Could the Demon Cult's Saintess Become the Immortal's White Moonlight?

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's three hundred rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Dong Zhuo, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of AK six times will kill him. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in the Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", showing Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character description is very good! Highly recommended!

This book is considered to be the best among the 100-word novels both in terms of characterization and plot. The more than 30 chapters it has published so far rank it first among the 100-word Tomato novels in my opinion. I only read a few chapters before putting her in the "Bianbai Peak" group on my bookshelf (all non-yandere ones, if you are interested, you can take a look 😳). The rest were all added after reading dozens of chapters, which shows how much this book appeals to me. (I published it twice to avoid typing hundreds of words in vain because I was banned from being reviewed by Shen He again.) This book makes the protagonist flesh and blood. What attracts me most is the character of the protagonist. This kind of character of "the world kisses me with pain, and I respond with songs 🥺" is simply the protagonist I have always envisioned in my mind [sending my heart]. Although in the eyes of many people this is their so-called "Madonna", I just like this kind of kind protagonist. Those grumpy guys who always call the protagonist "Madonna" should read novels in which the protagonist can only kill people. Don't bring disaster to the world, okay? [Put your lips] @ Author Jun, if someone scolds you in the future, please don't be affected 🥺, I have been scolded by them [cover my face]. In terms of plot, from the warm life of the protagonist as a child to the shattering of the "dream" later, from the cheerful and kind little lolita to the one who pretends to smile, uh... She is still a little loli (I just like little lolita [smile]), from the protagonist's redemption of the heroine when he was young to the two-way redemption of the heroine's redemption of the protagonist in the later part... Every bit of it touched me deeply, even if it was a bit scary [I almost cried], but the more it was cut, the more I loved watching it, I am really magical. I hope the author can write this book well [sending my heart]

I just like such delicate writing. The two female protagonists have very good personalities. Real men should watch Pure Love Lily [Learned]

Actually there is no big problem, I think the plot is okay, Because I was in the literary club in high school and college, I will mention some subjective content. Your descriptive power is a bit lacking, and your writing style is a bit lacking in quality. In the front, there is no part about the protagonist's family, and the writing is unrealistic. The parents are just like going through the motions with CG, and there is no description of the tragic situation before their death or the deep love for their daughter. It can be a certain action, a certain detail, or a scene description. However, such a major plot turning point is written without any waves, which is a pity. The protagonist's feelings of hatred, confusion, complexity, and numbness are not well expressed. In fact, if you plan this kind of scene, it is not difficult to describe it profoundly without running out of words. Another point is that I think details play a big role in the description of novels. For example, to show true love is not to say "love" repeatedly, but to be like Shi Tiesheng's mother, when she saw the paralyzed him sitting in front of the window sill and watching the falling leaves, she hurriedly blocked it and raised the topic; hate is not to say/think "I hate you the most, go to s" or the like, but the smile on the face does not reach the bottom of the eyes, the hatred is burning deep in the heart, the teeth are clenched, the fingers are holding the thigh and the blood is bleeding without knowing it... (An analogy is used to express emotions) If the emotion is not deep enough, the reader may not be able to relate to it, and some parts of the story will feel like a tower in the sky. I think that when writing important plots later that show strong psychological fluctuations, it should be detailed and detailed. In short, my point of view is that if it is a general urban novel, there is no need to write it like this. However, judging from the many well-written ancient fairy tales I have read, the writing skills and the combination of descriptive words can still greatly improve the look and feel and writing style. Of course, I just feel it is a pity. It is up to you to decide whether to adopt it or not. I am just a spectator, and the pen is not in my hand.

The narrative pace is reasonable and the writing style is acceptable. What is worth watching is the psychological change of the protagonist, that is, the darkening of the tag. The protagonist's background tone is kind and strong, but he chooses to turn dark when encountering changes. Looking forward to the development of the plot. I really like Xiao Jiang Wenxin, I hope it will have a good ending.

I knock it, it's super beautiful. I felt really bad after reading the previous dozens of chapters. Xiaojiang-chan obviously had such a beautiful and happy life, but everything disappeared overnight, and she embarked on a thorny road from then on. If Xiaomu-chan hadn't brought Xiaojiang-chan back to the sect later, I wouldn't dare to think about Xiaojiang-chan. He died in a small village, and it was so sweet when he was brought back to the sect. The interaction between the two was very interesting. Xiao Mujiang was also working hard to teach Xiaojiang Jiang to love herself. It seemed like she was raising a wife. Hey, hey, the more I read, the more I look forward to the follow-up plot. Good cheers for the author, I hope you will.

It's super beautiful, the writing is very good, the flow is flowing, and the plot progresses very smoothly! It gave me the feeling of reading fairy tales with female protagonists in the early years. Big cheers for the author, it's so awesome. Ps: Although not very moral, I like beauty, strength, misery, and deep suffering. It is delicious to have the whiteness that was once white turned black. Although it is sweet to be saved by the senior sister, the beauty is broken, the emotions are destroyed, and the decisive witch born from being forced into despair lives only for the remaining conscience and distant beauty. It is also very delicious (a little stomachache, but I think of the Demonic Survival Guide). In short, the author, please continue to [send love] and continue to follow up ❤️

Is this the latest update frequency? Is the author busy or running away? Unfortunately, I only noticed this book a few days ago. I passed by and read the reviews before and thought it was not good, so I stopped reading it because one of them said that the protagonist has a strong combat power and then the result is gone and he has to start over. The second thing is about the definition of "blackening". I have seen many people say that this book is not considered darkening. I think this term should be more subjective in ordinary people's understanding. Blackening, as I understand it, does not mean that the protagonist should kill people casually. The most important thing is not the standard of conduct but the changes in his character and thoughts from front to back. For example, in reality, a person who causes a car accident while driving and kills dozens of people goes from being a law-abiding citizen to killing a bunch of people. Is this considered darkening? It definitely doesn't count. As long as the mind hasn't changed, it doesn't count. The person who invented Gatlin indirectly caused the deaths of tens of millions of people in history, and he was just a normal doctor from beginning to end. From the very beginning, Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty dealt with state affairs seriously for the sake of the people, and finally indulged himself in political affairs all day long, and I think it should be counted here. He was already corrupt mentally. In the past, if he saw his old self, he would have scolded him, so I think the protagonist in this book should also be counted. The summary is that it's a pity that I discovered it too late. If the author releases a new book, I will read it again.

Go to the Heavenly Sword Sect and kill them all! --League of Legends

What can I say about this book? It is really well-written, especially the protagonist, whose IQ is above average. The other heroine is also very gentle, affectionate, and responsible. 🥺 🥺 🥺 I'm going to cry to death