
Honkai: Star Rail, What Kind of Dream-Making System Is This?
崩铁,你这是哪个造梦系统?
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- 695k Words
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- 7d ago
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- Fanqie
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- Xier: For Mom, There's Nothing I Can't Do!希儿:为了老妈我无所不能!Alternate title on Fanqie
271Chapters
2.9kReads
7.1Score
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Emm, the writing of this book is quite good, but ha, one problem is that Aha is probably not very good at attracting the swarms of insects to Yaliluo VI in the article, because Aha originally became a god after the child's first cry, and he will not use the life of intelligent life to have fun. Aha itself is The Star God who strives to make the whole universe laugh loudly is the Star God who respects intelligent life the most. And compared to other Star Gods in Bengtie, he has not done anything to kill intelligent life on a large scale. It is also written in the game library that he is the Star God of Joy and "understands that happiness is the unique right of intelligent beings." So haha, in the article, after Jiang Luo lost his way to Piloconi, haha, he should not be able to attract the swarm of insects to Yaliluo VI, because when Jiang Luo is around, even if the Star God does not know that Jiang Luo has this power that surpasses the Star God, he also knows that she has the power to surpass the Star God. The power of the young envoy will attract swarms of insects, and Jiang Luo can also deal with them. However, Jiang Luo attracted them before he came back. The swarms of insects are almost impossible to resist in Yaliluo, and will cause the lives of Yaliluo to be devastated. This is not in line with Aha's happiness. After writing so much, I feel a little confused. Shit, the author has written quite well anyway, but some details still need to be kept in Bengtie's own library (if it is a second design of its own, pretend I didn't mention it) 😂
Here are my thoughts after reading the first volume: Advantages) The plot is very good, the other characters are well portrayed, the author has his own unique ideas, it does not seem boring, the key plot is exciting, the writing is very good and is considered to be the best in Tomato Disadvantages) (Poisonous point in my opinion) The protagonist has an indifferent attitude towards the identity of the suicidal person (self-perception), but he adopts Xier and Clara, and does nothing after Xier begged the protagonist to cherish his body (self-perception), even though the protagonist expresses his consent when comforting Xier. This makes me feel that the protagonist is too unscrupulous and doesn't care much about other people's feelings. Summary) This is a book with a good plot. The author's early portrayal of the protagonist was not sufficient, but that does not prevent me from putting this book on my high-quality bookshelf. It is worth reading. !!! It should be noted here that this is my own perception, with a strong subjective color. The main thing is to experience it personally. This book is well written, and I don't want it to be buried!!! I will continue to follow up in the future, and I am also looking forward to the plot of the next few volumes of this book. Come on, author!
It's very good. The author doesn't have to listen to what those people say, just write normally. I don't see any big poisonous points. It's still better than those people and machines who can't understand what they say.
One thing to say is that the ending of Volume 1 doesn't seem to be strong enough, and it doesn't stand up to scrutiny. Then the second volume looked uncomfortable, and it felt like the protagonist had been taken away. From the end of the first volume, it seems like there has been a change of characters. It feels like it was written in a hurry and a bit confusing. Moreover, I didn't even explain Xianzhou and my goddaughter before jumping straight to the second volume and opening Pinoconi. Then, after watching the end of Volume 1: The system has no emotions and risks death to help the protagonist. In the end, raising the concept of Star God makes it appear that Aha is paddling and cooperating with the final action. Later, the bond between the protagonist and the train group was erased, but everyone's memory still exists. Then the Canglong, which was mentioned many times in the first volume, was finally mentioned at the end. The protagonist's combat power can chase after the Star God, but the concept is not as high as the Star God, so he was designed by the terminal. Then Aha cooperated with the terminal to introduce the protagonist to the second line of the volume. Not only was the protagonist beaten to death, but Aha was also very honest in assisting him and never thought about jumping around. Then in the sentence "Chasing the Five Gods to Kill", the five gods have joy and finally destroy the balance. What is left is Fengfei or nothingness. It is Fengfei. Fengfei is so innocent. It is nothingness. Is the protagonist really interested in killing it? And there is no need to chase after nothingness. Anyway, the end of the first volume is like a quick sketch of a senior high school student who is busy with his studies. The second volume is like a masterpiece written under the heavy pressure of the second semester of the third year of high school. One star was deducted because the points given to me from the end of Volume 1 to Volume 2 were inappropriate. Three stars were points before Volume 1, Xianzhou, and one star was for personal friendship points.
