The Witch Mom Is Unreliable

The content is rated three stars, and the richness of the witch world-building adds another star. However, the author's writing style is somewhat immature. The purpose of many passages is unclear, and the writing is tedious and dense. It feels like the author wanted to write down every image that came to mind, but novels differ from comics and anime.

I've only read about half of it so far, and it's already getting a bit difficult; there are too many paragraphs and they're too cramped. If you pay a little more attention and make a few minor changes, it will be perfect... Also, I don't know if the author has noticed, but at the beginning of a certain chapter, this book suddenly starts to affect the reading experience... Hmm...

There are too many detailed descriptions; they are written in too much detail. Many things that could be mentioned in passing are described in detail. Who put this novel on my bookshelf? Some things are against principle and shouldn't be used. I suggest revising chapters 34-38. Even if you dared to write it, I wouldn't dare read it.

The subject matter is fantastic, unlike anything I've ever encountered before. However, the language is excessively repetitive; I can practically recite the sentence structure and adjectives for the next paragraph. The plot is extremely drawn out; a simple act like drinking milk takes up half a chapter. These are typical flaws, but the novel subject matter does offer a fresh perspective.

The story is quite good, with a heartwarming slice-of-life feel, but it has a strong AI element. This kind of content doesn't seem like something an AI could write, making me suspect the author enjoys having AI polish the writing. Although this affects the viewing experience, considering it's a Tomato (a popular Chinese film critic) film, it's still considered excellent.

It's well-written, but there are too many "not... But..." Phrases, which makes it seem like the author is padding the word count. However, the storyline is very enjoyable. There's no deliberate characterization like in wish-fulfillment novels, nor any excessive emphasis on the protagonist's uniqueness; there are no overly bizarre or strange special events. I personally don't like using heavy firepower weapons.

It's a good read, the overall quality is guaranteed, and the quantity is sufficient. I suggest the author provide a more appropriate introduction to the book, at least letting readers know what type of book it is. A vague introduction can affect the reading experience and may even cause some readers to miss the book. Hmm... It's also easy for some readers to make a mistake...

Wow, beautiful. The words before my eyes have transported me to a world of living witches. Wow!

The little witch is so cute 😋

The novel's enigmatic writing style, coupled with plot points like "first becoming a grandson, then a grandfather," and "not eating beef," along with potentially polished descriptions, makes for a substantial and satisfying read full of witty remarks. I loved it! ❤️