Master, Stop Pretending. The Sect Gate Is About to Collapse

The pace is slow and the details are well written. Most of the words in the article are devoted to the friendship between the disciples. Please write more about Shen Changxian [I'm about to cry]. There are also a lot of foreshadowings, such as those who rebel against fate and are in debt. Shen Changxian is always on the way to losing blood. Can he not die? The character design is really three-dimensional and the people are very vivid, so can Shen Changxian not die? Come and collect one by one, have you ever considered yourself? Then one update a day is enough. After all, each chapter is almost 6,000 words. The pace is still too slow. It can be sped up a little. In the end, can Shen Changxian survive? [Almost crying]

It's pretty good to read, but the protagonist Chang Xian is a bit marginalized. The article focuses more on the description of Jiang Xiaoman (no bad words) and the other three disciples. Most of the article is about the bond between the disciples. Then the description of Chang Xian feels a bit lacking, and they are very rude to Chang Xian (feeling unqualified). Overall, it is quite warm and worth reading.

Not bad, the pace is a bit slow, but it has the feeling of a steady flow of water. Everyone is nice. Is there any connection from the past life? I hope Shen Changxian doesn't die! He is the root of Qingya Mountain! Can you write more about Shen Changxian? This Shen Changxian keeps losing blood!

It's rare to see a fairy who doesn't follow the Shuangwen routine. Qingya Mountain is ridiculously poor, but the leader seems to be in trouble, but in reality he is silently protecting all his disciples. The plot is not bloody, there is no forced upgrade and crushing, and the gentle core of "living is the most important thing" is hidden in daily trivial matters. From a cracked door plaque to a table of warm porridge and rice, the home of a group of helpless people was slowly laid out. The writing style is light and comfortable, with a good balance of laughter and warmth. If you like the slow-paced group portrait Xianxia, ​​you can read it.

The writing is very good, but it feels like it has been describing the relationship between Jiang Xiaoman and other people. It feels like Jiang Xiaoman has been redeeming other people. I don't like it a bit. Could you describe more about the master Shen Changxian, but overall it feels good.

I like Shen Changxian. The master could have more roles. I think his strength could also be increased. The plot is slow but bearable. Then the apprentice is great. I just like being sick and weak [please take a closer look], it's best to stay strong and write with great strength.

How should I put it? It was the intention of an "old man" who had guarded an empty house for many years to pick up a child. The introduction is well narrated and summarizes the general content. The main perspective is that of Shen Changxian, the unreliable master. (The following is self-understanding after reading the book. It may contain spoilers, so read with caution) He only guards the Qingya Immortal Sect for who knows how long. It was so prosperous and lively in the past that even the peach trees are not willing to open now. He could only use one IOU to drag himself back to the world, using unreliability to cover up the sober reality. Among them, the multiple collapses and reconstructions of the "Mountain Gate" are also a clue. Is the indifference to face innate or because it has been severely damaged? It can be seen from the details in the article that Shen Changxian's cultivation is not weak, and he can also have a lot. But he just makes do with it, as long as he can survive. It wasn't until the arrival of the first disciple that Qingya Mountain gained some vitality, and he also remembered that he could change his way of life, at least for his disciple. Only then did he start to care about life, because he cared about these children who were suffering. But who cares about him? From the current point of view, his sect may be destroyed, and he is the youngest disciple in it. He became the leader, and no one asked if he was willing, so he could only do this. He silently used his blood to change their lives. Chapter 26, which is the latest chapter at present, says "Qingya Mountain is not short of blood.", I just want to ask, is it short of your blood? Finally, Xiaodao Yiqing's big knife will hurt your body, please don't do it.

The plot is very good, it should be regarded as a non-CP group portrait novel. I like the interaction between the apprentices very much. People who listen to these words "fate" and "death-defying debt" feel panicked. They really want to know what happened in Qingya Mountain in the past. Why does the leader look so bad when he says he owes Lingxiao Sword Sect an IOU? Putting the old IOU and the new one together means that the fate of the two groups of people is the same. They want to change their fate against the will of heaven but in the end...? I don't dare think about it and feel that I will cry😭 The author will update it quickly. I can't read it enough.

It's nice to look at, it feels bland, very plain, and comfortable for you. There are the boss who loves credit, the senior brother who is afraid of pain, the second senior brother who is asked not to do anything, the third senior brother who loves to keep accounts, the fourth senior brother who loves to say sorry, and the fifth senior brother who doesn't like to tell the truth. There are also many temporary or permanent residents. It is very lively and very Qingyashan, and the account books can't be thicker. Qingya Mountain never listens to fate when it recruits disciples. It's really beautiful.

The group portraits are so good-looking and so good. They are from the comic series. They are so good. Shen Changxian is invincible. He is the best in the universe. Everyone else is also invincible and super good! I want to watch the plot, but I feel like there's a lot of talk in the back and it's not as interesting as the front [grievance]