Harry Potter: Love at First Sight

It looks good. The emotional line is very clear from the beginning. In the first few pictures, there is no stereotyped story about buying a wand and going to school. It goes directly to the plot. The rhythm of the plot and the emotional line is not delayed. I like it very much. It's rare to encounter something so satisfying, so although it's not finished yet, I'll give it five stars to support it! ! ! Looking forward to the following story

It's still very interesting. The plot starts from Harry Potter's first grade, and the emotional line gradually develops in the third grade. The emotional line is a simple and sweet story. I was a little worried at first, but later I found that the worry was unnecessary, because the author gave the heroine a powerful talent. When she is described as a normal child, but she does not have too many impulses to think that she can solve everything, and her guessing is the actual behavior, if you want to know, just ask, I still like the latest plot very much. It's a pity that some passages are like foreshadowing, seeming to foreshadow the ending, which makes people a little worried. Finally, let's reduce the plot of the heroine being injured❗. Since we don't plan to change the plot, let's not write it. Using the injury to make the heroine unable to intervene, I still feel sorry for her. Finally, there is not much description of Legilimency, and Dumbledore did not sit idly by and gave the heroine an adaptation period, making the reading experience good. (In fact, the AI-like and academic writing style gave me a bad start, but I haven't given up my curiosity about this kind of setting. 🎉)

It's very sweet. I think most of it follows the plot direction of the original novel. The writing is good. It's a sweet little article that could have been read. The setting of the heroine is also very novel. The heroine gets along very warmly with the Weasley family. There is Ha Jin CP inside. Cedric x Selene.

The cute heroine who has a secret crush on Seid and is lively, beautiful and brave... Author, please don't tell me it's better or not. This is really beautiful.

Really super pretty

It's sweet, very reassuring, and I hope Snape survives\(≧▽≦)/

Very beautiful and well written, thank you very much! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Beautiful, beautiful and vivid! Very interesting! Nothing like a running account

The young couple is so sweet! Knock well! The interaction between the Weasleys is also very loving! Make a wish to the teacher to write more!