After Disguising Myself as a Man, I Got Tangled Up with a Miracle Doctor

The narration of the article is very delicate, with many details, implicit but touching. The two protagonists are independent individuals, redeeming each other, achieving each other, and supporting each other. The relevant professional terms in the article look very professional (anyway, science students look very professional), which shows the author's writing attitude. However, many places in the article are quite repetitive. It can be seen that it is a clue, a key point, a theme (and so on), but there are too many descriptions and the language is very similar, which seems a bit cumbersome. Maybe it can be streamlined, so that it will not be too wordy and will not affect the things that the author needs to express.

This is a rare double-heroine novel with mature writing. Even though the heroine was chased and her close relatives were killed, there was no explanation of the follow-up investigation. The focus is on finding the heroine. If she wants to make love, I guess the follow-up will be enough. The follow-up writing is getting better and better. I just don't know how the heroine will reverse the case and take revenge.

Who knows? It's rare to see someone write so well about a woman disguised as a man. Most of them are very masculine. I often give up after reading half of it. But this one is just right. It's very well written.

The case handling was really clear and logical, and the little couple's intimate gestures were really cute! But are some passages repeated? It can be seen that the author really likes detective work and is stuck on the situation!

It's quite good-looking. The overall style is to solve crimes. The two people have always been like comrades-in-arms, with ambiguity in some details. The overall tone is relatively stable. The picture in my mind reminds me of the tone of several costume dramas such as "Langya Bang" and "The Imperial Gift of Xiaowu". The emotional line is supplemented, but it looks more weighty [like]. The emotional development between the two people reminds me of "Vincenzo", where comrades walk side by side. The only thing is: some paragraphs are too long and very tiring to read. Overall, it's pretty good, except that 1. Some paragraphs are too long; 2. Some content is repeated many times, and it feels like they forget it while talking, and it's not that the content is repeated, but some of the sentences are exactly the same. But apart from these two points, the overall story is very good, the tone is good, and it is very interesting.

The plot of the article is very exciting, but I never thought about the ending, thinking it would be a sweet story [crying][crying][crying]

The more I look at it, the better it looks! It's been a long time since I saw a new book with two heroines! Come on [love][love][love]

The writing is good, the relationship between the two people is very delicate, and the characters are delicious. When you write something, maybe you don't have an outline? Some foreshadowings have been revealed and revealed again [Thinking] Ignore these things to see

Good article, fascinating. Good article, fascinating.

The case is very exciting. I like this rhythm of slowly losing my emotions as I grow up.