The Outcast: Feng Shui Master, I Use My Body to Hold Down the Mountains and Rivers

Ahem... In summary, it's well written. Although the first 20 chapters or so to set up the background and the exercises are a bit boring, the rest of the writing is really good. Compared with other one-person fanfics, there are no intrusions of other abilities (rating +1), forced following the plot (rating +1), novel abilities that fit the background of the person (rating +1), humorous language, and no forced sensationalism (rating +1). It can be said that it is a good book worth reading. I have some immature ideas about the following plot. According to the "cheating son" routine passed down by the master of the land, I can add a female protagonist and write it in the finale, which can also echo the beginning of the story. Regarding the female lead candidates, I think Xia He is good, or Er Zhuang is also good. However, I strongly recommend Xia He (I am Lao Se Pi) 😎 Finally, I hope the author will not mess up the work or stop updating it. At least it can give this book a good ending. 😘

This book currently feels like the most natural and comfortable one I have ever read among other novels. It is not as stiff as others, but very natural and gentle. The storyline is great and feels convincing, as if the plot is supposed to happen with the protagonist. Highly recommended!!!

It's well written, it's not deliberately close to the plot, it's very natural.

I want the heroine Chen Duo. Very well written. The plot is relaxed and relaxed. You can incorporate emotions without procrastination.

It's very well written, and it's one of the better fanfics.

So far, it seems to be the best fanfic I have ever read. There is no system, no cheating, everything is within an acceptable range, and the development is also very interesting. It does not revolve around the original protagonist, but has its own world. The occasional intersections are also very interesting to write.

The best, the best, the best, this is the best one-person fanfic I have ever written so far. I will say the important things three times again, the best, the best, the best, the best 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I have read forty chapters so far, and the writing is very interesting. Although there are some places where I still want to fast forward, but overall it is very good and makes people want to continue reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard and just hope that it will not end unfinished. In addition, the author's comments at the end of each chapter are also very interesting. It can be seen that the author really likes this book and is full of love.

I didn't feel much about the title of the book at first, but after reading it, I realized that this book is really good! The characters are very consistent with the original novel, and unlike the nanny novel, it has its own original plot. In short, it's just a rush!

The plot and everything are pretty good. I just want to ask who this single girl is. It seems that Zhang Lingyu is not undressed. Is it Xia or Duo? Just out of curiosity. Mainly, I feel that the male protagonist's doting on Duo is a bit like a brother's doting on his sister, not quite like a man and a woman.