Naruto: My Yandere A Guang Wants Me All to Herself

Children, when you come up with this title, you have already won half the battle. If you keep telling your children that their writing skills will be better, you will win [smirk]

The writing style is average, but his subject matter is rare, extremely rare, and he always wins.

The subject matter is okay, and there are indeed a lot of small flaws, but it can be read. For example, Chapter 11 talks about bullying the Bai Yang trio, and Chapter 12 talks about Bai Yang being called a genius like Kakashi. Isn't this contradictory [face covering]

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It's embarrassing. Needless to say, the encounter between the protagonist and the light is a bit far-fetched. It would be better to change it according to the plot in the ultimate storm and find the seal by chance during the mission (but the meeting time will be later)

It's really good. Although some parts are unreasonable, it doesn't affect the plot very much. In summary, people have shown it to you for free, so what else do you need about a bicycle?

In the introduction, the heroine seems to be the same, and Xiao Qingmei was specially marked. It is not clear when I create a character. The author did not click all the likes and comments. I saw three comments about supporting a single heroine, but I did not see a single like about dual heroines (maybe it is just me who didn't see it). I am currently reading these to see if there are dual heroines in the end. If it is a fan novel, it will be the whole loser. Let's take a look at it first, and then change the score later [Thinking]

It's pretty good-looking, although, I think Tsunade is also the heroine, plus Hikaru and Nayuki, three of them are enough.

As long as you don't mess up this plot and keep updating it, it's guaranteed to be a hit, and it's a sure thing [face covering] [OK]