I Just Wrote a Web Novel, I Never Meant to Take the Literary World by Storm

The writing is quite good, but the author did not say whether there is a female protagonist. In the early stage, there was a hidden one who looked like a female protagonist. Later, it seemed that the author had forgotten about this person and did not write more. I hope the author will not write about female protagonists and just write a good novel without cp. I just finished reviewing the updated chapter 52 and chapter 53, which is about that girl. The author can give me some accurate words. Is there a female protagonist? I have read the author's other two books, both of which had hidden female protagonists in the early stage, and then in the later period, none of them had a female protagonist. One of them still had a female protagonist (lhc), so I gave it up because I didn't want to give myself the chance to feel uncomfortable reading it.

The pace is very fast, and it's not cool [laughing] I like the fast pace so much. I feel that every chapter is very fulfilling. Finally, I don't have to write a game with dozens or hundreds of chapters. It's not that it's bad, but relatively speaking, I prefer fast pace as I use my free time to read novels. There are also a lot of comments about the issue of female protagonists. So far I haven't seen anything [face covering] It's normal for this kind of article to have a good male protagonist and be liked by girls, and there is no intimate relationship between boys and girls. What I see is that the male protagonist is just trying hard for points [eating melon] In short, I hope the author will work hard and persevere. By the way, do you still have the manuscript saved? [Laughter] The finals were pretty slow after that, and it didn't feel as fast-paced as the beginning. How can I put it, just by looking at the plot, you can almost guess what poem to write, and the audience's reaction can also be guessed. The pace of the writing before the finals was very fast, and there were a lot of things going on, but the writing of the finals was too slow and felt a bit disjointed, and I almost forgot about the previous plot. It feels like the author wants to write a big scene, a simulated second life? This feeling, but the writing is a bit too classic. This does not mean that the classic is not good, but reading too much will cause aesthetic fatigue. In short, I hope the author can work hard. I may only get 2 or 3 points for the final part of the novel, but I still support the author with 5 points. I hope the author will write better in the future.

It's been a long time since I've seen such serious entertainment industry articles. Today's entertainment industry articles are all fast-paced. Writing songs and articles is like doing wholesale. There is no emotion, no daily life, and they are all NPCs who can only shock and shock. This book is different. There is a step-by-step process in creating the protagonist. The world is shocked that the male protagonist is talented without appearing too abrupt. Moreover, this book also expands on family and friendship, especially getting along with roommates, which is very interesting. The poems written by the male protagonist are also interesting and refreshing, especially the poems written after using technology to experience a period of life. I shed a few tears, and I couldn't help but laugh and cry with the people in the book. I have finished following the latest chapter, and I look forward to the author's big update! ! !

Recently, I saw a relatively good-looking novel called Wenzhao Gong. The pace is quite good and it's a lot of fun. I just don't know if there is a female protagonist. I just finished reading the latest chapter and a new girl appeared. . . The classic school beauty who appeared at the beginning didn't have a strong sense of presence. She only appeared a few times and didn't have much contact with her. It was hard to tell whether there was a female protagonist. . . Can the author give me some accurate information? [Crying]

