[Behind-the-Scenes] [Crossover] [Overpowered]
Yun Juan Chu transmigrates into a terrifying world under invasion by an evil god.
What's more, this world is home to countless familiar anime characters from his previous life. But here, they all seem to be ordinary people with no supernatural powers.
Artoria, Tokisaki Kurumi, Kikyo, Hancock, Hyuga Hinata, Ayanami Rei, Yuuki Asuna, Emilia...
For the sake of love and peace, Yun Juan Chu establishes a supernatural organization, plays the role of a savior, and sets out on the great journey of saving the world!
It's obviously very good, but no one has watched it. The recent suppression of comics fans by Tomato is really disgusting. They are like animals.
Let me give you a suggestion. If the author and book friends don't like it, Please don't criticize me. Since the theme of this book is an invincible novel and the protagonist's system currently has no upper limit, let me first assume that the system set by the author has no upper limit. Then let me give a few examples. For example, the protagonist is so lucky that he suddenly draws props from other system streams. If you don't say role-playing cards for the role-playing stream, then it is similar to giving Father Andrew Anderson If Father Mori's role-playing card does not change according to Father Andrew's character, he will quickly improve the progress of the role-playing card, or some possessions like the Infinite Possession of American Manga that directly give a character access to all the abilities and strength of a certain character. I think that in the future, the protagonist should help support these two-dimensional characters as a senior. In this case There can't be only one senior, right, so I think there should be more seniors so that the protagonist can use more vests or make some puppets. That's it. If there are any mistakes in my comments and suggestions, please point them out calmly. Thank you. That's it. Come on, author. I don't care whether you use my suggestions or not. Not necessarily as an author. Even if you face suggestions from readers, you can only absorb the useful ones and ignore the useless ones. If you think my suggestions are useless, you can ignore them. I don't care. Come on.
Looking at the comments on the first chapter, I wrote the specific reasons there. After the changes, I will withdraw them and wait for 100,000 words to change them to five stars. After all, the subject matter is still good. But what the comments mentioned is a matter of principle. If it is not improved, it will really be a big problem. I hope to pay more attention to it in the future, thank you I kept the promise and changed it to five stars. I originally wanted to wait for 100,000 yuan before changing it, but the plot is indeed good, and the description method is not too flawed. At least the writing is standard, the words and sentences are not too unfamiliar, and the writing style is okay. As for the character creation and other aspects, we can't tell much about it due to the small number of words, but we can see the author's intentions.
Great, super exciting
Very nice. Come on, author.
Come on, author!!!