuing his wife! ! But the road feels long and steep. After all, there is a large group of people who love Yingtong baby! My younger brother is also very cute! Although my brother often beats him for the villain value, he still likes this little brother! So cute, so cute. The author who writes like this is also very cute. He will discuss some things with readers, what a cute baby. You are also a good baby in front of the screen

I really like the setting at the beginning of this book. The introduction really attracted me. Overall, I had a good impression of it in the early stages of reading it. Especially the plot between amnesia and return to the sect really touched me. But as the plot progresses to the point where the pregnancy is revealed, it is clear that the author is forcing the two protagonists to be bound together. The emotional foreshadowing between the two in the early stage was relatively thin, and the development of their relationship seemed very abrupt. [Sad] It felt like there was a rush to put aside all conflicts and give birth to the child first. Doesn't Kirito's design favor the straight male pseudo-Long Aotian? ? , [Sad] Faced with the matter of having a baby, there was almost no entanglement or struggle. I accepted the reality after a simple mental activity. Isn't the way of handling it too assembly-line and very deliberate? Personally, I feel that the author has been working hard to describe the relationship between the two, [sad], but this relationship is more based on responsibility. Many plots in the pregnancy plot continue to ignore Gong's emotions, and whenever problems arise, they are tied to Gong. Although the subsequent conflicts were resolved, [sad] it was still awkward to read. I am a controlled person myself, and I always believe that love should be based on equality. In this relationship, I always feel that Gong is the one who gives blindly, like the one who is solely responsible for taking the bottom [like]. It's worth mentioning, isn't it the villain system? Show off for me, okay? Continue to wait and see The system actually has to leave early, and it has to pay off debts. In the later period, it is mostly about taking care of children, and I am exhausted.

It's pretty good. I feel that the protagonist is portrayed in detail, there are no logical flaws, the worldview is quite complete, and the emotional line is progressed very cleverly. Personally, I think the supporting role of Shen is the best portrayed. The entanglement and changes in mood are just right. The silence in the face of choices is also very delicate. It is a very full character. Overall, it's a great book, with good emotions and plot lines.

I can definitely say that this book is super to my liking 😋😋😋 I love the author. I think the characters of this book are very good, the writing is also delicate, and the descriptions of the supporting characters and so on are also very good (for me)

After a brief look at it, I feel that the focus is on the emotional line. There is nothing wrong with the emotional line, but I feel that the last few chapters are almost passionate plot lines, so I feel that there is a delicious hot pot but no matching white rice. The author can consider giving more plot lines to match the meat and vegetables.

It's beautiful, I love watching it. Xiaotong is so cute when she loses her memory, and Xiao Mo's silent love is also very cute. Come on, keep going. Let me tell you secretly (I pushed this book several times in the book desert) [shy][shy]

It's very well written, maybe a little sour in the middle, but it's innocuous and still very interesting. Thank you for your hard work [Blow a kiss]

Super beautiful teeth! The young couple is so sweet. I kept laughing and smacking my teeth while watching it! ! ! [Adoration] [Shy] The plot development is not delayed, there is no brain-dead plot, and the logic is online (personal opinion). If you like the development quickly, you can watch it, but I haven't finished it yet. I'm not sure whether it will be cruel to Kou Ya, but judging from the previous plot, I think it will not be very cruel to Kou Ya. I really like the development and setting of the two young lovers. I personally highly recommend this book to Kouya (probably because I personally prefer fairy tales, and because I am a pure lover, and controlled, and only like Shuang Jie novels, and because I like fast-paced plots, and sweet and non-violent novels. The author just happened to guess my xp, so I have to strongly recommend it [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] [Blowing Kiss]

I'm going! It's so beautiful. I've only seen the first dozen or so pictures now, and I feel a sense of pleasure similar to a cool article [shy]

The only shortcoming of the serialized article is that I cried all night and finished it. Well, I just felt that Tongtong was not as free and easy as before after giving birth. It felt very different from before giving birth. I still hope that he can remain as free and easy as before. Well, yes, I hope he won't be too abusive in the future🤔😋😋😋