I Asked You to Write a Feel-Good Story, So Why Did You Write About Surviving?

The first half is well written, "People live for life itself, not for anything other than living." The author realizes the meaning of this sentence. This book also uses this to explore the problems that in this era of AI, cool articles and short videos are emerging one after another, which bring dopamine to people. The richness of traditional literature is unmatched by most online novels The back is a bit unsatisfactory. The confrontation at the end of Alive was too deliberate and a bit awkward. I'm sorry, it's my problem. I'm sorry, I overestimated the author's performance. This book started high but ended low. The suggestion is that you can read it, but you can abandon it after reading the book "Alive" to ensure the best reading experience. I still hope the author will revise it.

This is the best book I have read so far. Perhaps this is the original meaning of the subject Wenzhao Gong, to bring literature that does not belong to this world and convey the charm of language of human civilization. It captures the feeling I had when I read it for the first time. The writing is really good. I stayed up late one night to tie it. I highly recommend it.

Wow, it's surprisingly good-looking. It only scores 7.8. In fact, I just randomly clicked in. I'm stunned that I can't get out. It's tied, why is it only Chapter 178? It's good to read, and the writing is fair and not awkward. Maybe it's because the background setting is pretty good, and it really made me sit up sometimes. The writing was so funny, it made me laugh all the time. In addition, regarding the section that was questioned, I skipped it all, and then started a live broadcast to clarify it. I also skipped all the questions raised. After watching Tomatoes for so long, I have learned how to skip. Although I don't know if there is anything interesting in the skipped part, it is not important. I don't want to take a chance. I finally found someone who likes to read. I skipped it perfectly and didn't see anything that I didn't like to read at all. This resulted in my reading experience being quite good. Anyway, it looks great. I don't know if I can hold back the writing I skipped. Anyway, I recommend skipping it, so that it looks smooth and the writing is good-looking and fun.

Well, I personally feel that it is quite good. It brings up the problem of AI, um, but when I read it, it still feels like a copycat. However, the background is different from other books. The look and feel is still the same, but the female teacher does not need to be described in such detail. I personally think it is quite good [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The composition of this book: "Alive", "The Old Man and the Sea" and other original sentences + a large number of different characters' views on the novel + the author's review of the famous novel that is suspected to be at the high school level + brainless confrontation + the level of story connection written by junior high school students (maybe too watery) Disadvantages: The sea, writing a book for the sake of writing after-reading feelings, writing too much about the reader's understanding of the novel from the perspective of the reader (perspective fatigue), the connection between the after-reading feelings of "Alive" is blunt (brainless confrontation is only to elicit the after-reading feelings), a certain fragment in the famous novel is mentioned repeatedly Advantages: The classics are well told and summarized concisely. The two chapters of the follow-up work "The Old Man and the Sea" are exquisite (the author knows a lot of novels [laughs evilly]). The character of Yuyin is so well created that it made me a little resistant to the character of "As the Saying" 🤦 Summary: The flow of water (at the level of the sea), but it was quite good before the confrontation in "Alive". As for the latter part, the interpretation of classics is okay. It is recommended to try 🍉 🍉 🍉

A wonderful combination of Wenzhao Gong and the cyber world. The details of the plot and characters are also well written. Overall evaluation: 1Oh Q~[I learned it] From the front, it seems that your subject matter is quite good, and your previous writing is not bad, but after the story came out, the reaction of readers was so big. The emotional descriptions appeared repeatedly, and even some of the emotional descriptions were repeated. I really can't stand it anymore. How can you set up a pillar character? Are you trying to cosplay Jesus on a cross?

😄This book is so good, especially the description of Belial's hundreds of rounds against the Milk Dragon. But Dongbeiyu sister is too strong, she is just a big iPad old iron, which made Zhang Fei faint, and directly laughed at him and said: "The line of immortals is like hemp." Therefore, the storyline is very exciting, with many foreshadowings, just like a duel field, facing the wandering Obito. Especially the description of Guan Yu riding a motorcycle and drifting around the Dragon Palace in the East China Sea for 300 times with Nezha. However, Wu Zetian was too powerful. If Yasuo hadn't blocked Galio's ultimate move with a wind wall, this wave would have been destroyed. What I like the most is what Li Bai said to the monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Little brother, don't show off, watch my brother push me back with a sword." It perfectly shows Li Bai's anger at the monkeys who were shot in the head with a stick. All in all, this book is imaginative, the setting is explosive, the battle scenes are comparable to Hollywood, and the characters are even more brilliant.

I saw the latest chapter... The subject matter is very new, the concept is very good, and the author's progress can be seen. It's just... I saw a book review and thought it was right: It's better not to use AI for this book... (Actually, it can be seen from some fragments that the author has written very carefully. However, there are still some fragments, such as the part where the protagonist writes the finale and is scolded by the navy army, and the part after the navy army disappears. The look and feel is not good, and there is a sense of fragmentation. Let's change it.)

You see, the protagonist can write 50,000 words a day. As for you, the author, hurry up and update, you are invincible. Just like King Red will arrive in the land in three hours, but I still feel like eating a burger in the school cafeteria. The burger is not big and the bun is very dry.

Both the narration rhythm and the story itself are very good. I am currently the only one I really like. The male protagonist and his sister have been like this for a lifetime. [I almost cried] I really want to watch "There is a Canteen by the Clouds". I feel that the jump from "Alive" to "The Three-Body Problem" is too big. Who knows how to cry while watching it?