Harry Potter: Diggory's Comeback

The first few pictures are foreshadowing. I won't say anything. The back and front don't match up at all. What's written in the front is not written at all in the back. It's very watery. The most important thing is that when I saw that, 5% was not loaded. I was annoyed when I saw that. 🤮🤮

The character breakdown was so awesome. Chapter 6 turned out to be a bit embarrassing at the end. The image of a good gentleman is gone forever.

Primary school students' writing style

After reading only a few chapters, I couldn't stand it. Both the author and the protagonist's definition of the character of Cedric is simply a big no. Aunt Rowling is not saying that she is afraid that Cedric will overshadow the Iron Triangle, but that the death of Cedric is absolutely necessary. His death is the turning point of the entire Harry Potter series, and it is the basis for the transition to adulthood. Even if it is not Cedric, another character will die, and Rowling uses the death of Cedric to advance the plot of the story, even if Cedric does not die. It is impossible for him to outshine Harry or the Iron Triangle. When Cedric entered school, Trelawney had already predicted that Harry would be the savior and only he would fight Voldemort. I read the introduction written by the author. How could Cedric be the savior? So what is Trelawney's prophecy? Let me reiterate again. When Cedric entered school, Trelawney had already predicted that Harry would be the savior. So this is considered the author's personal creation. But the author, the cheat you gave Cedric was so outrageous that it is beyond description. "No less than anyone present." "Suspected of the third generation of the Dark Lord." "A talent that surpasses the existence of Voldemort." And the system. This is so pure and outrageous. Even the ability has changed drastically if the core is changed. Isn't this nonsense? Forget it, the character design is a mess, and the plot is unreasonable. Take the matter of McGonagall having to invite parents after sorting because of the protagonist's series of operations. At that time, Cedric had already been sorted. He was already a student of Hufflepuff, and McGonagall was the head of Gryffindor. Even if parents were really invited, it was not McGonagall's turn to take care of it. It should be left to Hufflepuff's headmistress, Pomona Sparrow, to handle on her own. For example, in the second part of the movie, Chamber of Secrets Ron and Harry drove the Flying Car and caused serious damage to the Whomping Willow. Snape wanted to expel the two of them, but Ron and Harry were not Slytherin students and had no right to expel them. The same is true for asking parents here. In short, I can forgive some omissions in the writing, but the author, you are simply an elementary school writer➕over-the-top plug-in➕plot is illogical➕characters are completely broken. The dialogue is so embarrassing that my fingers tightened [laughter]

After reading Chapter 4, I feel that time travel is actually quite dangerous. It is very likely that people will lose their brains after traveling through time.

Some people are really bad at setting things up

Really bad

It's so shameful

Not bad, come on, author

"What is the function of the remaining five percent?" Diggory asked again. System: "Actually, it's nothing. It's just a time conversion system, an artifact redemption system, and a gift package for newbies." When he heard that his newbie gift package was gone, Digory immediately felt heartbroken and couldn't breathe. At this time, the system continued to finish the damage: "Originally, if the host had a time conversion system, the ratio between the time you spent inside the system and the time outside could be freely changed." 2 Stars were deducted without explanation.