Harry Potter: I’m Done Being Human for My Wife

There are a lot of small mistakes, the plot is too scattered, some previous plots suddenly have no follow-up, and some abilities are not better utilized. There is still a lot of room for improvement, but it is already very good, and I look forward to getting better gradually. As for OOC, I've read the fandom and don't care so much about whether it's OOC or not. If you don't accept OOC, you don't need to refer to my comments🍉

Forgive my lack of language, this book is really good. My professor was burglarized again, it was a blatant robbery. My awkward, arrogant, and duplicitous old professor was punished. The heroine is super strong, the strongest among all fandoms, and has a very interesting personality. She is neither a virgin nor a dark person. She is a bit crazy but has a very real and normal female mind.

Although the protagonist Goldfinger is very big, the main plot has not been significantly changed. His relationship with the protagonist group is generally not a nanny (he even uses the plot to facilitate himself). The professor is a bit OOC, but not much like the backwater I imagined. The emotional changes are quite obvious, but it is quite good to write in a setting where flaws are not concealed. I feel that the author's writing is becoming more and more delicate as he progresses (especially the relationship between the two people before, and the extras inserted in the middle are also good). People who have endured the setting of the introduction will be much better after the first 20 chapters. Recommended. If you don't like it, don't read it. Leaving negative reviews after reading it is a bit too hard for our niche circle. Please be merciful づ♡ど

The setting of the heroine is very strong, with invincible cheats, which is quite enjoyable. However, the writing in the early stage is relatively scattered, and many plots appear and disappear suddenly. However, it gradually gets better in the later stage, and the watchability continues to increase. Recommended. The original characters are all very lovable, and the two of them are finally together. Yes, the Sijiao is indeed perfect for the love that is like a home invasion~

I feel that the writing is quite good. The heroine is very good and she doesn't act as a nanny for the protagonists. However, some of the main plots about the protagonists are a little too detailed. If it is the same as the original book, there is actually no need to write it in such detail. And there are some other places that have not been written much since I mentioned them. For example, the Malfoy family has a faint sense of sadness after 50 chapters. It is a pity. I hope this book will get better and better. To be honest, I feel that the setting of the clone is really disgusting, and I almost want to give up. After meeting the main body, the efforts made by the clone to make Snape like it feel all in vain. Snape fell in love with the main body immediately after seeing the main body. No one cares about the clone's feelings. It is obvious that she has independent thoughts. But as soon as the main body appears, everyone will like her. Dumbledore has no suspicion about her, and Snape is also very gentle. Even if she used to be a cat, Snape could give up the girlfriend he spent more time with. It was obvious that the one who redeemed him and got along with him was his doppelgänger.

If you don't talk about OOC when watching a fanfic, at least you won't have an obvious sense of drama when watching it, which is quite relevant. But it's really slow to warm up. I came in from the introduction of Love Potion, but I haven't seen the result yet. . . . I only hope that when I see that plot, it will be a real GB, not a spiritual GB, so that the emotions are really wrong. There are not many GB in hp fanfiction, and even less that are to your liking. I hope the author can keep writing, maintain the level and keep improving💕💕💕

Reward yourself for writing so much

Goldfinger is a bit strong... If you want to see the love line, you can start from Chapter 77. The heroine is very strong, and occasionally a little neurotic, but it's not harmful. There is not much OOC in Sri Lanka. As long as you keep updating, you can still follow it.

I feel like the early plot is a bit messy, but overall it's pretty good. Goldfinger is big and pretty cool. As for the emotional line, I feel like Snape didn't explain his feelings for Lily very clearly (maybe it's my problem) and I hope it's true gb Okay, I said it was early Snape and Lily's emotional line is completed, Smith Marseille

It's very interesting to watch, and the interaction with Sri Lankan teacher is very sweet. Please give the author a big boost, waiting for more updates!