The Maid Just Wants to Run Away, but Her Mad Dog of a Lord Keeps Kissing Her

The writing is very good. Ma Wencai's character is very good. Just like the TV, the heroine is also very powerful and charming. When the heroine realizes that she can't go back, she will definitely make a comeback. Looking at it now, Ma Wencai will definitely be the one who is manipulated emotionally in the future. The female protagonist in the back is too kind and naive, as if she doesn't know how chaotic Wei and Jin are. She is not a top student. She always wants freedom, but has no ability to protect herself. Then she keeps arguing with the male protagonist to be free, to leave, and to save people. She feels that the male protagonist has not listened to the analysis of the world he gave her. She lives in her own world and shoots arrows at the male protagonist. She wants to save people and then asks the male protagonist to take action. It is somewhat separated from the previous character design. It feels like the heroine is getting stupider and more naive [smile]

The heroine setting is great, and the tension between the male and female protagonists is super exciting. I still hope that the heroine can go home in the end.

In fact, I could accept it until the heroine ran away and jumped into the river. I thought that after the escape, she would develop her own career. However, in the later stage, it was still about the love and hatred between the heroine and Ma Wencai. A total of ten chapters were updated in two days, all of which were "forced love by the boss" without any other content. Over two hundred chapters, three-quarters of which are the emotional scenes between the heroine and Ma Wencai, I don't know. What is the purpose of setting such a birth and ability for the heroine? There are other comments saying that the heroine is innocent. The heroine in modern times is at worst a rich third or fourth generation. In such a family, even an only child cannot understand everything (the heroine will take over her own industry in the future, and the top person at the worst must have the ability to manipulate people's hearts) From the introduction and the design of the heroine, I always thought that in the later development, the heroine would either use Ma Wencai's power to climb higher, or rely on her own ability to have a career, and she could bear the humiliation and poison Ma Wencai and escape, and her escape was simply fatal. Including the three male characters currently appearing, they fell in love with the heroine because of her appearance, not because of her talent or ability (Xie Jie may have a little bit of it because of her ability)

It's not just literary talent, it's a very cultural level. That's enough. I've really been feeling sorry for the heroine. I saw that the heroine used to have such a good life in modern times and was successful and famous, but she ended up being a slave here. The heroine is really smart and has a lot of feelings for her family and country. Too much It's charming, let alone Ma Wencai. I fell in love with the heroine earlier than Ma Wencai. I originally read it for Ma Wencai, but I was completely attracted to the heroine in this book. Later when I saw that Ma Wencai said those words about being a concubine, I was really angry and a little heartbroken. . . . I feel so wronged and feel sorry for the heroine's baby (but I jumped directly to this chapter, so I may have misunderstood). I hope it's not like this. Damn, (if this is the case, then I really have a heart attack, and I will really feel sorry for the heroine, and then get over it. If not, I will delete this comment. Sorry, sorry, but I really want to say it). I want to ask weakly, does our heroine's baby like our pony? Do you really like it? Since when did I start liking it, I really want to know! ! !

The only shortcoming of the author is that the output is too small. The heroine is too perfect in modern times. I hope the heroine can go home in the end. Even though I can't go home, I hope there will be a sequel. I also like the main plot because I like the emotions in the novel. If I only love you in this life, I will never let you go in all my lifetimes. Such a strong emotional color.

The writing is so good, the writing style is natural, the professional foundation is solid, the plot development is not cliché, the dialogues of the characters are vivid and flexible, and the characters stand up. I haven't seen such a good article in I don't know how long it has been. Author, you must keep writing. It seemed quite fresh at first, but then it inexplicably pushed the male protagonist to extremes. From being paranoid at the beginning, he became obsessed with literature. At this point, I just want to ask when the 400,000-word story will go to the academy to study.

Chen Guanlin's version of Ma Wencai, the heroine has her own main plot, not the same Nishan Academy. It's good to watch, recommended!

My dear, let's go back to modern times to have a vigorous love affair. In a hierarchical society, a woman of unknown origin has limited resources and can do very little. Structural oppression and the course of historical development cannot be changed by one person. The characters are a bit messy. It can be seen that the heroine comes from a good family and has not been beaten by society. Well-behaved and smart. But someone who can start his own business and make achievements has to deal with many people. He won't be dull, obedient, or confused.

It's quite nice to watch. The character's inner perspective is very clear. At least he doesn't act like an NPC or write a story like a template. Although I have only read the first few chapters, the character and image of the heroine are already established. I hope that the emotional line will not collapse in the future. Come on.

This one is really different! Please give him a push! Forced love! The heroine is smart! The hero is not stupid! Please push [cry][cry][cry][cry] I'm so afraid that the author won't update [cry][cry][cry]! My family members really wrote this very well. Sorry, I also gave up on Chapter 243 and became the leader of the blame inexplicably.