[Dragon Raja Fanfiction]
"Sword Mastery isn't just for playing with blades, and divine oracles aren't necessarily just for purifying bloodlines."
"The Sword of Apocalypse, the Bright Star, the White-Crowned Lord, the Sunforger, the Eternal Homecoming, the Headless King of Tokyo, the Final Messiah," he declared.
"So you're saying you're my guardian spirit?"
One day, Su Huai, who had a three-year history of delusions and a Spirit Skill called "Sword Mastery," suddenly discovered that the girl from his hallucinations had come to life.
The girl who was his guardian spirit led him into the real world of Dragon Raja.
Dragons, Hybrids, Spirit Skills, alchemy... A wondrous and dangerous world.
And, of course, the all-powerful Miss Guardian Spirit!
"You've been buffed. Get in there!"
"Odin, the Black King, whoever you are, you're just a dragon! Take this sword!"
What can a mere Dragon Lord do against the hard work and dedication of my guardian spirit?
That summer, the ever-burning mystic-eyed sorcerer was still just a high school graduate, and the unlucky kid hadn't yet opened the door to the world. None of the footnotes of fate had appeared.
There was still time.
"Then let's find one happy ending among ten thousand tragedies."
(Current progress: The Headless King of Tokyo; next arc: The Sunforger)
It's not bad. I didn't notice it at first, but when it comes to the battle scenes and the narration, it feels like a slightly hot-blooded one. It's pretty good. I think Dragon Clan fans should have this kind of flavor. Generally speaking, the protagonist's combat power is also quite high, and it should be fun where it should be. There may be situations where the combat power is slightly suppressed in the future, but the plot cannot be sluggish, otherwise the perception will suddenly drop a lot. Tomato has always been said to have three golden chapters. I feel that the author has too many trivial things in the front and may not be able to retain people. I might as well try writing the climax part in the first two chapters in reverse order to retain people. The writing is generally quite Feng Yue's. I haven't read too much of Feng Yue's Apocalypse Forecast, but I've read Feng Yue's Crown of Silence. The style is similar. The best thing is that it's rare for a fan to be willing to get rid of Lu Mingfei at the beginning of the game. In my opinion, logically speaking, it would do more harm than good if the second protagonist came into contact with Lu Mingfei at the beginning. The beginning was good, so I stayed to watch it, otherwise I would have run away. Secondly, there is the issue of female protagonists. Eri Yi and the spirit behind her must be eliminated. Xiami and Zero can also consider it. I personally think that there should be no more than four female protagonists. If there are more, most people will not be able to write emotional lines. If there are too many female protagonists, there will definitely not be enough space to shape the growth and emotional lines of the female protagonist. It looks pretty good so far, but I'll give it four stars first. If the quality continues to be maintained later, I'll give it five stars😳
It's okay, is it okay? Did the author refer to "Apocalypse Forecast"? Also, I found that many dragon fan fiction seemed to choose to join Cassel Academy, but I found that after they joined the academy, the academy seemed to be of little help to the protagonist, or the help was very limited. It felt that even if they did not join the academy, it would not have a big impact on the protagonist's combat power. Instead, the protagonist had to help them do things and listen to their orders. Has Cassel Academy replaced the position of the system? As long as they don't know how to push the plot, they can be given tasks?
It's very interesting. Come on, author, you must keep reading ❤️❤️❤️❤️There are too many Dragon Clan fans who are chasing after each other and it will be discontinued🥺🥺🥺🥺
I said the author NB combines the advantages of Apocalypse and Dragon Clan. I have wanted to read similar fanfics for a long time but can't find them at all.
So far, it seems that the writing is good, and the rhythm of the content is well grasped in my opinion. The protagonist is not overpowered and not weak, and his abilities are well developed. Among the few books I have seen, there are a few that are excellent. They are not fixed routines. As long as they are updated, they will slowly catch up. However, the updates are a bit slow, and those who came later have caught up, so I want to keep reading now.
It smells a bit like an apocalypse forecast, come on, author
Okay, the article is pretty good
This is the best book I've seen on Tomato in the past month
After watching Tokyo Decapitation King, I feel that it is okay so far. The main climaxes in the early stage are concentrated here. The text is also concise. It would be better if the update can be faster.
The writing style is great, and the whole article is very comfortable to read. I have just finished watching Tokyo Decapitation King, and I am looking forward to the next development. The viewing experience has just been completed!