Harry Potter: I Can't Resist

Why. But what I am most looking forward to is the daily life of the heroine studying at Hogwarts, but there is very little, after all... Forget it, it would be better if the author gave more ink to the heroine. As the heroine, I think the heroine's portrayal... Is a bit weak (not that she is weak, but the heroine's role is not strong enough). There's nothing surprising about it, but... When I read it earlier, I felt that the heroine's transition into school was too shallow. Because she hated her dad very much, and even bs came later. But! The writing here is not strong enough, (this cp book is about generating electricity for love, but this... Still...) A lot of the heroine's experiences have been omitted in order to transition to the child age and become a professor (cp line). Many of them are even said by others, what the heroine has done, what controversies the heroine has, and what famous things the heroine has done. I'm not the female protagonist, but I am the protagonist.

It is rare to see fan fiction that has its own thoughts and rich characters. I've read too many articles on Tomato that are stereotyped, mindless and cool, and the protagonist still acts as a nanny for me no matter how strong she is. When I came across this book, my eyes lit up. The heroine is so lifelike, from being slightly innocent as a child to her personal charm when she matures, it really feels like watching a child grow into a reliable adult. The Sri Lankan teaching is also very lively, but there is no OOC. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. You must continue writing, and I am waiting to be fed.

One word, ram👍. This is the novel that I have read that is most in line with the character of the original Snape. The author is really good at grasping the Snape's venomous tongue and writing well. The heroine is very human, and the interactions in it are also very humorous. She says funny things in a serious manner. The heroine is really a very normal person. There are very few heroines with normal personalities in the Snape fan fiction. She is not extreme in handling things. I really like the heroine. She is a weed-type heroine who will fall in love with everyone who reads it. She is tough, tenacious and brave. The emotional line is also quite natural, just like the last sentence of the author's introduction, it's just that you happened to appear in my life. It's exactly the same. In some of the previous scenes where the behavior was a little more ambiguous, the male and female protagonists didn't have any charming feelings in their hearts. It was super enjoyable to read. The few scenes where the male and female protagonists are equal are only a little bit different. The author must not give up. I will keep chasing after this book. I hope I will continue to write Sijiao fanfics. Wow, your writing is so awesome. I love you so much💋[Blow kiss]

Teacher, this is a fairy tale. It's beautiful. The writing is sophisticated and not a noob. The logic is fluent and the three views are correct. I saw an upright and charming Hufflepuff. God knows how difficult it is to meet the Hufflepuff heroine in Tomato and have such fighting ability.

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! Avella is really cool and awesome [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] The interaction between Sijiao and Sri Lanka is so good [love] [love] I think the two of them are two-way redemptions. Professor Si helped Avella in the first grade and everything in the school later, and Avella also brought light to Professor Si when he just lost Lily (someone was even worse than him [face covering]) P. S. I finally saw a copy of Gryffindor in third grade! ! ! I always felt that the trio was too reckless and even attacked the professor. Avella really pleased me [laughing] Evelyn Evelyn Evelyn! ! ! ! ! ! I typed my baby girl's name wrong! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author, why did you still like it? [Laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Damn it, you can't modify the comment [crazy]

To be honest, I am quite harsh on HP fanfics. The writing is particularly bad and I just leave. But this one fully describes the charm and characteristics of each person. I can deeply feel why S. S likes the heroine. Why the heroine likes S. S. It includes other people's personalities and character arcs. It is very good. It is really a rare article. Among HP fanfics (except for the fact that I destroyed the original plot in the big structure and used goldfinger), I followed the original plot and the original characters and slowly and delicately portrayed them. It ranks in the top three for me. Really.

! ! ! Let me express my feelings first, it's so beautiful! Read 130 chapters in one go. The character creation in this book is simply the best among all the HPs I have read. The portrayal of Dumbledore, McGonagall, Snape, Black, and Lupin is very full, and it is not a wholehearted favor or belittlement. And the heroine is really attractive, really, she has a unique charm. When she faced the death of her father, when she and Teacher Si met in the bar before she started teaching, and when she carried out unique growth education for the girls, I really liked these, (including Qingjie who is now bringing 6 little ones to save Black, but the author hasn't finished updating it yet! Update it soon!) There are also descriptions of the Herbal Medicine Professor and the Charms Professor. Although there are not many, they are really exciting and the characters are very three-dimensional. The rhythm of the storyline is great. I have read more than 30 HP fanfics at least. In my impression, there is no image conflict with the heroine in this one (I mean: the heroine's image is super unique and charming). Finally, I want to talk about the relationship between Sri Lankan teacher and the heroine. It is really so touching. There are no deliberate contacts, everything is a natural feeling, which is great. Sri Lanka's teachings during the ambiguous period are so bewitching! !

Severus in this fanfic did not open or close his mouth to taunt others, he could communicate with others normally, and he did not use stereotypical words like "splenden" or "troll" on his lips. It is really rare to find this kind of book. The heroine is also well portrayed, and the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not abrupt. The plot is very attractive [Like] Someone finally stood up for Severus in many things.

I really like this book because it makes me feel that the author really loves the characters he writes, and does not just create some flat and stereotyped characters. Some people may think that the heroine was too miserable when she was a child, but only in this way can she grow and excel. This is completely consistent with Si's experience. It is because they have struggled in the dark that they can understand each other. And Si is also a flesh-and-blood existence in this book. He is not a cold and gloomy character with only guilt in his heart. He really has the sense of a living person in the original work. This kind of living feeling is not OOC at all. I understand that Si has a very subtle initiative towards the people he cares about. You will see that the relationship between the two people develops slowly. You feel that it is only a matter of time and inevitable that two people will fall in love with each other. It really fits the name of this book. It is completely irresistible to fall in love with each other! ! ! After reading this, I only have one awesome idea. I really feel that the author has created a parallel universe, and in this universe, Evelyn and Snape have an intersection... [Crying]

Boss... I feel so happy🥹🥹🥹 An indigenous heroine, no golden fingers, no "precognition" plot, living in the HP world, and she was just an ordinary girl who was domestically abused by her father at the beginning and couldn't even use a magic shower. She didn't accept her fate. She didn't accept her fate when she couldn't understand the textbooks. She didn't accept her fate when she was cheated by her father's "blood debt". She didn't accept her fate when she became an Auror and was insulted and slandered with all kinds of words. She is honest - she will say "I want money" when faced with Voldemort's question, and she will calmly reply "because I want to step on you to the podium" when faced with Lupine's "Why did Snape think of improving the werewolf potion". She is tenacious, courteous, and very purposeful. She never loses her direction or becomes too obsessed with her negative emotions. And when such a person appears next to Snape, it is not for the purpose of "redeeming" him. The existence of such a person will make Snape feel that he should not be immersed in self-pity and self-sorrow. She is not so much light as a plant, a towering tree - you see her, she is standing there, doing nothing, but her mere presence makes people feel a kind of power. Just like Snape saw her as a prefect taking care of a Hufflepuff girl who was staying at school on Halloween, she used her own way to protect the people she cared about.