Starting with the Fourth Hokage, Making Konoha Great Again

This is actually the first book review... The author, teacher, please change the introduction when you have time... This introduction is true and makes people want to read it. I clicked and exited after reading the introduction for the first time, and almost didn't scroll down. I browsed through the recommended list and clicked back when there was nothing else I wanted to see. The content of the story is quite interesting, and the character creation seems to be okay so far. I haven't seen Goldfinger in other articles, so I feel like I should write about it in the introduction. Anyway, collect it first! Looking forward to the follow-up [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's very interesting to watch, the protagonist has both intelligence and strength, and the plot and political struggle are also well written. It's not stupid, but it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist. It's worth watching.

The author is very sophisticated now, and his writing and internal strategies are quite good. The few shortcomings are that it seems to me that the protagonist did not travel through time and became Minato, but Minato awakened Su Hui's feelings, so I hope the author can adjust this discordant place, and there will be no other problems.

It's okay, but I think the politics of Naruto in your story take up too much space, and the progress is very slow. This is an extraordinary world. I personally think the main plot should be developed towards invincibility. As long as you have the power to solve 70% of the problems, the rest will not work no matter how brilliant your political methods are.

The AI ​​is refined, at least the author has put in half the effort, so it doesn't hurt to have some fun.

Yes, the overall writing is very smooth, there are not many logical inconsistencies, and no flaws were found.

Unrestrained violent organizations cannot benefit the country (Ninja Village). Just like Jin Yiwei and Dongxi Factory, without restraint, they can actually override the imperial power, but without the support of the imperial power, they are nothing. So the root itself is the right given by the Hokage, it is a knife in the hand of the Hokage, but when the Hokage cannot mobilize and use it, and cannot be held in the hand of the Hokage, then the knife cannot be allowed to exist, otherwise it will hurt itself.

Although it is another book about time-traveling Naruto playing tricks, the overall plot is okay and the protagonist is well established.

When writing a toad prophecy, don't predict the protagonist. You can change it so that you can't see it or use the original work. What you see in advance is the determined fate and the path the protagonist will take. What you guess is the recognition of the protagonist.

Obito is not for Lin, Lin is just an introduction. Obito's real purpose is to eliminate all ninja systems. What he wants is a carefree utopian world where children do not have to go to the battlefield and have no regrets. In Infinite Tsukuyomi, everything will be perfect. Lin is just the straw that makes Obito collapse of the ninja system.