The Outcast: After Sleeping for a Hundred Years, I Pay the Impermanence Officers from the Start

Chapter 71 Review: 1. The setting is fresh and doesn't follow the old tropes of Longhu Mountain or Wudang. 2. The plot is fast-paced with its own introduction and foreshadowing (the Luo Tian Reef story has been overused, but the author handles it very well). I'm worried about the later chapters being difficult to write. Keep up the good work, author! 👏

The plot is undeniably exciting, and the author has laid a deep foundation. If the story can be developed fully and the true reason for the decline of the Three Families can be revealed, it will be a top-tier fanfic, especially for *Under One Person*. The setting is relatively new, and the transmigrator's identity isn't misused. The plot is logical, and I hope it doesn't fall apart later on.

To be honest, this book really takes a different approach. Most fanfiction revolves around Zhang Chulan, but this one is different. It has its own main storyline, its own goals, and its own legacy. The usual Luo Tian Grand Ceremony is only briefly mentioned before the main storyline begins. Whether it's the descriptions of the inheritance of cultivation techniques or the battle scenes, they all have their own unique appeal… Overall, it's definitely a good read.

It's clear the author put a lot of effort into writing the outline; the story's overall logic is sound. Besides the main character's storyline, it also showcases the author's understanding of supernatural beings, which is quite interesting. Keep it up, author! I believe in you!

Excellent! The protagonist's legacy is very interesting, and it's not like other similar storylines that focus on investigating the Jia Shen Rebellion. It's very intriguing. I just don't know how they'll write the rest; it feels quite grand.

Based on what you've written, the situation seems a bit too big.

The lead actor is handsome and talented, the plot is fast-paced and very interesting.

The book is good, the author has dug a lot of plot holes, and I also hope the lineage of the Heavenly Vein won't die out.

Very good. The author has their own unique insights into traditional culture. They've managed to weave these insights into the story and tell it well. Whether people agree with them is another matter, but the fact that most people can understand it is a skill. That's not easy.

The entry point is well-written, and it has its own main storyline, not just following the original manga's plot but interweaving and interweaving elements. However, it leaves quite a few plot holes, making it seem difficult to fill them later on. The power levels between characters are also a bit inconsistent, but it's not a major issue.