The Little Loli Evil God Would Never Invade the World

It's quite lively, I hope it's not a eunuch, it's interesting and I love watching it [laughs]

The plot of the story is well arranged, not too fast or too slow, and I don't see any traces of AI. It is a traditional hand-written novel. The characters are not broken so far. At least after reading the first volume, I feel that it is OK. The author's basic skills are also relatively solid, and the reading is very smooth. There are no bad points so far. As long as it keeps up, it has the potential to be above 9.0.

This book is really good. I think pasta should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete. But the length of the screw will affect the torque of the excavator, and the length of the charger cable will affect the climate of the North Atlantic. This will undoubtedly promote the development of the love affair between Erlang Shen and Pan Jinlian. The result is certain that the voltage will affect the convergence of McDonald's and KFC in the Antarctic. I think you should use No. 95 Gasoline when frying twice-cooked pork. After all, the protease produced by photosynthesis will cause global warming. So when the engineers were demining on Huarong Road, they were ambushed by Qin Shihuang with mechas. Every time they rode in the general, Horses will release a large number of charged particles, triggering turbulent energy flows, resulting in reduced cabbage production in the fields, thus affecting the sales of green onions in pancake rolls on Wall Street. According to the Pythagorean theorem, it is not difficult to deduce the word formation of Jing Yesi, in which the subject clause expresses Du Fu Wanting to die for the country, the feeling of being free and easy, especially when describing Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If Nuo Shou hadn't attached an outer ring with a Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. It also shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are on the scene, and the character descriptions are also in place!"

There are too few people, it looks good, the writing is good, and the narrative is smooth [I learned it][I learned it] The first few chapters are a bit lengthy, and the changes are too slow, which is not in line with the Tomato style, but it is not bad. The transformation story, the protagonist becomes an evil lolita, very restrained, I like [Adore][Love Mu] The character is more interesting, cute and cute [Shy][Shy][Shy] I guess I plan to write a long story, the introduction is a bit weak, I should highlight the characteristics [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss] I hope the author will work hard and don't stop updating [Love][Love]

Hmm... The plot of God and Man, the protagonist of God and Man, and the description of God and Man. Interesting and beautiful! ! !

Not bad, looking forward to the follow-up. As for the data problem, I think the problem arises in the first volume. A large number of scenes, characters and concepts are added all at once. The reader has a poor sense of involvement and feels like he is just watching the story. The first volume is the most important volume to attract readers. To attract people and bring people into the world of the story, the pace can be slowed down appropriately and many transitions can be added to make the connection between scenes more natural, while slowly unfolding the world. By the second volume, I feel that the author has gotten better, and I hope it can continue.

As far as the first volume is concerned, it can be said to be very solid, very promising, and full of potential. Waiting for this book to take off [please update]

It looks good to the senses

The Twins story is great, it would be nice if Loli had more interpersonal relationships.

I love reading it, it's a very interesting book