Dragon Raja: I Am Zhulong

Author, your writing is actually very good, but I don't know why it feels so messy. It's not that the plot is messy, it's just that the whole angle is messy. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, but the plot can be given a five-star rating.

It's still barely there, but I just watched a little bit and found that there are many differences from the original work. It's not like AI. AI knows the settings of the original work.

Come on, don't stop updating

It's very well written, why are so few people reading it?!!! But it doesn't matter. This is my other account. I also have another account called Lu Yao No Return. I'll use the larger account tomorrow and give it another five stars!!!!!!!

It looks messy, with too many foreshadowings, and the background of the characters is relatively vague. There is a lot of originality. I hope the author can fill in the holes. And there's just not enough to see I feel that the author's writing style is a bit hazy, especially the emotional lines, such as bridges and rivers. I have written them several times, but apart from telling me that there is a connection between the protagonist and Xiami, I have no feeling at all. Also, write the interactions well for me, don't just mention them in one stroke (for example, kissing, etc., I will write all the various descriptions) 😠

Come on (ಠ .̫.̫ ಠ). .