Dragon Raja: Ten-Pull from the Start, Becoming the Strongest Succubus

The author's writing is really beautiful. The writing style of this novel is very good. It is written with great care and can be read. It is the kind of reading word for word. If it were other novels, it would be ten lines at a glance. Otherwise, it would be half-read and unreadable. The author should work hard. Isn't it better not to stop? Promise me, I rarely give gifts to novels, and this is not one of the few [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [almost cry] [almost cry] [almost cry] [almost cry] [almost cry]

The writing is good so far. I would like to ask if the heroine has Nono and how to deal with the problem of the hero's limiter. According to Saitama's settings, his strength increases exponentially. The next second he can instantly kill himself the previous second. His strength is increasing every moment. If the protagonist is not invincible before the plot officially begins, it will cause the problem of overpowering the battle. I really want to know, the dragon clan likes the senior sister @

The writing is good, it has a bit of light literature but not that fancy, the plot is okay, the main protagonist's performance is very comfortable, not like a gangster or a loser, and the current protagonist should be biased towards the invincible style, the limiter thing, the original work has been trained for 3 years, until it can stabilize the cosmic wolf, it is considered a multi-level. Fighting a black king is a single planet, it depends on how the author wants to write it.

It looks good so far, the descriptions are more delicate, and the writing style is also good. I can give it a thumbs up, but the number of words is a bit short.

Pretty good fanfic, very sweet. Daily life occupies most of the space, and in half of it, a family of three (Natsumi Eri) is in the mode of an old married woman, Natsumi has a tsundere character, and Eri is very cute. There are very few battles, you know the Saitama template. It seems that I will accept Nuonuo later. In addition, I put forward my own opinions on some book reviews: 1. Someone said 🐢. I didn't see it. Usually Xia Mi likes to be tough-talking and dominate verbally, but is actually submissive to the male master. 2. Some people say that the writing is not good. The author is actually very good at character creation, and the characters are very three-dimensional. It's just that the writing style is light and there are no amazing words or sentences. I personally am a picky old bookworm. As far as I am concerned, I find it very comfortable and smooth to watch. I think this is enough. 3. Some people say AI. The main reason is that the White Queen had two or three small bugs before entering the school, such as Hui Liyi tugging on the male protagonist's sleeve when taking a bath @. Other than that, I actually think it's pretty good. The main author can be seen to have put a lot of care into character creation and it's very distinctive. It's worth reading.

It's super good-looking, the plot is very enjoyable, and there are no poisonous points. Come on, the invincible protagonist, let's change the fate of the girls [laughing]

I think it's still worth watching except for the fact that it's a bit too slow to recruit girls. I wonder if the author can add a princess as the heroine.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the character dialogue seems human-like. I hope the author can optimize it.

I think it's okay, of course it depends on the individual! The author's best thing is not to overwhelm the combat power, otherwise it will look weird.

There are some flaws, and I hope the author will take a good look at it, as this may turn off many readers. But the writing style is relaxed, and the emotional descriptions are very good and sincere. The fate of the girls has also changed, and it is a harem novel. So come on [laugh][laugh]