The Outcast: After Sleeping for a Hundred Years, I Pay the Impermanence Officers from the Start

Chapter 71 evaluation. 1. The new setting does not follow the old routine of Longhu Mountain or Wudang. 2. The plot is not procrastinated and has its own introduction, buried thread, etc. (Luotian Dajiao was badly written, but the author basically covered it in one stroke very well). I am afraid that it will be difficult to write in the later stage, so please do your best👏

I can only say that the plot is very enjoyable, and the author has dug a deep hole. If the story can be developed completely, and the real reason for the decline of the Three Meridians can be explained, it is a top fandom under one person. The setting is also relatively new, and the identity of the time traveler is not used indiscriminately. The plot is reasonable, and I hope it will not collapse later.

To be honest, this book does take a different path. Most one-person fanfics are written around Zhang Chulan, but this book is different. He has his own main line, his own goals, and his own inheritance. The cookie-cutter Luo Tian Dajiao briefly writes about the past and officially begins his own main line. Whether it is about the inheritance of skills or the description of the battle plot, he has his own pleasure... Generally speaking, it is really good to read.

At first glance, it seems that the outline is well written, ma'am. The overall logic of the story is online. In addition to the main plot of one person, there is also my own understanding of different people. It's quite interesting. Come on, ma'am, I'm optimistic about you~

Not bad, not bad. The protagonist's inheritance is very interesting, and it's not the same as other main plots like tracing the Jiashen Rebellion. It fills my appetite. I just don't know how to write it later, it feels rather grand.

According to what you wrote, the situation is not a bit big.

The protagonist is very handsome and capable, and the plot is not draggy, which is very interesting.

The book is good, the author has dug a deep hole, and I hope that the incense of Tianmai will not be cut off.

Very good, the author has his own views on traditional culture. Able to write out these insights and intersperse them into the story to tell a good story. It's hard to say whether you agree with it or not. Being able to understand it by most people is a matter of skill. It's not easy.

The entry point is well written, and it also has its own main line of thought. It does not follow the main line of the original comic, but is intertwined and interspersed. But there are a lot of holes dug, and it feels like it's not easy to fill in the back, and the combat power between the characters is a bit weak, but it's not harmful.