Ah? Clouds da da da da Yeah, I really want to play Genshin Impact Yun God Dangdangdangdang, watch the wonderful A cloud Genshin Impact, hum, hum, hum, I really want to play Genshin Impact Yunyuan Shen, my friends are already here Let's play Genshin Impact and Yun Shen together! Ahhhhhhhhhh I really want to play Genshin Impact Yun God, hahahaha Let's play Genshin Impact and Yun Shen together, it's good Thinking about it, I want to play Genshin Impact web page cloud, low Power consumption without distortion WiFi network cable, both can be 60 Frame, come on, come on, enter Yunyuan Shen This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation towards the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he was tempted by foreign persimmons and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. Sato Kazuma was so angry that he went to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of the Emperor Yan. The road to Shu is difficult and dangerous, how to transport grain and grass, the Northern Expedition It is a waste of national power. It is better to imitate Soochow. Only one of the four or five tigers is left. Who dares to be the pioneer of the Northern Expedition? Why not? How can the emperor's legacy be trapped and stagnant? Uh-huh~ha!! I! Wei Yan can only advance and never retreat!!! If the Wei invaders send one hundred thousand people to Yan, then they will be wiped out by the Lord. Let Cao's thieves raise the world to attack Yan Yi Can diligently refuse to retreat and defeat the enemy for the main purpose Failure is called rebellion, success is the king of diligence How can I, Wei Xi, only enjoy the glory of killing a thief? Let Yecheng burn and the traitors fall The King of Wei lost 500,000 withered bones. I was so angry. I'm so angry : King! Why break the Ultra Key? It doesn't matter if the key is broken, look at that Or Astra? : Your Majesty, why did you turn Astra into a Babar planet? The old top duel field is difficult and dangerous, how can Anbu advance to the top? Good tricks waste gold coins, it is better to imitate youth, there is only one left in Dayin Man, who dares to be a mad dog and bites me? Why not! Since I have inherited the legacy of Izuna, how can I be trapped and stagnant? I, Ma Ban, can only advance and not retreat!!! If 3000 defeats the three Yin people in a round, Madara will be the master and annihilate them all. Even if the underworld brings the black Zetsu to invade, Madara can also diligently refuse to retreat for the main enemy. Like a fish drinking water, Koma Madara is here! How dare you! The home of the Kingdom of Light is their hometown, Zuo Fei The first generation Jack came from this place, plasma fire Flower is their sun, the power of the Ultra King Created Hope Hikari Tregear Light Chinese scientists with blue bodies are full of wisdom symbol, there are many people, there are many things to be Ability Ultra Star Family and Friends Zero's Wow, motherless mother Severn, Sero's Wow Motherless special mother Leo Taiga's fish-headed hot mom Tarotero's baby Konano's dad

I burst into tears after reading this book. It can be said that it is the highest quality entertainment book I have ever read. It follows the same routine of copying texts, poems, and songs, but this book doesn't feel abrupt at all. The author's setting imagination is really brilliant. This parallel world is highly technologically advanced, and you can even enter the virtual world to live your whole life. However, the development of entertainment culture is lacking. When the protagonist borrows classic works, he will immersively experience the various life styles of the ancients, and then put the accumulated emotions into writing. All the works are presented with emotional support. They are no longer just copying the content. They have a strong sense of substitution and are particularly moving to read. Highly recommended!

The writing is really good. The part about The Sims made me cry as a grown man.

It's a really good book that has some tears, some laughter, and some excitement. To be honest, I feel that the rating shouldn't be so low. I like the author to continue to update and not forget his original intention. I believe that there will be times when the wind and waves break, and the sails will sail across the sea. Although this book has some unified expressions in some aspects, such as those moments when they see the protagonist shine, this is okay, just I can say that, but some of the poems or descriptions in it are quite acceptable. You have to keep working hard. As for the description of female characters, I can only say that it should be an inherent characteristic of male comics. I can only say that it is within the acceptable range and if I write a few more chapters, I believe it will still be popular. If it can be made into a comic one day, I will have made a contribution. Looking forward to the day when the author is truly seen by more people [laughs]

It's nice to watch, and it builds up slowly, without being too slow-paced. The writing in the poetry competition is very good. Experience life with high technology and then write ancient poems, which will not appear obtrusive. It is beautiful and I love reading it. More to come!

I have read so many novels, and the plot of this book is very imaginative, without any poisonous points. I read it all the way. The characters, such as roommates, sisters, etc., Make the protagonist filial and interesting. The protagonist is not an awkward flatterer. The protagonist experiences ancient life through science and technology to spread culture. [Thinking] [Thinking] There are flashes of inspiration in it, the audience's perspective is reversed, family affection, friendship, ideal ambitions and the contrast between liberal arts and science are all very interesting. Come on, author!