
A Commoner’s Naruto: Invincible from the Start of Eight Gates Training
平民火影:从八门遁甲开始无敌
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- Completed
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- 2.0M Words
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- Anime Fanfiction
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It's really unique and youthful. As for the female lead, it should be two female leads: Uchiha Izumi and Ayame. Forget it, it's already gone too far with harem elements and even veers towards a harem theme. This book isn't for me. Goodbye.
Currently, it's a single-female-lead harem story. The male lead is passionate, righteous, and morally upright, practically invincible, with combat power currently at the (super)King level. Aside from a brief period of weakness when he first started training as a child, he hasn't suffered any losses. The author has added some original elements to the original work, but they're all logically consistent. Readers can confidently jump in.
Very exciting. Tsunade's character is portrayed very well. In the original work, she was unconventional in her approach to medicine, a medical genius who saved countless lives, had a volatile temper and broke Jiraiya's ribs with a single punch, and was addicted to gambling yet still willing to take on the mess that Konoha had made.
Personally, I think it's pretty good. So far, there don't seem to be any major flaws. I've been reading for almost 10 years, so I'd call myself a veteran bookworm. I've read at least ten Naruto fanfics, and the timeline in this book is quite good—not one of those generic, overused timelines. I hope the author keeps up the good work!
It's amazing, really good! I love reading scientifically grounded stories, and the protagonist is even a research student, haha! I could watch it twice already. It would be even better if the author recommended some Naruto or other good anime/manga series.
Over 200 pages. The writing is good, and the flow of thought is decent. The beginning is really well-written, and of course, that doesn't mean the second half is bad—it's good too. But considering the book's current performance, there are definitely some reasons why it's only around 200 pages. Honestly, four stars is too high for me.
The only downside is that it's too short. The Uchiha massacre served as a minor climax. Overall, both the plot and writing style are fine. The author needs to release more chapters; the lack of words is a major flaw. The Eight Gates technique needs more exciting climactic battles.
I quite like it. There are a few minor flaws, but overall it's very good. I personally really like it. Well, never mind what I said. Chapters 88, 89, and 90 definitely amplified the poison and suppressed the combat power. Before that, opening three gates of the Eight Gates wouldn't have caused much damage. But in these three chapters, they dragged it out and only opened them at the very end, making the protagonist look like a clown.
It's considered quite good among fanfiction. The beginning was watchable, but the ending was terrible.
Four stars is an encouragement, five stars would be a lie. I only read up to chapter 95 because chapters 92-95 were too toxic. Although the beginning was also a bit toxic, it didn't significantly affect the reading experience. The rest was okay, but I couldn't continue, so I stopped reading. Three stars is my honest rating, and four stars is encouragement.