Knocked Unconscious Before the College Entrance Exam, I Woke Up a Literary Leader

The tragic story is well written. As said on the Internet, the plot is poor, but the writing is really good when it comes to the sad parts. Let's talk about the poisonous point. The protagonist's mind cannot be controlled by his family members when he travels through time at the age of 30. The moment he is abandoned by his family, the adult's thinking should be to abandon this family relationship directly. Secondly. Does the protagonist insist on publishing a work after the age of 18, 100 million? Can't it be sent in advance? Make yourself so embarrassed. There is also a pain point that is essential for good writing. Everyone will revolve around the protagonist, but it is more serious in this book.

It's great. This is adapted from the author's personal experience. It just uses some artistic processing to tell the story of the author's family life as a child and uses a time-travel shell.

Although there are some logical bugs, such as reading the diary, not reading it all, insisting on leaving it, reading one every two days; there was a car accident, and without confirming the actual situation at the scene, I started to think that the protagonist was dead, and then read the diary, but the flaws are not hidden, the author will update soon!

It is told in a "trivial" narrative, plain yet touching. In the field of known copywriting, this article can be rated as the best. The screenwriter is very humane. As the saying goes, "It's not necessarily better when you are young." Once you become addicted to love, you will lose your soul [Thinking]

The subject matter is very novel. The way the male protagonist writes his diary makes the article appear less abrupt and more natural. I hope the author can work hard.

I have an idea, how about sending the male protagonist's parents in [laughing evilly]

I have read a lot of books on Tomato, but I have been too lazy to comment. As a long-time book fan, I read many books and then changed to the next one, but I stayed up all night and cried because of this book. As a new author, the emotions in this book are sincere and touching, the diary format is novel, and the poems and prose in it can be well integrated with the situation. Although the logic has some loopholes and the characterization is a bit single, it deserves a high score overall because true feelings are the most touching. Become a book fan starting today, and I hope the author will continue to work hard. I also hope to become an excellent writer.

After reading the comment section, many people read it again, which really makes me feel guilty. People like me can't read it the first time and need to read it again. Brothers, this book not only does not deviate from the theme, but also describes the most beautiful fantasy of an ordinary and confident person. Come and read it with me.

It's so well written that it would make me feel very unhappy if more people didn't review this. The pleasure of seeing half of it smoothed out the wrinkles in my brain, like a drowned fish hitting the water. It's a shame that only so many people have read this book. In the end, it's like a piece of shift that makes people want to evaluate it after seeing it.

It's my first time to read this type of book, I think it's good, It travels to a time and space where culture is lacking, and uses all kinds of ancient classics to show off. The protagonist becomes famous while lying down, and gets rich instantly. It's a really cool story. I don't understand why so many men in the comment area gave negative reviews. It's really well written, especially using Butterfly Lovers to refer to the missed love between the male and female protagonists, and Nezha to refer to the bond between the protagonist and his eccentric parents. It's very good. The preface to Prince Teng's Pavilion and the Lushan Waterfall are used to revitalize cultural tourism. This is the first time I've seen this. Feeling very good