Child of the Blood Pact: The Embers Still Burn

So far, it seems that the writing is pretty good, without too much OOC. Although the writing was a bit immature at the beginning, it has gotten better and better, and I can feel that it is improving. The pace is okay, medium, and it is a relatively common hp fan length. I feel that it will be completed in 100 to 150 chapters. There is no step-by-step relationship between the blood alliance male protagonist and the original male protagonist. It seems that it is very good from the beginning. There is no foreshadowing. Maybe it is a foreshadowing left behind. They have actually known each other for a long time? GGAD's emotional description is okay, not too OOC. Gehuang is dedicated to his career, ambitious and nostalgic for love, and there is a yandere smell when prophesying (?) I don't know how to describe it, but there is a "what about me if you die" feeling? The sense of madness, Dumbledore's inner softness, and some cunning and playfulness were well written, but it didn't quite reflect his shrewd, resourceful, powerful, inner-tempering but outwardly caring side. But it wasn't in the later stages yet, so maybe I wanted to describe it later. I quite like this description of the Wu Cui Party who strives for a great cause. Everyone works together for the future and ideals. We fight together. Even if we have quarrels, we are still moving forward for the same cause. All in all, I am optimistic about this book. I will continue to read it and review the overall analysis after it is finished.

I just want to make a suggestion and sit with him I'm sorry if there's any trouble. I'm sorry now. But I really want to say what I really want!!!! It's just that I always feel that his personality should have changed. It has always been like this. This will only make others think she is a bit too naive! I'm really sorry if I don't have feelings, but this is my opinion. I'm sorry. I think his character should have some growth instead of always being like this! I understand that you just want to write a contrast? After all, the characters of the two protagonists cannot be exactly the same, but there can be changes, right?

I finished reading it in one go 😄 The writing is very good, the feeling is very refreshing, the rhythm is good, and the logic of the writing is reasonable. Comparing the previous and later chapters, it can be seen that the author's level has improved 😄 I recommend everyone to take a look 😄

I just read Chapter 29 and it looks beautiful to me 😄 Can the author update 300 chapters in one night 😘 This book is super good! Highly recommended! The protagonist is very charming and the writing is so attractive. Please give me more 💕

Super cute! It's also a very nice book! The writing is very good, the plot is also very coherent and well written, and the characters are also perfect. I really like the interaction between Phil and Cillian, it is really delicious! I am currently in a light reading period, but I still go online at 0:00 every day and wait for updates. It is really interesting. I am seriously following up on updates. ദ്ദി◝ ⩊ ◜.ᐟ

It's great. I love reading it. I picked up this book early in the morning and it's so good. I'm looking forward to the update (ᐡ⦁⩊⦁⸝⸝ᐡ )₊୭

So fragrant, delicious, beautiful, delicious The emotions are in place, the looks are in place, and the touches are in place It's our fate to find you on the homepage, the author is great (♡>𖥦<)/♥ P. S. I want to see more plots of GGAD hahahaha

The writing is very good and the emotional lines are written very smoothly. I read more than 20 chapters in one go and it was so beautiful to me.

It's very beautiful, and the emotions are expressed very delicately. Kudos to the author!

Already read Chapter 36! It's really good to read, the author's writing is delicate, Phil and Hill Zundu are very cute [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]