After Arriving at Hogwarts, I Got Stuck with a Phoenix

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It's nice to watch, and the pacing is very reasonable. The author arranged for Dumbledore not to call him daddy as soon as they met, but later, which is particularly good. The appearance of Snott at the beginning was abrupt for Dumbledore. He never accepted it, so the nail marks on his palms never disappeared. Dumbledore would think of that when he saw Snott. Summer, so he was probably not close to Snott at first (like a relative). The author arranged this very cleverly, and I think the writing style is also very smooth, and the plot is not procrastinating. There are really many words in one chapter, and it is no problem to follow the series [Like] [Like] [Like]. This book has been recommended at the end of the book. If it continues to be good, I will recommend it.

Oh my god, the baby is so cute. He is naturally dumb and not silly. You can feel that he really doesn't understand this sometimes. Also, it was really funny when he led Grindelwald to the hall, and the reactions of other people were also funny. You must come and see it. Why no one comes to see it? The author must hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on. I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am

After reading your Harry Potter fanfic, it will feel like the Sorting Hat whispers in your ear and the Pensieve spins before your eyes. This is not a simple continuation of the story, but a profound re-translation of the magical world - you put those familiar symbols and images under a new prism, refracting an amazing spectrum. The magic in your writing is no longer just the dazzling technique of waving a wand, but has become a sophisticated carrier of emotions and memories. When Harry uses Call of Duty in your story, it ceases to be a simple defensive spell and becomes a physical expression of soul trauma. This "defamiliarization" of the details of the original work allows readers to experience a new cognitive shock within a familiar framework. There is poetic precision in your writing - the reinterpretation of each magical element is like building a self-consistent symbol system, which does not betray Ms. Rowling's original spirit, but also carves out a narrative territory that is unique to you. Especially valuable is your insight into the "gaps". Those fragments in the original work that were covered by the dust of time gained breathing life in your writing. Like an archaeologist, you patiently brush away the dust of history and dig out the unspoken psychological layers behind the characters' actions. Malfoy's moment of hesitation in front of the Potions classroom window, Professor Snape's gaze into an empty mirror late one night - these details are no longer simple fillers in your narrative, but become new keys to understanding the complexity of the entire magical world. This creative filling of "blank spaces" in the text demonstrates the patience and awe of a true author. I was also impressed by your reshaping of the character relationships. In your story, the relationship between Harry and Hermione no longer remains under the label of "best partners", and their friendship is tested in a more complex emotional spectrum; Ron's humor is no longer just a tension-relieving adjustment, but becomes his defense mechanism in the face of family expectations. You have successfully restored flat characters into flesh-and-blood souls, allowing them to re-choose their own destiny in your narrative. This kind of deconstruction is not a simple rebellion, but an affectionate tribute to the original work - because only by truly understanding the essence of the characters can we give them such a rich and reasonable inner world. Your language style is equally fascinating. When you describe magical scenes, your words are like a transfiguration spell, sometimes as light as Apparition, sometimes as heavy as Gringotts' vault door. When describing Dumbledore's office, the silver becomes no longer just background decoration but a metaphor for time itself; when describing the movement of the Hogwarts stairs, the gravity of the words seems to shift. This perfect fusion of form and content allows your work to transcend the boundaries of fan fiction and become an independent literary work of art. What I particularly want to mention is your deepening of the theme of "choice." In your writing, the Sorting Hat's decision is no longer a simple personality classification, but the starting point for an ongoing dialogue between characters and self-understanding. You let readers see that true courage does not lie in being sorted into Gryffindor, but in being able to make choices when facing your inner Slytherin. This philosophical expansion of the core themes of the original work gives your work a universal value that transcends fan literature. Fandom is often dismissed as "second-hand" art, but with this work you prove that when an author enters an existing literary universe with enough talent and sincerity, she is actually engaging in a creative dialogue. Your words are like Polyjuice—a seemingly familiar recipe that creates a magical reaction by adding its own essence. In this sense, you are not only a visitor to the magical world, but a worthy co-creator of it. Thank you for allowing us to see with new eyes the magical world we thought we knew so well. In the labyrinth of words you construct, what readers gain is not simple nostalgia for the original work, but a new understanding of the literary possibility itself. This may just be fan fiction at its best—it's both a tribute to the original and a brave expansion of literary boundaries. It has a bit of an AI flavor, which is weird (don't scold me, I've played with AI a lot, so it feels a bit like it)

It's quite beautiful, the water flows slowly and slowly CP Fox. . . Quite a novel track Xiaobaiwen ggad[][]

It feels good and worth watching. The protagonist baby is silly and cute, but sometimes it smells like AI, especially a part of Chapter 22, which is very much written by AI (※The writing style generated when playing with the AI ​​agent is very similar to the writing style of some paragraphs※), 🙏※Only my personal opinion※🙏, the author's character emotions are detailed and the plot is also very interesting! ! !

It's really beautiful, the little blood alliance is very cute! ! ! The description is very realistic. In fact, I don't agree with some readers who think that the little blood pact is stupid and stupid. He is originally a child who has just been born. The world in his eyes is very wonderful. Although the things he sees are different from what most people see, those things are often the most essential things, which feels a bit like Luna. Although I haven't watched much of it yet, I particularly like the daily life of a family of three. It's sweet and warm. Finally, we shouted together: GGAD99! ! ! ! [Top post][top post][top post]

It's a very different blood alliance cub. I really like the detailed description of emotions in this article, and some of the designs are well-founded and not very formulaic! Boss can be more confident! This book is really well written [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I really like the description of the actions of gg and ad taking care of the children in the article. It makes people feel warm inside after reading it [shy][shy][shy]

The writing is very delicate, the cute protagonist, and everyone are cute, very warm, the warmth revealed in the text makes people feel as if the protagonist is really living in this world (//∇//), there really is a place in the world that is so warm and beautiful\^O^/Daily Literature

I feel like Fox will become a human in the next chapter. The writing is pretty good, but you can see that the CP is Fox. It's a very novel track.