Honkai: Star Rail: Ye Shunguang, but an Emanator of Abundance!

It's a very good novel, but I think it needs to be more creative. Most of the fan fiction I've read in the past has followed the main line from the space station to Belloberg. So my suggestion is that you can follow the main line, but don't write it too long in one place. Occasionally intersperse it to save some people you want to save. In addition, I prefer to watch battles. Can there be more battle scenes?

Teacher Jushi Dahao 22, in fact, I have always been a fan of yours. From the first page of the first chapter of the first volume of this book, I have been deeply attracted to you. That afternoon, when I scrolled across the home page, I caught a glimpse of the first line of the book. I knew that my heart had been taken away by you, and there would be no more joy or sorrow in this life. Being able to see you update 50 chapters in the next second allows me to experience a happy time. This is my biggest wish in this life.

I can only say that it's okay, that is, the appearance of the protagonist has been strengthened a bit, and some special skills have been adjusted. For now, I think it's about Xiao Guang, not much, but I still want to say, Xiao Guang is really good-looking. In fact, the most important thing is that I kind of want to watch it. It would be really nice to watch the whole extra chapter, and then run to Zero Zone and Xiaoguang stare at each other with their cute faces.

The Xiaoguang in this book is really a very gentle, kind and motivated child. At present, the flaws are not without, but they are so small that they can be completely ignored. If Miss Feng Yu, the Xuanjun of the Purple Mansion next door, is the ultimate development of the power of fertility, the effect of this book is the true understanding and practice of the driving force of fertility, and the most important point, Dr. Ye is the woman who can become my mother.

Personally, I think the plot is okay. At the beginning, it feels like it was hand-written, but later on, it slowly feels like the author used AI to write the content and then roughly polished it. (PS: Although I have only read Chapter 17, the AI ​​flavor is becoming more and more obvious.)

Last week I was walking through a square at night and saw a red envelope on the ground. I picked it up because I was thinking about feudal superstition. Unexpectedly, I felt sick to my stomach after picking it up. As I walked, I saw an old man with a gray beard and a weird smile, lying on a house and staring at me. After I went in, I saw a few people wearing the same clothes who looked like believers. I gave them the money, and they gave me some headless chickens and some dark water, which I swallowed, and I felt better. In the future, when everyone encounters these things, they would rather believe that they exist than believe that they exist. (Tomorrow Thursday)

The only connection with the main plot and Senior Sister Xiaoguang is appearance. You can watch it even if you haven't played Zero Zone Zero.

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The subject matter is good, but I personally have no words to say. I think Xiaoguang is more suitable for the intersection of conservation and hunting. Then the author marked a slow pace, but the plot is not slow, but a bit fast.

The emotional description is delicious😋, the plot generally follows the main line, there is less original content, so I won't make too many comments. But I think this emotional line is really good. A reminder from the front, there is a certain amount of wing-tying content, so if you mind, just run away. . .