Opening a Shop in the Apocalypse: From Convenience Store to Wasteland City

The monster is just like a piece of wood. The iron monster will only stare at the protagonist in the room and would rather get hurt than keep smashing the window. However, he turns a blind eye to the gangster next to him who smashes the door and is injured and screams. He does not turn off the lights at night, killing all nearby monsters. They all attracted them and surrounded the store. The supporting character asked them to turn off the lights and the protagonist used the "Qin theory" to explain why not. If you ask me, the protagonist is a member of the monsters. He deliberately attracted the monsters and then dispersed them to the nearby room so that he could ambush a group of humans when someone came to the store.

Shouldn't the title of the book be "I, a Virgin, Open a Convenience Store in the Doomsday"?

Why is there no comment in the text if it's so vicious? . .

This book should be called "I Will Be a Virgin in the End Times"

It might be more appropriate to change the title of the book to "I Play House in the End of the World"

The end of the world, clean hot water, food, medicine. Are you still talking about the order of a civilized society and relying on the morality of customers? 88

The title of the book should be "I Will Be a Virgin in the Last Days"

I keep asking people for their names. Is it necessary to open a store?

There are a few things that don't feel right and affect the overall reading. 1. Why do these two words "fuck hard" and "I'll go too" appear so frequently? Is the author trying to make up the word count? Adding a few more periods won't affect the comfort of reading. 2. The character of the protagonist is not clearly explained. Why is it like this? There is no antecedent. He is obviously a person who accidentally tied a gold finger in the apocalypse. How can he be so calm? What he did before is not clearly explained. How did he create this character? This character is too thin and not three-dimensional at all. 3. The plot is indeed a bit awkward. Why does it always focus on other things instead of convenience store upgrades? Why is the upgrade stream written in such a strange way? It affects the reading experience. It always describes other things related to people. The descriptions are also very complicated and boring. As far as I can see, these are the problems. Normally I would abandon the article, but it is still interesting. The subject matter is okay. It's not that I don't have the strength, but it just doesn't feel like that. How long does it take to rewrite that part? The rhythm is not very good. The character is not three-dimensional. It is a bit rusty. I will continue to read. The author hopes to work hard and write a better article [Note]

The idea is good, but it seems too tired. I understand that the author wants to be the founder of order in the end of the world, wants to protect the elderly and children, and wants to give the male protagonist less golden fingers and more to highlight his intelligence. But after reading Chapter 20, the male protagonist actually has no ability to protect himself. He relies entirely on other people's ideas and stores to protect himself. I feel that it is better to just give the male protagonist a golden finger to protect himself, because frankly speaking, the male protagonist has no ability to protect himself and even insists on imposing a rule of 2,500,000 to 80,000 yuan. I feel like the author has added a filter to the protagonist, how could it always be so smooth... In short, there is already a golden finger, there is really no need to make it as hard as a Machiavellian plot. It is too tiring to watch. It is obvious that you are relying on the store, but you still want to highlight the ability of the male protagonist. It is unnecessary...