It's pretty good, I like to watch it, but I have a bold idea. Later, Jiang Luo got together with one of the girls during the journey to Ompharos, and then brought him back to Xi'er and Clara to get to know him. I want to see Xi'er unable to accept it but had to recognize it, crying and making trouble (it would be more exciting if it was because he couldn't beat her) 😳😳 I have another bold idea, let me guess who Onfalos Jiangluo was with in the end. Let me talk about the conclusion first. I think it is a choice between Feng Jin and Xia Die. The reason is as follows: I don't think that the handsome, beautiful and kind-hearted author will tear down the cp direction that was originally very inclined, such as the enemy, the weaver, the sea carving, March and the long night moon are bound. Then Teacher Kexia lives with his earth beast, Ye has Liuying, Dan Heng is a male mother and has to take care of March and Ye, Teacher Tibao is too young, unless the author opens a line in millions of lives to find Tiriscipios, otherwise it will be too much punishment. Xia Die has a lot of secondary characters in all the fan works, but I personally haven't seen much of Feng Jin. Her personality and figure are quite suitable for Jiang Luo, so I think these two are the best. Unless the protagonist is the one who rushes out shouting "Ashelia is the best in the world" when he sees Xi Lian, then just pretend I didn't say that. 😏😏
Everything else is fine, except that the distances described inside are too close. Yaliluo is only more than 200 light years away from Louvre and more than 40 light years away from Pinoconi. The universe is all squeezed together, it's very dramatic. In addition, the galaxy in the game refers to the universe, not reality, it is not that small
Written like an enchanted golden apple, delicious and fire-resistant The more I read, the more I get hooked, and the author really writes very quickly.
1. Lamarckian theory of evolution (early days) - Core concepts: Use it or lose it, acquired inheritance - Organisms gradually evolve from low to high; organs become more developed as they are used, and degenerate when not used; acquired traits can be inherited - Example: Because giraffes often stretch their necks to feed, their necks become longer and are passed on to future generations. 2. Darwin's theory of natural selection (core classic) 1. Core content ("The Origin of Species" 1859) - Over-reproduction: The reproductive capacity of organisms is extremely strong, and their offspring far exceed the carrying capacity of the environment. - Struggle for survival: limited resources, fierce competition between individuals, species, and the environment - Genetic variation: Heritable differences exist among individuals of the same species, which are the raw materials for evolution - Survival of the fittest: individuals with favorable mutations can survive and reproduce easily, while unfavorable mutations are eliminated; new species are formed through long-term accumulation 2. Classic cases - Galapagos finches: Different islands have different foods, and beak shape has evolved directionally (thick beak bites hard seeds, thin beak catches insects) - Industrial blackening of the birch moth: Pollution has turned tree trunks black, and the proportion of dark-colored moths has soared due to their camouflage advantage. 3. Limitations - The nature of genetic variation is not clarified and how natural selection acts on heritable variation cannot be explained 3. Modern biological evolution theory (synthetic evolution theory, 1940s) 1. Core ideas - Population is the basic unit of evolution, and the essence of evolution is the directional change of population gene frequency. - Mutation + genetic recombination provide evolutionary raw materials (gene mutation, chromosomal variation, genetic recombination) - Natural selection determines the direction of evolution and causes directional changes in gene frequency - Isolation is a necessary condition for speciation (geographic isolation → interruption of genetic exchange → reproductive isolation → new species) 2. Key distinctions - Evolution: Changes in gene frequency are evolution (can occur within a species) - Speciation: Reproductive isolation must occur (different species cannot mate/offspring are sterile) 4. Modern development (molecular evolution, etc.) - Molecular evidence: All living things share a genetic code and 20 amino acids, supporting common ancestry - Supplementary theories such as neutral mutation, genetic drift, and co-evolution Do you need me to organize these contents into a list of test points (including error-prone points and judgments) that can be recited directly?
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It will definitely be finished, right?